Naruto: Team 7 Episode 2

What is this Li? Time traveler? So disgusting to hang out with Danzo. He said he cared about Naruto, but he sold him out with his backhand.

What can these three do if they go back in time? Sakura's Yin seal will take time. Sasuke knows that there will be no big mood swings in the future. The Sharingan is almost useless and Naruto will talk nonsense everywhere.

I don't understand what it means to have a younger sister. The Minatos sealed the Nine Tails and sent them away. How can a younger sister be born?

The subject matter is good, but an original character must be poisoned

The first chapter is difficult. Naruto, who has been reborn after being sealed, cannot enter the sealed space to see Kyuubi 😥. The easiest thing for the three of them to be reborn is Naruto Go to Kyuubi, bump fists, share memories, and then the Sennin Jinming is done. At this stage, he is one of the most powerful ninjas in the world.

It stands to reason that now Naruto can directly become a perfect Jinchuuriki. Doesn't this directly tear Danzo to pieces? What are you still doing here?

Every time I want to open my hand, this girl tells me to put my hand down again

The writing style is relatively immature, the original character Uzumaki Rei is a failure, and the three great ninjas did not show the abilities of their previous lives (neither their minds, methods of dealing with things, nor their strength, they are like shells with no memory). But the idea is very good, but the only thing that makes me feel good is this idea

Overall, it's actually not a big problem, not as serious as the comment section says. But the author will not avoid the poisonous points, the negative impact is too great. Naruto used chakra communication to tell the plot to the original characters. This is a small point of sharing cheats. If the original characters are charming in writing, it is not a big problem. But later on, the original character passed on information to Danzo, which was very poisonous. Although judging from the subsequent plot, he did not reveal everything but had his own plan, and it seemed that he was just using Danzo. But from the description, it seems that the protagonist was sold by Danzo's brainwashed spy at the beginning. If you want to retain readers, you should add more hints here. Naruto fan readers are naturally disgusted with Danzo and Nebe, so it's not appropriate to write about wanting to advance but then suppressing.

It's outrageous that Sasuke didn't think of a way to kill Danzo after these three rebirths. Naruto and Danzo are not familiar with each other. If Sasuke really wants to fuck him with the bond of fire, it would be great if he doesn't give him a buff to help him get Danzo. Everyone seems to have been forced to reason.

That sister setting is simply invincible. After reading the memory, she helped indirectly kill her father's enemy. That's awesome. Knowing his brother's experience, he sold it to Danzo backhand. It's disgusting. I can't stand it. Also, after these three times, I always feel like my brain is not fully developed. But the setting is okay, keep going!

Compared with the writing style of novel websites, the style of this article is more like the fan fiction of Old Ford and Tieba. This kind of fan fiction is more concerned about whether the character is OOC than being cool and popular Although the role of sister is not very likable except for providing strength to the seventh class, I like everything else, and I don't need money now.

For Naruto fans, if you want to attract readers, I personally feel that the more miserable Danzo is, the better. It is definitely not decent. The more depressed Danzo is, the more attractive he is to this kind of story.

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