Starting from Defecting to Konoha

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👴I have a doubt. I really don't want to wait for death in Konoha. Isn't it easy to accept a mission and fake death to escape? Why do they all like the drama of shouting "I'm ready to defect, come and catch me" to the Leaf Village in a big way? Do you think you are tired of living? 👴 Simply taking off your pants and farting is superfluous. If you really want to run away, there are many ways to run away. Take some missions out of the village with far away destinations, and pretend to be killed or captured by other villages on the way. First of all, you can't attract the attention of the village, because the protagonist is just a shrimp. Secondly, there is no need to carry a bounty on your back and worry about being exposed everywhere. I felt it was unsafe to be caught between several countries, so I went to a deserted island overseas for a lifetime.

In fact, there is no need to escape due to the strength of the protagonist. He knows what will happen next and can plan. Just solve it with those two people in advance. Even one of them can have a chance to breathe. The opportunity for high-level annihilation is not always available.

It's so funny. I thought it was Goldfinger when the kaleidoscope opened a small chaotic space. But Goldfinger turned out to be very weak inexplicably. I added more bloodline sharingan points to the kaleidoscope. You told me that the bloodline power is not enough and you will go crazy. The latest update is even more funny. Playing with alien tailed beasts, using illusions in order to enter the land of fire. Technique allows refugees to die? And a Kage level pretends to die, but Kage can't deceive a group of middle genin? I don't know who is disgusted by this plot. If you refuse to save someone, no one will say that you respect your personal destiny after all, but deliberately killing a group of people who have no resistance and have never offended the protagonist, it feels better than Tang San.

I quit in Chapter 1, defected, was being hunted but didn't kill Kakashi, and still smiled and said "we are not enemies", haha

The protagonist uses ninjutsu to fight Wudang and steal Wudang's martial arts? I always feel like watching Xiaotian to rob Chinese things 😅, especially the protagonist's name is in the style of Xiaotian, which is really a bit strange.

The combat power of Naruto's tailed beasts can destroy modern civilization. I think so. I wonder if readers can use modern technology to fight against tailed beasts.

Subjective - In terms of plot, there are currently two worlds, and I kind of want to mix the two worlds together. This kind of "fusion" is a bit low-level, and it is purely to serve the protagonist (a bit poisonous) Both worlds are group portraits, and the supporting characters are not full enough at present (the original party is very toxic) The protagonist has a low sense of substitution, has no sense of belonging to anything, is a bit selfish and not cool enough (little poisonous), the number of words is still small, You can look forward to it Objective - the character setting is too different from the original work, after all, the plot advances too fast The following plot will basically not have any original work, only some of the original work is left, some character ability settings, and world view settings That's it for now, summaryThe original party is very poisonous Ordinary peopleLittle Poison

This system is unnecessary. And the timeline is very messy. Are you here to prank me?

Raikage's untold secrets are directly put up for auction in the auction house

The protagonist is letting himself go more and more. I don't know whether it is influenced by the system or the kaleidoscope, and he is gradually developing towards perversion! !

The writing is not like a Naruto fanfic, but like a Brothel-ryu fanfic.

I can't read the rest of the story. All the characters have the same expression and roll their eyes. The protagonist has merged with the universe to become the God of Creation. He has to do all the bullshit by himself. Fighting is still a simple hand-to-hand fight, which makes him lose his temper. Stupid Pig is the protagonist. Don't subscribe, you'll regret it after you order.

Is the timeline correct? The clan was exterminated right after Namikaze Minato died.