Shanhai Card Maker: Draw a Candle Dragon at the Beginning

The writing is quite good, but every time I see an official boss, the protagonist needs to wait for a group of cats and dogs to jump through levels and fight to the death. A city doesn't even have one or two people in charge. This is really uncomfortable to watch. To show solidarity? Repaying it several times once is official waste.

A buddy said that Xiancao was tricked into joining, and only saw about ten chapters. At present, I feel that joining the official is useless, and there are no benefits. I was dragged to death as soon as I joined, and helped the official solve the problem. It only increased the monthly salary from 10,000 to 20,000, and I can get 100,000 just by selling a white card (not sure, I kind of forgot). This salary is just funny. After entering the secret realm, there are no resources and no intelligence. The protagonist's eyesight goes dark. Passersby know more information than the protagonist by looking at the forum. The official can monitor the protagonist throughout the secret realm, but cannot tell the protagonist basic information. In the secret realm, I cooperated with my teammates to defeat the BOSS and exploded a gold card. The official upgraded the protagonist's qualifications to S level, but the reward was only to return the gold card. The protagonist exploded the brush, and the resources to draw new cards were not provided. There was no subsidy. The protagonist even wanted to sell the gold card and buy resources by himself. I really don't understand the point of joining the official? Currently, I feel that joining the official team is equivalent to losing your mind. Although the results of joining the closed beta are not disclosed, no resources are fed to the protagonist. He has to work hard for the official but cannot get resources. The official function is like a shopping platform, which is convenient for shopping.

It's okay to join the official. It doesn't mean that you can't join the official. It's just that the position is too low. The biggest problem is that you have no autonomy. You listen to others and listen to whatever they say. It will make you uncomfortable and affect your perception. This is how I feel.

There is nothing wrong with the main plot of the novel, but the details are poorly handled, including the initial police interrogation, the protagonist's psychological change after joining the officialdom, and the protagonist's investigation of the case. Even if the author doesn't understand the official case-handling process, he should at least check it online or watch the TV series. The logic in this aspect is too poor and the plot seems incomprehensible. At present, it can only be regarded as hay. If the details are better handled, it can be upgraded to food. The more delicate the psychological description of the protagonist is, and the transformation is more reasonable, it can be upgraded to jelly.

This type, I see a lot of people who join the officialdom and maintain the existing order. There are very few explorers who break everything, become kings on their own, or live alone and wander away from the world! I'm all tired of aesthetics. Can anyone recommend some? Modern/Aura Resurrection/Rise of Superpower/Contract Summoning/Real Game/Mysterious Arrival/Exotic Lord/Node Mutation/Evolution Frenzy/Fantasy Invasion/Scientific Garbage/Ladder of Faith/Truth Miracle/False Starry Sky, etc. Are all fine~

Personally, I think it's pretty good overall. The other shortcoming I personally think is that it is outrageous that a member of the Truth Cult can cause such a commotion in China, and it also seems too official. In addition to Old Tang, does a provincial capital spiritual management bureau not have anyone above the second level? The capabilities of the state machine should be able to accumulate several second- and third-level players during the game's public beta. I don't think it's very appropriate for a mere third-level divine son of the Truth Sect to let a first-level person take the lead. In addition, since there is a closed beta, there must be a public beta. Officials should prepare in advance and train them in the direction of drawing the natal card for the first time. Even if we cannot discuss the creative background, we can still cultivate our thinking and greatly improve the red and gold cards.

New book sets sail, please read and recommend! This is the biggest motivation! Thank you! Nowadays, new books are very popular among the previous recommendations, so I cannot update more in the early stage of this book. As this is the first book for a newcomer, I would like to implore you readers to read it first even if you are raising a book! ! I can't guarantee anything else. Once it's on the shelves, this book will sell at least 10,000 copies a day. 😭🥺 As long as the reader's father is more powerful, there can be more.

It's a fairy grass seedling, I guess. The pacing is okay and the writing is on point. I've read more than thirty chapters, so I'll save it first and read it later when it's fattened up.

Xu Shian and Zhulong

Don't write so aggrievedly, this is a fantasy protagonist. Not real life

I have tried the poison and have read more than 40 chapters. Basically, there are no obvious poisonous points that can be read.

It's okay. The author's writing skills still need to be improved. The setting of the novel itself is pretty good, but the daily descriptions are not quite right. Whether it's joining the Spirit Management Bureau or recruiting team members, the descriptions are a bit streamlined. The novel itself is still okay and worth reading. Come on.

The golden finger is quite interesting. What spiritual beasts from the Book of Mountains and Seas will be unlocked later?

The candle dragon is just an appetizer, right? Looking forward to unlocking a Kunpeng that can soar ninety thousand miles.

It can be regarded as one of the more readable books about games, and there are many books to read.

The setting is okay and the pace is fast. I would like to ask, is it a single female protagonist?

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"The Card Maker: The Beginning of the Night Walk of One Hundred Ghosts" My first book, I will definitely finish it with great care. Introduction: Lin Chen, a scholar of folk mythology, traveled to an unknown card world. Encountered the super vicious copy of [Hundred Ghost Night Walk] at the beginning! At the critical moment, Lin Chen used the power of incense from the [City God's Temple] to create a god card [Door God Qin Qiong/Yu Chi Gong]. After surviving the crisis, Lin Chen discovered that the mythical history of this world has been epoch-making! The incense is burning, the good gods are not responding, the evil gods are in power, and weird things are wreaking havoc! The card-making materials are all weird things! Countless card masters became deceived because of this! Lin Chen is able to combine historical myths and create cards with strange objects! [Yaksha Bone] has advanced to [Human Tai Sui·Wu Song] [Drowned Death] has advanced to [Chu Di Spirit Witch·Qu Yuan] [Decapitated Corpse] has advanced to [Zhuolu Zhan Kuang·Xing Tian] Lin Chen used the heroic god cards he made to save the world and educate people, rekindle the incense, and rebuild the belief in gods! [Door God] controls the house, ward off evil and evil spirits, and protects the door and courtyard. [Water Margin] A good man descends from heaven and hates evil as much as he hates it. [Sui Huang] spreads fire, transforms fishy smell and removes diseases, drives away darkness and enlightens the light. [Qu Yuan] A spiritual shaman who communicates with the gods through dance and divines the heavens and the deep. [Kitchen God] is the director of food, exorcises evil and obscurity, and monitors good and evil. [Guan Sheng] The great emperor, who rules the underworld, protects the law and subdues demons. Yu ShenControlled the water, calmed the floods and stabilized the soil, and the nine tripods controlled the world. As Lin Chen summoned the gods to appear in the world, more cult organizations [God-killing Society], [Doomsday Sect], [Esoteric Buddhism], etc., Also focused on him. The secret of the good gods in this world and the purpose of the evil gods to hide the world are gradually unfolding!

①Since we are destined to draw all the strange beasts in the Classic of Mountains and Seas in the future, why not draw the entire domain card? For example: Dear player, because you have created a large number of high-quality and related exotic beasts, you have opened the domain (world) system. Field: Mountain and Sea World (Big World) Effect ① All attributes of the enemy are reduced by 100%, and all attributes are guaranteed to be suppressed by 50% against people without domains (specifically determined according to the quality of the cards that constitute the field and the quality of the opposite cards) Effect ②: God of Mountains and Seas Increase the strength of one's own life card by 100% (same as above) … (This is one of the conditions for advancing to the ninth level) ②Purple and above cards created by the card master can be re-engraved, but each card is unique, and multiple cards cannot exist at the same time (Ps: The main reason is that there are not many good cards, and it will be impossible to write non-repetitive cards sooner or later, and it is a pity that top-quality cards like cannot be re-engraved.

The writing style is still a bit immature.

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

My new book "The Almighty Card Maker: Starting from Zhong Kui", all the weird things, important characters, cards, and materials will be illustrated I have completed the work without any unfinished work, and my character guarantees that you can enter the game with confidence. The following is a brief introduction to the work: [Mythology, history and folklore, academy flow, secret copy, illustrator] Mo Bai traveled through the card world and became a new trainee card maker. Here, everything that forms collective memory can be used to make cards and play extraordinary and wonderful roles. Popular culture, celebrities, social occupations, hot events... History, myths, folklore, legends, all can be used to create cards. Among them, cards made from historical myths and folklore have great power! Unfortunately, due to the invasion of monsters, this world has suffered a civilization fault, and historical myths and folklore have long been lost. However, Mo Bai, who is familiar with these, can use them to make cards as he likes! Encountering red and white demons at the beginning, in order to save his life, he decisively made the divine summoning card [Zhong Kui], and since then he has embarked on the path of an all-around card master: A summoning card that no one else can create even if they try to break their brains? [Huang Feihong], [Guan Yu], [Black/White Impermanence]... I can choose any historical heroic spirit or mythological god! Equipment card? [Embroidered spring knife], [Zhangba snake spear], [Golden cudgel]... Swords, guns, axes and pickaxes, there is no best, only better! Vehicle card? Friends, have you heard of [Wood Cow and Flooding Horse] and [Kunpeng] which cannot be stewed in one pot? Venue card? After passing this [Naihe Bridge], your card will forget you as the card owner, I am so awesome! Trap card? I activate the [Spring Festival] effect, and all cards on the field must be returned to the card owner for reunion! A few years later, Mo Bai Muran looked back and found that he was already at the top of the card master!

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Just give me a chapter name and notice, I thought it was a mess.