Martial Arts World Assassin's Journey

One of the most relevant martial arts novels I have read so far (the other one is "Sword Out of Hengshan") Of course, I have only finished the first world. When I saw the difference between Huang Sixi and He Tieshou, I thought it was very martial arts. The difference between the two was not as pretentious and sad as in Qingzhao Nalan's poems. It was refreshing with a touch of regret but not overwhelming. The taste of the world came up immediately People say Jianghu I don't think Jianghu is about the grudges of angry horses in bright clothes. I think it's about love and hatred between men and women (not just love). Stories that happen in the world of martial arts cannot escape these. And it is precisely the Jianghu fandom written by this author that makes me like it even more. Swords Out of Hengshan The only thing that makes me confused is that the protagonist doesn't say much: 1. For example, against Huashan and others, the protagonist does it without explaining Why didn't Mu Renqing explain it when he was capable? It's not that Mu Renqing should be honest. At least he should explain the truth before taking action. It's quite uncomfortable 2. Why don't you tell the story of the Quanzhen Sect, the Ancient Tomb Sect and the Golden Snake Man? It's so pretentious. I personally like this kind of pretentious plot I just stayed up all night to read the book "Blue Blood Sword". I'm confused and may have some unclear expressions. Please forgive me. It's very rare to see a fan fiction that matches my idea of Jianghu. Ku Qin Jiuyue I like "Xiu Chun Dao", but it's a pity that the author didn't write it. Regret Is there any way to start writing it along Jin Yong's timeline? The kind of world

I have been subscribing and would like to share a few personal opinions. Write a story. It's hard to agree with everyone. The author should have a backbone. At the most serious level, he has dreams and pursuits. At the most small level, he can insist on himself. But what is the situation now? Subscription fluctuations? I immediately felt that there was something wrong with what I wrote. Book friends commented and directly said that the previous chapters could be changed. In a word, let anyone dress you up. Such an attitude is a bit flattering. How can one still write martial arts well with such an original intention? If the author has this attitude, what should the protagonist do? Can he still have an attitude and a character?

I keep watching but I just don't understand the purpose of assassinating the Qing emperor. He has to travel to other worlds anyway, so what's the point of assassinating him back and forth?

Assassins in the martial arts world, or martial arts warriors in the world?

The protagonist's name looks weirder and weirder, like a father-in-law's name. Huang Sixi! Eunuch Huang!

It is actually possible to save or not to save, the key is to have a closed loop of logic and it must be consistent with the protagonist's personality. The author must think clearly about what kind of protagonist you want to create, what his character is, and what his qualities are. The protagonist's behavior must fit his character. The protagonist of the first volume who assassinates the Tatars has the image of a great hero. The protagonist in Volume 2's Rain of Swords kills Black Stone, which also benefits the country and the people. Currently, it seems that the protagonist is a "hero" but at the same time, he is not obsessed with the image of his son and daughter.

It is too difficult to write martial arts now, because all types have been written by predecessors, it is difficult to innovate, and the upper limit is not high. A plug-in such as pig's feet can easily make you invincible. How will you write in the future? How many stories can you write? Only writing about the world of martial arts is not optimistic about the subsequent chapters. It is better to write about the world directly, which has a high upper limit and is expandable. Or the plug-in not only rewards martial arts, but also rewards other things that have nothing to do with martial arts, but are still desirable. In the end, it depends on how the author writes the outline. I expect it to be 3/5.

Except after the first world, where is the assassin that was promised? Does this count as an incorrect article?

Why did you save a female killer to restore her appearance to her original beauty? Now we are arranging a hero to save the beauty. You will enlighten her psychologically later. Do you want to arrange her to be in bed to enlighten her? I don't see what charm she has. If she is tired of being a killer, she can put down the butcher knife and become a Buddha immediately? We must arrange such a period

This is my most successful investment so far, 😄

How can I put it this way? It was quite fun to watch in the early stage. The mysterious operation started in Swordsman. The protagonist often behaved inexplicably.

The writing in the first world was okay, but in the second world I found that the author didn't know how to write emotional dramas. As soon as Xiaoyu met, the plot began to become dull and dragging, and Xiaoyu was not a good writer either. Sometimes I want to wait a few chapters before reading. Maybe this is the reason why my subscription dropped. And it feels like this book is slowly deviating from the title, getting further and further away from the assassin. Has the author ever played Souls games? For example, Dark Souls One Two Three and Elden's Circle. The protagonist's abilities are very similar to those of soul-type protagonists. If you kill the enemy, you can learn the enemy's abilities or obtain the enemy's weapons. Give me a suggestion and let the author refer to it. Every time you enter a world, an inexplicable voice introduces the background of the world, Shattered Void, and the main characters (hunting list) to the protagonist, and then tells the protagonist the goals in this world, such as: the first world goal is to collect which weapons to change the fate of being ruled by the Tatars, and the second world goal is to collect weapons, destroy the Black Stone, and destroy the remains. If I continue writing like this, the author really needs to change the title of the book.

If you're not a well-known author, don't write emotional lines. Well-known authors will overturn it, and the emotional lines will affect the plot.

It's written by a fan, so it wouldn't be right to just change the character.

Is the purpose of entering a world to leave this world? What is the main character's goal?

I don't understand about recasting weapons. What's there to recast? You really think you are a master of making your own sword.

1. The reason why Jiang Asheng did not go to the court is very simple. Blackstone controls the court. It is inevitable that there are eyes and ears all over the capital. Jiang Asheng will die as soon as he shows his face in the capital. This kind of thing has never happened in history. 2. The plot is going wrong. The purple and green swords are green killing purple. Jiang Asheng has been eyeing Zeng Jing for a long time. After all, Jiang Asheng and Zeng Jing had been married for a while when the purple and green swords incident happened. The author here just met for a few days, but Jiang Asheng never showed up. It was hastily completed as soon as he appeared 3. It's easy for Zhang Dajing to dare to show up and show off the real guy. There are always people in this world who are stupider than you can imagine.

Can you tell us a little bit about the new book?

How should I put it, the plot of Fengyun is stronger than that of Tianlong, but the strengths are limited, and it is confusing to watch. In order to avoid spoilers, I will not go into details. I can only say that the plot is coherent, but there is still tension in it. However, Jian Chen kills well! !

It's already June, has the author gone in?

The writing is quite good, but I don't know why my grades are not good! Save your monthly ticket and vote again at the end of the month. Good luck

Will there be a world of ancient dragons?

It looks good, but I don't have time to watch it now that I'm at work.

Why is it gone? I download it when I have a break from work.

Where will the next world be? Where is the world with stronger internal martial arts? I don't read many martial arts novels