The Outcast: Taking Over Chen Duo and Becoming a Gu Immortal in a Chaotic Age
一人之下：夺舍陈朵开始乱世蛊仙
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 485k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
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538Recommendations
8.7kFans
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Chen Duo is already in such a miserable state, and someone still manages to possess her body. It's truly tragic.
Ordinary people and superhumans are essentially no different. Children born to ordinary people may also be superhumans, meaning it's impossible to eradicate or isolate them. However, superhumans don't hold high positions of power. Unlike the hybrids in "Dragon Raja," who can even instigate world wars and control nations...
The theme is quite novel, but the fantasy characters are too autonomous, giving the impression of directly summoning real people. It's suggested that the protagonist's distraction and control of these characters be emphasized, and that their traits resemble the protagonist's cosplay or chuunibyou (adolescent delusions of grandeur). Otherwise, it feels like the protagonist inexplicably gains a summoning cheat.
Well, it's pretty cool, but the pacing is too fast, the protagonist's character is questionable, and there's so much inexplicable malice. What did the immortals do to you? The protagonist starts off practically invincible, getting whatever he wants. It feels like just daydreaming. This can't even be considered a novel. Maybe its satisfying moments just didn't resonate with me.
Fast forward to acquiring the Dual-Handed Weapon and upgrading it to a nano-Gu Worm, then unleashing a massive water pollution campaign that grants over 90% of the world's population the ability to cultivate Qi within a month. The Gu Worms can then devour the Qi cultivated by others to become stronger, directly ushering in a battle royale era.
After watching it, only two words came to mind: "QQ" 😅
I suggest revising the first chapter; how many people were scared away by it?
Why do immortals live so long? Animals normally only live for a few years or even a dozen years, but after becoming spirits, they can live for thousands of years, some even from the Zhou Dynasty to the present day... 😰
Okay, okay, let's burn the company to ashes.
The story is good and imaginative. But after watching it all night, I got discouraged by the deductions. Can't we just focus on telling a good story? Why are they constantly deducting points later on? I'm sick of it. I'm a guy, and I just can't take it anymore. Good luck, everyone, I'm leaving.