There Are Always Fairies Plotting Against Me

The template is very common, and various heroines rush to copy it because of the protagonist's halo, but the author's driving is good, and he also has a different approach. After all, the god is the B point of the bag, and the gun is smeared with poison to retaliate. As well as raising the old Master Siji who suddenly has a bad attitude towards being a teacher, it depends on how the author sets up the characters of the heroines in the future. At present, the characters are quite thin. Once they are established, you can start to look forward to the Shura Field. I want to see a river of blood!

The following evaluation is mainly based on Hou Gong Wen. Disadvantages: 1. The plot of cultivating immortals is sparse, but the world view is still clear, but the meat is rich and delicate! This author successfully made me fall in love with white silk and jade feet. 2. Some of the names in it remind me of bad things. But the surnames are similar. Advantages: 1. The anti-depressive scene is done to the extreme. The heroine keeps a distance from the objects she comes into contact with or the opposite sex around her. Hope the author continues to do so. 2. There are no meaningless plots written for excitement, and there are no disgusting villains. 3. There is no meaningless male supporting role. 4. The writing style is smooth and delicate, without any sense of deliberately showing off skills. 5. There are various XPs and full characters! It's the kind where many characters are brought to life. The following content is for some readers: 1. Why should the leaked girl be portrayed? It has nothing to do with the male protagonist. She is either a Taoist friend or a villain. The male protagonist is not ambiguous with her and doesn't like her. If he doesn't like her, he will kill her. If he doesn't like her, he just doesn't like her. 2. It is recommended that you evaluate it after reading it. You will feel frustrated in the early stage, but this is a male-strong novel. The male protagonist is very powerful in the back, but he is not overly strong emotionally. Finally, I give him the award for my favorite harem novel I encountered in 2024. I hope the author will continue to do so, and I also wish the author better success. The first day of rebooting!

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Not everyone has read this book and the previous one I have read 251 of this book, and I haven't even finished the free chapter of the previous one The previous book was opened too far ago, so I won't comment on it. The previous book is well written, and the free chapter describes the world view and characters. Lei Quan avoided it all, and the description of the characters is quite sexy But I found that the biggest problem is that the characters like to hide and don't say anything about themselves, which leads to a series of misunderstandings. The most obvious one in this book is the main plot of Xiao Palace. The development depends entirely on misunderstandings. In the end, I got it. I didn't express my thoughts even though I was bleeding, so I hastily moved on to the next stage. What I saw in my reaction was that I was very annoyed and aggrieved. I kept silent on things that could be clearly explained in a few words. I thought about random things and finally didn't think to ask. After it was over, I thought about going to the teacher. Fu Xian should not be hiding anymore, but it turned out that he started hiding because of the question of Palace Master Xiao. The master was obviously a very straightforward person from the beginning (in my opinion), and if he liked the apprentice, he would directly drag him into the room. Why couldn't the master directly ask if he liked Palace Master Xiao? I just returned it It was the same with the previous book. It started in the free chapter. Senior Xia's venomous tongue was taught to her by her grandma. She thought the protagonist liked it, and it has been like this ever since. The protagonist asked him not to be arrogant and arrogant, but she put her mind to it and thought the protagonist was talking sarcastically. She "thought" the protagonist still liked him 😅. I will not read it before telling me when the senior will become normal One more thing, I don't know why Palace Master Xiao's line is so urgent. The protagonist is just greedy for her body and has no other feelings at all, but just let them do it. Anyway, I think the protagonist is a pure thoroughbred. Even if you take blood, you still can't see any feelings I won't say much else. There are so many anecdotes, the characters cannot see growth, and there are many problems. I even think that except for the meaty ones, I don't need to read anything else

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Author, I suggest you write this kind of daily plot, just write about daily life without writing anything else. In the past, after all, your previous style was to write this kind of daily life. Then for emotional dramas, you directly change your style. Your readers may not be able to adapt to it. The main thing is to stick to this daily life.

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The Eleventh Realm of the Human Race ​Qi Refining Period ​Returning to the Yuan Period ​Elixir Condensation Period ​Yun Dao Period Real Person ​Sinzhao Period Zhenjun ​Tongsheng Period Saint ​Hedao Period ​Du Tribulation period God's arrival period Immortal ​God's hidden period ​Transcendence period Five realms of sword cultivation and sword intention Sword heart is clear Mirror stills water Breaking realm artistic conception Original artistic conception Heavenly Sword Artistic Realm Alchemist Realm Getting Started Apprenticeship First Grade Second Grade Third Grade Fourth Grade Fifth Grade Sixth Grade Seventh Rank Eighth Rank Ninth Rank Monster Clan Realm Demon Spirit (Qi Refining) Huang Jie (Guiyuan) Xuan Jie (Elixir Condensation) Earth Jie (Yundao) Demon General of the Heavenly Level (Zhenjun of the Si Zhao period) Demon King (Saint of the Tongsheng Period) Demon Lord (Hedao) Demon Emperor (Transcending Tribulation) Demon Emperor (Immortal of the Divine Advent Period) Demon Saint (Shen Yin) Dongtian Level White Mist Dao Level Purple Cloud Immortal Level Blue Sea Emperor Level Golden Whirlpool Supreme Level Red Vortex Saint Level Dao Palace Nine Stars (actually the Beidou Nine Stars, seven appearing and two hidden) Tianshu Star (White Water Greedy Wolf) Tianxuan Star (Black Earth Giant Gate) Tianji Star (Bimu Lucun) Tianquan Star (Green Wood Wenqu) Yuheng Star (Loess Lianzhen) Kaiyang Star (White Jinwuqu) Yaoguangxing (Red Gold Pojun) is the star Dongxing (Baitu Zuofu) Yinyuanxing (Purple Fire Youbi) is the dark star Space perception realm (tenth level) First level Distorted Space Fifth Floor Mustard Seed Xumi Sixth Floor Space Storm Tenth Floor Creation

- Theme: Xianxia, ​​harem Main characters Male protagonist - Lu Jinan - Background: Reincarnated in Yunding Continent for twenty years, now the Holy Son of Wandao Sect, the youngest monk in the late stage of Tongsheng Realm in the human race, and in the middle stage of Hedao Realm. - Characteristics: Calm and restrained, smart and wise, pursuing a free and transcendent realm. The heroine - Zhu Nazhi - Identity: Saint of Qingmiao Palace, with a Immaculate Immortal Body. - Personality: Possessive (disease J attribute), gentle and virtuous. - Mu Qingyue - Identity: Wandao Sect Mu Sword Immortal, adopted daughter of Pei Wanyu. - Personality: Aloof and taciturn, possessive, and possessive. - Pei Wanyu - Identity: Deputy Sect Leader of Wandao Sect, Huang Clan. - Personality: Charming, gentle and considerate, occasionally sinister. - Xiao Yinruo - Identity: Palace Master of Qingmiao Palace. - Personality: cool, noble, elegant, gentle and kind. - Lu Yunzhu - Identity: Lu Jinan's adopted sister. - Personality: Domineering, controlling, cold on the outside and hot on the inside. - Qiu Qingtang - Identity: Demon King of Qingqiu Fox Clan. - Personality: Pure and cute on the outside, talkative on the inside, and a bit naturally stupid. - Dongfang Xinglan - Identity: The eldest princess of the Eastern Dynasty. - Personality: Calm and rational, decisive and responsible. - Juyu - Identity: Daughter of the leader of the Qinglong clan. - Personality: Innocent and simple, cowardly and greedy. Plot and writing - Plot: A+ - Writing: A- - Speed: S- - Emotion: A- - Characterization: A+ - Novelty: B+ - Depressiveness: C - Overall rating: A+ (Borrowed from Qingfengsaoshu to summarize)

The author still has time to switch to a female protagonist, and the writing is very good, but as long as one female protagonist is left, such as Code Girl, the other female protagonists can be downgraded to female supporting characters, and then these original female protagonists can be teamed up with other male supporting characters, and a lot of plots can also be expanded. Group portraits are also very popular. After all, you are a small author who wants to make money. The market for multiple female protagonists is not as big as the market for single female protagonists. I hope the author will consider it carefully. ☝🏻️🤓

The introduction has been deleted, this is the full version The sickly saint wants to make me into a sword spirit; the master wants me to be a traitor; The blindfolded sword fairy sister wants me to be a slave; the vixen in Qingqiu wants to have a hundred children; The little dragon lady always drools at me; the princess wants to raise me in a deep palace; When I was a child, I was coaxed to eat up by a bad sister in the family... Obviously I just want to become a fairy, but why do they always want to do evil things to me! ? A few years later, someone asked Lu Jinan what kind of Taoist heart supported you to get to where you are now? Lu Jinan glanced at his charming wives and sighed: "I just want freedom."

The most attractive part of this article is the female characters, each of whom has their own unique characteristics, as shown in the introduction. This is where the attraction lies. But the plot problem is still relatively big. The first is that the Riddler is forced, the character's motivations are unclear, the speech is cloudy, and the foreshadowing is too blunt, and it is difficult for readers to understand what the characters in the play are doing and what the core point of the conflict is, which weakens the desire to continue reading. Secondly, there are too many "borrowings" in some plots, and the jokes should be moderated. For example, it borrows from "I Level Up Alone" and borrows from the movie "The Final Battle". Personally, I feel that it is okay to recite one or two lines, but the borrowing of the whole paragraph is too low.

Summary: 24W updated, 54204 away from target, 54775 words missing, about 11W in total, 24-11=13, daily average 130000/30=4333.3🙂 9.1 5214+5018=10232 9.2 5237+5026=10263 9.3 5080+5050=10130 9.4 10248 9.5 5088+5215=10303 9.6 10058 9.7 10088 9.8 10215 9.9 10081 9.10 10098 9.11 10269 9.12 10213 9.13 10204 9.14 10233 9.15 10293 9.16 4045 9.17 4100 9.18 8242 9.19 4409 9.20 10338 9.21 4256 9.22 4437 9.23 5235 9.24 8458 9.25 5261 9.26 8217 9.27 7093 9.28 6100 9.29 8034 9.30 4643

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After reading two books by the author, I found one characteristic. They only focus on whether the female protagonist likes the male protagonist, and basically don't mention how she fell in love with the male protagonist. Especially in the last book, she pursues him just because he can solve misfortune. It is purely based on lust and inducement.

The author still has time to switch to a female protagonist, and the writing is very good, but as long as one female protagonist is left, for example, sister Lu Yunzhu, the other female protagonists can be downgraded to female supporting characters, and then these original female protagonists can be teamed up with other male supporting characters, and a lot of plots can be expanded. Group portraits are also very popular. After all, you are a small author who wants to make money. The market for multiple female protagonists is not as big as the market for single female protagonists. I hope the author will consider it carefully.

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This book is too hard, just read it and cherish it

It's really a book worth revisiting over and over again. Unfortunately, the character of the fox is not that outstanding, and the subsequent plot is a bit rushed. I hope there will be a few extra chapters to complete it.

Personally I think it looks very good, I highly recommend it.

That fox is really annoying. The last few pictures where he pretended to be controlled really made me feel physically uncomfortable.

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I want to join my senior's group, what should I do now? It's the first book. It's so hard to fall in love with my senior. I want to join the extra group.