Game for All: from Establishing a Family to the Kingdom of Nature

The author wrote a lot at first, but you didn't explain the reasons at all. How do I know why the protagonist wants to build a family? What are the benefits of building this family, and what is his inner driving force? Including talking about character cards and all kinds of things right from the beginning. It is never explained, and it is assumed that we readers all know it. Anyway, the more we read, the more excited we become. If it doesn't work, the author should think about it carefully and repost it if it's time to do so.

After reading it for a long time, I don't understand at all what kind of garbage you wrote about the three golden pieces here? The donkey's words are completely different from the horse's, and nothing is explained clearly. The power system and the world are all written in a mess, which is worse than a running account.

After writing so many chapters, I found that you never quite match your own skill list to form a skill chain! Why bother if you have to wait until something is missing? If you have a golden finger, it will not work well. You will always write with a hammer here and a hammer here and there. There are many scenes, but what is the use? There is no obvious improvement to one's own strength. The same goes for families. There is no one who arranges for relatives to perform their own duties. They all work in a swarm. Thinking that one by one, such a family can become a natural kingdom, it is really a pig's foot. A good subject is written like this without any planning. It's really yours 👍👍

What are the poisonous points? Or you can't tell the poisonous points, because you don't know what the author wants to write. The order is the order in which the protagonist gets it, but there is no explanation of the background of the NPC, and the setting is not written. I don't even know what I wrote O_o, best friend 2 has been sprayed like this, how dare you?

Is there anything similar to the setting of this book? It's not enough.

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There are no settings at all. Just watching him level up is the same as playing. You don't think it's an online game. Key online games have data. Your character has no experience points. Just watch him level up there. It feels so awkward...

The writing is quite good, and it gets better and better. The author's thinking is very out-of-the-box, unconstrained and unconventional. However, the first few chapters are too jumpy and have a sense of a pop-conscious novel. Many readers can't understand it, and naturally they can't stand it (mainly in the first few chapters). You want to deal with it first, then suppress it, but the plot setting itself has some flaws. But the further you read, the more attractive it becomes. It is not as procedural as many other books. Highly recommend this book!

It's a bit confusing to read. There are many settings that the author knows about but didn't write them down for us to see.

Very novel and imaginative setting, good

The worldview is imperfect and the career system is too complicated! One moment, this world, another moment, that profession, it makes my head hurt to look at it.

The more you write, the better. I'm optimistic about you.

Sometimes it feels like it's not fully written. I don't know how the scene will develop, so I jump to the next event scene. I only know how things will end up. It feels a bit like an outline...

The author can write that everyone travels to a family that cultivates immortality, and everyone starts from a family that practices Qi.

Isn't this book about fighting against the game world? How does it feel now? It feels like fighting against the original world.

It was originally written in a pleasant way, but then it became more and more frustrating.

When writing new things, you should have a goal, such as what others have revealed or entrusted, and then unfold it step by step. For things like family or power, you must click first and then slowly add settings. This is much better than making an unreasonable operation when your current readers don't understand the foreshadowing and benefit goals. You don't need to write out all the settings at once. There must be at least one reason! Just make up for it later. It's a good thing that you don't want to be verbose, but you have also omitted the necessary conditions to achieve the goal. Without the process, this article will be flawed.

If you cut the book, could you please say something? It's so painful to wait like this all the time

Cousin, I am the Sinking Demon, I have come out 😌

Oh my God, it's been updated. The author can stand it and must support it.

😢😢😢 I subscribed to 300 chapters and couldn't stand it until I saw chapter 180. . . . However, it looked quite good before it was put on the shelves, but later I felt that some of it was too wordy and some of it was too poisonous. . . Anyway, I feel that the Green Leaf Village is quite a trap. It is blocked by several gang players every day, and they are surrounded and killed, but they are not killed. Later, the players come to the protagonist and say, "If you don't give us villager status, I will make trouble while you are guarding the village. The protagonist has no way to do it, so he can only give in." Also, the upgrade is too slow. The experience is all spent on skills. The level itself is basically not upgraded. The experience of the family members is all used up, and the protagonist loses skills. To advance to level 10, you will directly change jobs. When advancing from level 1 to level 2, it will be completely normal difficulty and become hell difficulty. With that posture, civilians cannot advance at all. Even if there is an opportunity, it is useless if you don't fail, because without the background, you can't see the good cards until you reach the level, and there is no way to talk about the accumulation of the reality itself.

Come on, author! This book suits me very well

I hope my writing will get better and better. Support

The writing is very good, the subject matter is also very novel, a seed of fire. Please continue.

Did the author stop writing? Please tell me if I want to cut it off, I've been waiting so hard.

Why don't you write anymore