Family Cultivation: I Have a Space Inside My Body

The setting is pretty good, but there are some minor flaws. The author should polish it more, come on!

Do you keep a diary or a novel? After reading 35 chapters, 30 of them are trivial matters without plot. We are here to see your development, not your family's shortcomings.

Too slow, too watery, no important information

You can write down what you think is poisonous after reading this article, and the author will modify it or explain it according to the situation. Report changes First, there are many typos. In the past few days, I have taken the time to check the previous ones. I will check them before posting in the future. Second, regarding the issue of internal space leakage, the article has been revised because it involves many chapters, so the changes will be completed on May 22. Thirdly, regarding the plot issue, I tried my best to revise this, mainly because I couldn't grasp the borrowing points when writing it for the first time. Some things were like detailed descriptions, and I was afraid that readers would not understand.

If any readers think of any good plots or have any good names, please comment below. If it is suitable or good, the author will write it in the book.

I've written almost 100 chapters on physical training. Is something wrong?