I Am a Villain, but It Does Not Affect My Investment in the Protagonist.

The first three chapters feel like the most important point. In your first sentence, you should clearly explain this kind of ancient fantasy environment. For example, you are on an antique bed in some other courtyard. Otherwise, the first impression this sentence gave me was like a modern city. The second point is that the elixir is too random and does not show the plot effect. Qipin said it would be given away, and the text emphasized the effect of the elixir. But the feedback readers need is the psychological changes in this woman. You can't give it away just as you say, but you should give it away in a bad and naughty way to appetize women. Then the woman gritted her teeth, feeling like she wanted to resist but still welcome. Only if the plot of your first three chapters meets these two points can it be considered a novel.

Golden Chapter 3 is so long-winded. I don't even dare to think about how confusing it will be later. I'll withdraw.