Taoist Master of Immortality Begins as a Butcher

I still prefer your first book "Immortality Begins with Orion", which is refreshing from the sick man growing up step by step. However, in the middle and late stages of writing, the "becoming stronger" that I expected to see began to become abstract, and then I couldn't read it anymore. Many novels start before the end and end at the end. Personally, I feel that neither the Demon nor the Butcher is as good-looking as the Orion. In fact, in Orion, you can see that the setting of the combat power value is quite good. Maybe you should stick to the direction of making your own fortune like Tiancan Tudou. He is also a cow in a cocoon that started out as a traditional fantasy. His most successful book is "Wu Ji Tian Xia". This great master has constantly failed in innovation and challenges. He has published two books in the past few years. He didn't know that what his old readers wanted to read was actually the second and third parts of "Wu Ji Tian Xia". It is not unreasonable that Douluo Dalu's Douluo Dalu's Douluo 5-part series can be successful to this day.

Thanks.

It's a pity that the devil and the butcher are gone. The comments I left before may have been a bit self-righteous. I feel very embarrassed to comment so arrogantly without paying to read your book. When I find a book that I can read, I get used to paying attention to other works of this author. I am half a book friend since "Immortality Begins with Orion". The reason why it is half is because it is a pirated version. I'm sorry that I don't have any actual support for your book, because I don't have a job yet and I don't have a regular income, so I hope you can be considerate. If you can't support the financial field, then support the personal field. However, if the book is really good, I am willing to spend money to read the original version. At the starting point, I spent money to read no more than five books, and I would like to mention two masterpieces. One is "This Game is Too Real", which deserves the five-star honor, and the other "I am Eternal in the World of Immortal Cultivation", which is too slow to update, has cultivated my awareness of paying for books. My evaluation of books is divided into four levels Shit among shit (poorly written but with good results, the representative work is "Bare Heart Patrol", which is number one in the Xianxia rankings. I will criticize this book by name in the comment area where I like every book. It may be a matter of taste, I think a bunch of books on Qidian's five-star honor list are all The morality is not matched. Seeing that these books have better results than the books I like, I really want to scold them) Trash (it looks boring, there are many obvious flaws, and I can't read it after turning a few chapters. Trash and shit, I don't even bother to search for pirated copies) It's okay (it looks okay, but I don't have a high desire to pay, Xi I am used to waiting to see pirated copies. The representative work "Immortality Begins with Orion". Because of the different audiences, the comments section of this type of work has mixed reviews, some are supportive, and some are critical) Excellent work (very good-looking, there is an urgent desire to read it, and I am willing to pay for it. The representative work is "This game is too real", "I'm here" The book reviews of the former are all positive, while the reviews of the latter are all criticizing the one who is slow to update) In my mind, at least Orion is better-looking than the book "The World of Immortal Cultivation Everlasting". At this level, your book has already beaten the top three books in the monthly ticket list and the first book in the fairy tale list. I am not happy at all

The PK mechanism kills many potential fairy grasses, and some books are slow-heating. It is difficult for a poor family to produce a noble son, and how many are lost along the way?

Author, will there be a female protagonist? 😰

If you try hot-selling products over and over again, the road will almost be cut off.

If you have saved the manuscript, update it 😡 If not, write it quickly 😫😫😫

Well written, please vote for me. Come on come on.

The author must maintain the rhythm and mystery of the early stage like a demon. In the later stage of Demon, the protagonist is too fierce and there is no pressure to fight anything. I feel that I can refer to the way of describing bosses like Mysterious Resurrection.

The writing is illogical. What kind of dog monster is that? If a monster dog eats people, then there must be parts of the monster that can be eaten. Otherwise, the monster can only eat people, and the monster has no edible parts or can be used as the essence of martial arts, so who would kill the monster? ? ?

Author, please calm down and write the outline before starting again. If you practice it twice and the third time, it is still the same. It is really blocked.

Don't rush and take your time 🤓

Now that the pig's feet are attached, don't grind them and restrict the growth of the pig's feet.

Here we go, open Shuangwen, don't press too hard

Not bad, good looking.

You guys should just write the kind of rude essays you are good at. There are too many such rude essays now.

My comment was deleted. This is quite outrageous. I don't even know what comment I posted was deleted 😅

If everyone cheats together, it means that no one has cheated.