My Brother Can't Be an Evil Fallen Magical Girl

It has changed from Magical Girls vs. Abyss to the Violet Cup Chicken Eating Contest.

Please avoid spoilers as appropriate. The early plot has no depth. The protagonist is a two-faced person who considers himself a human being. The writing focuses on daily life, which is light-hearted and cheerful. There is no description of the protagonist's psychology. To be precise, there is no mention of his mentality towards the sins he committed when he was a magic princess. This is deliberately avoided by the author. If you think about it carefully, you will find that the protagonist is horribly indifferent. He only cares about people related to him. He is a refined egoist and a hypocrite. This creates a logical conflict and opposition in the positive portrayal of the protagonist, making the protagonist hypocritical, unable to establish his image, and unable to deepen the concept of the work. Of course, if you avoid these questions and don't delve into the dark points buried under the plot of Zi Gongxiang, then the article is still good. The author can handle the relationship between the characters very well and the distortion caused by the different attitudes of the protagonists towards their cherished objects under different vests and different positions. This is what readers are happy to see. The following plot feels a bit fragmented, or in other words, the author is forcing the plot. In the first few chapters, he is still teasing his sister-in-law easily, but in the next few chapters, he directly releases Ya Lusi and makes himself fall evil. The consciousness belonging to Teacher Xiaobai dissipates, leaving only a trace of parasitism in Mo Ji. Here, note that from here on, Teacher Xiaobai and Mo Ji are cut off, and Mo Ji's consciousness needs the help of the evil god descended from the sky (complain in a low voice, this evil god is not very good, basically giving it to the protagonist for nothing), but the consciousness of the Lord of the Abyss from the holy relic has the upper hand. So is this so-called teacher Xiaobai still? Will her interactions with Platycodon and Pothos still have a sense of distortion based on two standpoints? The answer is obvious. Teacher Xiaobai was bullied. I felt very uncomfortable when I saw this, because the author clearly had a better choice. When the author mentioned that the evil god was far greater than the Lord of the Abyss, I was still guessing that the plot would develop to the point where Teacher Xiaobai would work together as the Magic Girl and Platycodon to uncover the mystery of the World Tree. Release the evil god or become a higher being to get rid of the influence of the holy relics of the abyss, so that you can become Bai Yuze again instead of another personality spawned by the abyss. The overall writing style has also become bloody. I feel that the article is probably broken, and it is difficult to understand the true meaning.

There are conflicts between magical girls and ordinary people, conflicts between weirdos and magical girls, conflicts between weirdos and witches, and various class conflicts, as well as conflicts between the people of the abyss and the people of the earth, the contradiction between abyss imperialism and humanism, and so on. But the main contradiction is the contradiction between abyssal imperialism and humanism. If the contradiction is not alleviated, the book is destined to end in tragedy, but as Chairman Mao Zedong said: "Contradiction is movement, it is things, it is process, it is thought." Contradictions can move, and the protagonist needs to take the initiative to make changes to benefit. Use his advantage to change the minds of the people of the Abyss to advocate peace and develop a mechanism to live in harmony. For example, before, the Abyss Demonic Touch only absorbed negative emotions and did not harm people's lives. It is also necessary to grasp the contradiction between the Demon Girl and the Lord of the Abyss to unite the Demon Girl. Otherwise, the contradiction will be difficult to ease and tragedy will be destined to occur. 😠

Author, remember to kick me when the male protagonist bewitches his sister and wants to create a world with a sister

The author will definitely support you when I get rich. ❤️ Ahem, for some reasons I don't want to watch it here. I like the daily routine of this book very much. The following are personal opinions for reference only. I think the details of many characters are very good, especially Teacher Xiaobai and Seri-chan. I feel that there are actually some deficiencies in the portrayal of battles and when characters experience life and death. It would be better if some emotions are expressed. The necessary conflicts in the novel may not require too intense language conflicts. The comfortable dialogue of the characters is not only an advantage of this book over many novels, but also room for improvement. There are some conversations between Lotus and her sister. Thank you Iris for being my mouth substitute. Lianhua's experience may have doomed her to a slight psychological distortion and a bit of meanness. And it will be led by public opinion. I don't think my sister has grown up under the malicious comments of others. The departure of her parents and brother, public opinion's ill will toward her and the former teacher Xiaobai. It doesn't make them grow. Public opinion that is guided, manipulated, distorted, smeared and expanded by lies will always be the darkest abyss rooted in people's hearts in history. Maybe her brother's solution to the sacred relics and Qiangen Yama's affairs made her grow even more, right? I think what can make people grow the most is to say and do things with good intentions, and others to stop communicating with her with good intentions, which makes her feel better (in fact, this idea includes things that I can't think about and overcome now) After I developed feelings for Teacher Xiaobai, I didn't want to see Zixuan get what she wanted. Although I also like this Qingmei who constantly acts as an undercover agent at critical moments, but I feel like she is really brainwashing PUA Xiaobai unconsciously. Regarding the conclusion that the protagonist came to in a certain paragraph, the comment I saw at the time was that it was only then that he seemed to have truly fallen into evil. In fact, I guessed Yuanluo's identity very early on, and I was very close to the correct answer at that time, but I didn't think of the possibility of parallel worlds. As for Xiaobai's physical and mental reactions when the answer to the mystery was revealed, I felt a bit off. Teacher Xiaobai is in a new state now, social death has reached a certain level, and he seems to want to die physically directly instead of remaining innocent in the world. Speaking of which, the presence of the little witch Fei Yue is a bit low. Speaking of which, whether she appears or not seems to be a way to distinguish whether the overall plot development of the paragraph is comedy or tragedy? The white cat may also consider returning in the future, the interaction with Slusha is too cute. I also agree with another book friend's idea. I want to see Violet being pressed on the leg by Seri-chan and giving her a hard lesson with her big visible hands. The biggest advantage of this article is actually that there will be no narration in the text to evaluate other characters from the perspective of the author or, rarely, a certain character. Thank you to the author for writing this book with such care. To describe it, it is a very, very delicious dessert to me. Sometimes I really don't want it to become popular, I don't want to see malicious comments, and I want to eat it alone. I really want the author to write this novel for the rest of his life, but I also want the book to be stopped and the author to have an accident (doge). I don't want to see the day when the story becomes less delicious, as if such a good work is destined not to have an ending. I wish the author will always be enthusiastic, always sober, and not be harmed by others in any way.

Very nice, very pure transformation writing. The author's writing style is quite good, but the plot is still far from advanced. The appearance of some characters and the occurrence of events are too abrupt. Generally speaking, I was addicted to it as soon as I saw it.

20 Years ago, the older brother of a magical girl watched a cabbage being fucked by a pig 10 years ago, the older brother of a magical girl watched a cabbage being fucked by a cabbage Now the older brother of a magical girl movie has turned into a cabbage himself

After reading the introduction, it's not crazy enough. If I were a little more crazy, I would write my sister as my younger brother.

The traditional magical girl is a child-oriented, essentially fairy tale. The villain in the story will not be very bad, so it will not feel inconsistent for a magical girl to go to school during the day and fight monsters at night. It can be regarded as a youth campus theme Qidian's popular magical girl literature is essentially a dark fairy tale, featuring innocent and kind-hearted magical girls. In the conflict with the hypocritical and cruel adult society, the villain's behavior has no lower limit, directly turning the magical girl into a high-risk profession The problem is that the villain breaks through the limitations of fairy tales and can show the darkest side of human nature, but the magical girl still lives in the fairy tale, which will cause some logical contradictions. On the villain side, one needs strength, a plan, and information. On the other hand, magical girls, several characters in the book are only strong in personal strength, and few can control the overall situation. The human intelligence network is also deaf and blind. The hidden abyss beasts cannot be seen, the hidden weird organization cannot be seen, and even the brainwashed and evil magical girls have not been discovered. The more I look at it, the more I feel that it is a miracle that human society has not collapsed. Villains from all walks of life have come up with all kinds of tricks, and they use all kinds of methods. However, under this situation, magical girls do not realize this cruel reality. They are still laughing and joking, without awareness of crisis or counter-reconnaissance. The official management and supervision of magical girls are full of loopholes, which creates a logical contradiction: innocent and kind-hearted magical girls may exist in a cruel world, but it is unlikely that innocent and kind-hearted magical girls will exist in a cruel world.

It's a terrible world, where everyone wants to have a girl, and the upper-level people don't have much influence. Every place where the protagonist is is infiltrated by villains. Villains cause trouble every now and then, and the person in charge is always the last to arrive. The city next door has become a harem breeding base for villains. To be honest, it's disgusting to watch. There is no guarantee for the officers and they have to be kidnapped by morality. They are backstabbed by their own people. Even if the backstab is to kill them, they even lose their dignity.

From the beginning of reading the latest chapter, if you only read it from the perspective of magical girls, the taste is enough, but from other perspectives, the plot of this book always gives me a feeling of being neither good nor bad: twisted, but not twisted enough. The Abyss side who loves the protagonist and the magical girl side have never faced each other head-on, and the conflict between the camp positions and subjective feelings has not been answered directly. Depraved, but not depraved enough. The protagonist herself was transformed into a magic girl, but the subjectivity is still from a human perspective. She neither threw herself into the abyss, but left the academy in the abyss, nor guarded the world, but fell in love with her colleagues. It's cool, but not cool enough. The protagonist kills decisively, but his power and vision are deliberately limited. The villain jumps from the beginning to the present. Several forces are fighting openly and secretly, but the protagonist only has a few tricks. He boasts a lot. In fact, he is crushed by various characters with intelligence and strength. I don't know much about the plot design of the author, but even the book "The Off-duty Demon" is not so uncomfortable. There are no explosive points in 70w so far. From this point of view, it is completely a mistake in the plot design. I only hope that the next volume promised by the author is true, and it is not good or bad, and how many readers will still support it by then. I hope the author's creations will get better and better and update more, so that there is no need to keep them.

Have you ever been a magical girl? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

Ever since I watched "The Off-duty Demon", I came to my senses and found a bunch of magical girls on the bookshelf

When did the protagonist drop the vest of Huan Die? I read a million words in one breath. It turned out that the description in the introduction was not published. What a pity. I held my breath and thought I was about to get out of the water. But I still felt like I was suffocating for thousands of miles. It is good to watch, but it is a bit uncomfortable to hold your breath for a long time and not be able to get out.

Suddenly, I realized that there were too many magical girls and the background was too stereotyped. It felt like it was actually a re-skinned urban fairy tale. One of the reasons why I love reading magical girl novels is because of the special nature of the magical girl genre. There are few people, justice, a small map, and there are no overly grand themes. Everyone just wants to protect their own city. This is the core concept. Every time I see a bunch of passerby magical girls being brainwashed/killed casually, I feel uncomfortable, because in my impression, magical girls themselves are not existences that should be reduced to backgrounds. Each one is special, righteous, and has a distinctive personality, and will not be brainwashed or killed casually (with the exception of Asami). I am not posting this comment to increase my presence. I have actually abandoned the book for a while, but today I suddenly figured out why I abandoned the book and why I felt uncomfortable in many parts of this book. When the protagonist was escaping around Chapter 240, he was chased by a bunch of nameless magical girls, and suddenly he didn't want to read anymore.

"When people protect something that is truly precious to them. They can really become... As powerful as they need to be!"

Thanks to the group of friends for unexpectedly providing

1. Ye Qing + Viper Witch line, these two occupy a lot of space, and apart from torturing each other, their only interaction with the main line is to provide the protagonist with a few fragments of the Flower of God. However, the sense of obtaining this thing is not as much as the fragments given by the traitor doctor. At least the doctor is in line with the idea of ​​defeating the boss and dropping treasures. Ye Qing is as fierce as a tiger in one operation, and then he does nothing. It exploded and dropped a piece of debris for the protagonist to pick up. I felt that he had other purposes in the beginning, such as developing various technologies for human self-reliance without relying on magical girls, but later they were cut off 2. The Little Fatty Line, an accessory of Ye Qing's line, made Yuanluo look like the ultimate villain, and then sold a small wave of benefits and suddenly disappeared. Why did Ye Qing release him? Why do they know that the little fat man can encounter the flower of the gods by chance? Then he said that he would wait for the little fat man to relax his vigilance to grab the fragments, but this plot was swallowed up. Later, the little fat man went into the abyss, took refuge in the magic girl's forces, and turned into a female slime. This large part was gone. It was just mentioned in one sentence. It was most likely that Ye Qing's line was rotten and the story of the little fat man was gone. 3. Gu Xiaorou, appeared frequently in the early stage, but It didn't show any effect. He was involved with Ye Qing but nothing happened. In the later period, the World Tree catalyzed the magical girl to come out for a while, and then the person was found again 4. The traitor organization is powerful, complex in composition, and has many insiders. People who don't know it thought they ran into a winery on the set of Conan. All of the several boys have special skills. He has a magical background, but basically he just explained the background and received the lunch box, and the doctor is even more cjb. Although he was very happy to watch the Phantom Butterfly Instant Kill, his complex organization was obviously swallowed up by the author before it was expanded. I thought it was something nb, but it disappeared immediately after mentioning it. The Japanese chapter was directly pulled out and became a subordinate force of the Demon Sword. I feel that the author forgot to write it. I remembered it when I went to Japan but there was no space to write it, so I just arranged it casually and let the leader take the lunch. There should be a plot unfolding here, but it seems that the author forgot, leaving a thread to protect the magic butterfly behind him, and then disappeared, and the final stage was completely missing. Yuanwu will not go into details. The setting of a big battle is rather far-fetched, including how she joined Mo Ji. Yuanluo, the beneficiary of the whitewashing in the later stage, benefited from the whitewashing of the Abyss group in the later stage, and the plot increased greatly, which is much better than many stories that occupied a large amount of space in the early stage and were just on the side of the road in the later stage. However, as of the time when this note was written, Yuanluo still had not won the resurrection match. She said she cut her first and then made her dumplings, but when she cut her, she had already reached the stage of collapse. And because the Abyss Line was eaten by the author, Teacher Xiaobai ended up using the male body as the most commonly used form. Violet was basically not used, the butterfly form was completely gone, and the happy life of the four sisters of the Abyss was also gone. Iuluo, Iris, and Yuanwu were probably the biggest sufferers. They died and disappeared from the beginning to the end. All the bosses were defeated. As a result, Xiaobai ran away with three magical girls (I am so old and a magic princess extra chapter) 5. The Abyss Line, the Lord of the Abyss is infinitely resurrected, and the Abyss is alive. This set of settings is also gone after pulling on a thread. The Flower of God was taken away by Nayako (I don't know if it was mentioned in Chapter 629 that was swallowed), and there was no follow-up. As a benchmark against Yggdrasil, At least the World Tree is closely related to the final main plot. There are contents such as the World Tree, the origin of Iris, awakening Ruas, and self-destruction to defeat Nayako. The abyss is directly on the side of the road. There is a background board with no content. It obviously feels that the writing is unsteady at the end and the ending is ruined.

The author always comes back in a magical way when I think the plot is about to fall apart.

There are thousands of updates these days. I beg you brothers and sisters to try not to keep books and read more. Thank you very much. It's going to be put on the shelves early next month. I want to have full attendance (hands on hips, looking up at the sky at 45 degrees, with a proud look on my face)

Will there be any plots in the future where the protagonist catches his sister and raps her with his own hands after being raped?

Sister: "No such person was found later."

Among the magical girl books I have read, this one is at least among the top five! ! ! Highly recommended!

Bai Yuze: "I'm so cute too."

I want to ask if there are any plots where the protagonist and heroine give benefits to other men. This aspect of mysophobia is relatively serious.

Evil fall? Is it broken? Can anyone tell me about it?

Sister: "Sorry, we can't find this person." Bai Yuze: "Sorry, I have big plans to punish you."

Bai Youqing: Love has disappeared. "😭

I finished watching it. I originally watched it for contemporary dining, but the more I watched it, the more I watched it. Unfortunately, the ending was too hasty. In addition, if the q group is full, can you expand it? And when will the new book be released? Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent

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