Enlightenment Is Extraordinary, the Other Side of the World

The writing is okay, but the plot conflict is too blunt. It's a cool article template.

Invincible flow solipsistic novel The keywords I gave: God in the world, solipsism, detachment from human nature, fun person, game world, chaotic neutrality, human possibility. I have read two self-centered novels. A certain secular powerful man hides behind the scenes and uses secular rules to embarrass the protagonist. The protagonist directly cheats and turns him into a pug 🐶 and a frog 🐸. . . "World Modification System" "I'm really not Jingle Cat" "I, the only superpower on Earth" "Take the town back to prehistory" "Little Players from Another World" "This Superman is too much like a native of the motherland" "From Mutants to Dimensional Demons" "Niu Xiaodun's Coffin Board" "Travelers Across the Animation World" "God's Manual" "What is it like to be summoned as a giant" "My World of Giants" "Go and create the world" "Urban Sims" "Staying in the Portable Space" "This Immortal is a Little Bit Dirty" "Protector of the Earth" "Magic Prop Master" "Non-Human Gene Integration" "Surviving the Doomsday: Minecraft" "Super Divine Refining" "The Supreme Secret Order" "My Divine Clone" "Mythic Invasion" "The Demonic Transformation of the Tang Dynasty" "The Law of the Insect Swarm" "The Book of Alien Worlds" "My Summons Do Not Listen to My Commands" "Stealing Dreams of All Humanity" "Ivan the Master" "Parasite" "Infinite Arms Maniac" "My Private Planet" "Technology Super King" "Plane Blazer" "Goldfinger Seller" "It's better to be a monster in the mountains "I Weave Destiny in Parallel Time and Space" "The System of Mountains and Rivers" "From Chief to Captain" "I'm Cheating in All Worlds" "The Only Player on Earth" "Low Dimensional Game" "The Only One in the Heavens" "Wild Crossing the New World" World" "Skill Generator" "Magic Academy in the Film and Television World" "Those who do whatever they want" "Preaching Simulator that started from abortion" "I am the source of strangeness" "I am immortal in the world of cultivating immortals" The last copy "I have many substitutes" "Heavens, everything starts with copying" "A different world starting from MC" "I opened the gate of heaven in the Great Song Dynasty" "This Northern Song Dynasty is a bit weird" can be done in the early and mid-term "Crooked your technology tree" "Magic magic? Technique? "Master" I have been reading books for so many years, a strong power system. ●There is such a protagonist. The concepts of heaven, material, earth treasures, skills, magic weapons, props, etc. Are all illusory and useless to the protagonist. The external existence cannot harm or benefit the protagonist. The only price for the protagonist to become stronger is to awaken or lose me. . . From "Go and Create the World" ●There is such a protagonist, the eternal state caused by the blood lock, everything is set, edited and searched, and those infinite beings who practice detachment, who is stronger and who is weaker? From "World Modification System" ●There is such a protagonist, everything is information, everything is setting editing. From "Non-Human Gene Complex" ●There is such a protagonist, the setting editor describes all kinds of boasts, the transcendent, the unified, the perfect, the awakened, the real only exist outside the story ending and the story, and people are just watching the mainstream plot. . . From "The Magical Prop Master" Magic and superpowers, contained objects, gods and Buddhas.

It's OK to have a single heroine or no heroine. Such interesting novels are so rare. If there is a harem, please tell me. I will retreat first, otherwise it will be like a small world and suddenly a harem will appear. I will feel uncomfortable for several days 😭😭😭

It's toxic and unreasonable. In the world of martial arts, if you take two moves with a tiger, you will become an immortal and the immortal will not stop shouting. He is still the son of some kind of director. None of the rich men practice martial arts? A world where the world view is unreasonable and a great master can force a country to retreat.

How should I put it? The first few chapters were really well written, but after I came out of the mountain, I started to pretend to be a saint all the way. In my opinion, novels are actually about telling stories, and small stories are strung together into a long story. However, the author followed this with people appearing in front of others, which made me feel very boring.

After reading the beginning, is this a variant of the Bingou-ryu from ancient times? What kind of Taoist priest from the mountain comes down from the mountain to show off?

The writing is good, but the plot is hard to explain. I couldn't stand it after reading the beginning. I can guess the rest of the plot without reading. Am I sick? This plot is too old. I'd say it's bloody. No, it's not. He's a bit bloody. It's uncomfortable to watch.

A student gave one million to his parents. His family is as stable as a rock. Is your family a billionaire? This is not written well.

Add classical Chinese to the vernacular, and copy the cat and the tiger. In the ordinary world and the parallel warrior story, the protagonist begins to show off and develops another system of changing names. . Vomited

This book is the author's first book. No matter how good or bad the results are, he will insist on finishing it and it will not be unfinished. I hope that friends who have collected it can follow it and subscribe to it. Thank you!

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After reading some, the writing is okay, I feel the plot is moving in a weird way, Like a dragon or a snake? Any advice? Mountains and rivers? , You can learn from it when writing First follow the path of others, learn as you go, and then write your own stuff.

The first chapter is very good, the second chapter is cliche, and the third chapter is boring. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I basically understand it. It uses the same old techniques and the plot is a familiar plot. It is the kind of plot that has been read thousands of times. There is nothing new. Otherwise, it is a good book.

Logical thinking is confusing and inconsistent

It's so contradictory. One moment he makes a fuss, and the next moment he says, "This is public knowledge, and you call me a god or something."

Is this Zhutianliu? If it's Zhu Tianliu, I'll vote.

I thought the first chapter was pretty good, the second chapter was just average, and the fourth chapter was a bit overwhelming. It had the flavor of urban cool writing about masters and warrior kings.

The new book "The Evil Spirit Resurrects, I am the Lord of the Yin World" has reached 30,000 words. It is a weird folklore novel about cultivating immortals. If you are interested, you can support me and give the author a follow-up reading Introduction: When the afterglow of the setting sun is about to dissipate, the sky changes again, and the ghosts and gods who have been silent in the ancient years are gradually awakening. Myth and reality are intertwined, and the underworld and the yang world overlap. The dormant evil spirits are secretly watching, ready to move; the gods and Buddhas in the temples are silent and indifferent to all living beings. The appearance of the ghost world everywhere makes the taboos passed down by mouth and the lost ancient skills shine again. Human bone pen, crow blood, depicts green and red to thorn ghosts and gods, life is anointed with life to make a lamp. Visitors from the underworld, people carrying corpses, carrying evil spirits on their shoulders into the house of underworld, it is difficult to survive unless the horoscope is firm. A human face cries, a ghost face smiles, the debts of makeup and paint cannot be escaped, and the evil fate of wedding clothes disappears. …… The corpse disintegrates, returns from the dead, overcomes the evil spirits, and attains immortality! When Yin Changsheng sat up again from the coffin, holding half a book of the underworld, he looked at the demons and ghosts all over the world, with a creepy smile on his face.

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