I Have a Dream Plane

Just keep writing, there will still be people who will read it.

I don't understand at all why the time traveler Pig's Knuckle keeps saying they are strange snakes even though it clearly says they go away like a dragon. Is he an aboriginal? Aren't you just a disgusting person with such an obvious sign?

The plot is a little bit toxic. Something started to go wrong when we go back in time.

The writing got a little messy around chapter 20.

Your writing style and the system you constructed are both good. To be honest, I came in based on the title of the book, but even if it wasn't behind-the-scenes, it still attracted me. But you also have a lot of problems. Since the protagonist doesn't know about dragons, why does he need to add a time traveler identity? Or maybe the protagonist doesn't know what a dragon is, why not mention it separately? If you don't explain clearly the strange snake, it will only make people feel irritated and make everyone think they are fools. There is also the issue of the cultivation system, which is sometimes strong and sometimes weak. Are dreams and reality really on the same level? You can cut down the third level with just a feather. In reality, the third level is invincible. Just looking at the expressiveness, in reality the third-level protagonist can't even touch his hair, so what if it's a fourth-level attack. Then there is the third-level garden, which the protagonist ate all over. As a result, the protagonist is still dangling from the starting point. He must have reached the first or second level at least. He is obviously trying to level up. The plot is confusing, and the time ability user appears inexplicably and too quickly. It would be much better if you wait until the plot in the academy is stable and lay down some foreshadowing before coming out.

The author earned 200 points by investing in it, and will reward the author with 100 points😋😋

This is not a behind-the-scenes stream. Those who stream behind the scenes can run away, and those who see the title can run away. It is not a world management stream. It does not use the dream plane to recruit others to work, or create a fourth natural disaster game. Or manage this plane or something, which is the traditional way of killing monsters and upgrading. Those who can run can run.

Going back in time is all about quitting, which means that authors who like to write this kind of plot don't have a plot outline, they just write whatever comes to mind, and then go back in time and rewrite it again.

Is anyone really paying attention? Those who commented that the plot was confusing were probably not RZ. Bookworms who have been reading it for more than ten years are full of praise for this book. So far, it is definitely at the level of food and is no worse than those written by great masters.

In Chapter 20, I just wanted to write about the time and so on, but I abandoned it in a mess. Goodbye.

After Chapter 20, the protagonist becomes a two-faced turtle.

Ah, after watching it for a long time, I realized that it was the main world of reincarnation 🙂. I thought it was the world where the protagonist went.

The author should write according to his own ideas. If he takes a long time and writes ten million words, more and more people will read it later. A bunch of trolls denying you in the comment area only shows that they are not intelligent enough or have ulterior motives. Just like I used to be very optimistic about a book, a bunch of people went to the comment area to say that the book was rubbish, with the purpose of suppressing the performance of the book. But a bunch of us readers supported him, and slowly the performance of the book got better and better. Now it has more than 10 million words. From the earliest few hundred people to now hundreds of thousands of people have read it. Come on, author, there are not many books that I can like from the starting point.

It made my head hurt when I read it, and the main character is so worried, and the author still writes about great suffering and deep hatred.

If you have time, copy and paste a few words about recommending books to other book review areas, and someone will read them. If you copy and paste it into the review section of tens of thousands of books to promote it, you are guaranteed to get a lot of people reading it.

The author is really great. I haven't read it since I traveled back in time to my childhood. This is contrary to what attracted me in the first place. Come on, author, it's too convoluted and brain-burning for no good.

Everything else is good, except that Su Shishi is a bit too chaotic. There is no need to impose such a character. Time backtracking is something I really don't understand. Also, the Eternal Pond is inexplicably missing one time.

Alas, one chapter a day, and the author is still a novice, how can it be attractive? Moreover, the plot can only be said to be too realistic, but it is not very attractive.

I read the novel after a long time, and my ranking is 25th. Your number is hopeless. In fact, your dream copy is about gods within gods, but your writing skills are very poor, and you still like to do such bad things. The main problem is that the writing in the later period is extremely vague. You should read it yourself You can find the problem. If you can't find the problem, there is nothing you can do. To be honest, this book is basically dead. There is no way. Your biggest problem now is to practice the proportions well, make your words clear, and then write your copy, which is your strong point, better and better, and slowly write down the settings clearly.

I bit the bullet and read four chapters, but I don't understand it at all. Do you want to save it?