Vast Sea Immortal Clan

I made a map, it's a bit crude, I hope you'll forgive me

It feels like the author writes like a leader speaking at a formal meeting

Like Sister Feng

This book is too stiff to read, and it feels like eating a tough meal. No sense of immersion

It feels very stiff and reads too strangely 🤤

​ ​ ​ If reading this book is compared to watching a movie🎬, then what I saw was an unedited pornographic film. There are not only movies, but also many scenes of directors coaching actors🎬: "Guijun, your character is brave; Guiyun, your character is wisdom; Guiyue,… ..." "Everyone, please note: the first plot shows... The second plot..." "In short, the actor's acting skills are not important, what is important is the director's heart. Anyway, the director said that Gui Jun is brave, so he must be very brave. I've even shown you the script, why don't you still figure it out on your own? This is a joy in itself! 😂 By adhering to this [perspective] style, maybe we can create a new genre of online writing! 😄

I suggest that you don't stress your cultivation level, or that the protagonist's progress should always be far ahead. The people in your family should not always be at the same progress as the protagonist. As soon as the protagonist improves, the others will immediately improve. There is already this trend. Every time the protagonist rises to a level, other people either have a breakthrough in spells or progress in cultivation. It doesn't have to be much behind the protagonist. It's outrageous.

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The author first said that the protagonist cannot practice swords or anything. If there is anything about this sword or that sword technique later, I will not read it.

I read the first chapter, but I can't understand it. I don't know how I traveled through time, whether it restored my past life memories or something. Just twenty acres of spiritual land

After reading the introduction, the system adds genius flow! I bet the author of a pack of spicy strips will cut it in two months

Instructions🤐

After listening to the great suggestions from readers, I refined chapters one and two and deleted some nonsense. Hahaha keep up the good work.

I am very grateful for the many suggestions given by the two book friends "Suzhou Longxin" and "Reading Wise Choice" today! The author will reply one by one when he sees it. This book only gets better and better because there are many book lovers like you! I would also like to thank "Qingshan 1m" Dagodi for following me from Q reading to the starting point. I am very happy in mathematics. I decide! Three chapters guaranteed tomorrow! Chapter 4 of Hard Work Code has been updated!

I came from Tianyin. I looked at it and it was okay. I hope I can write it down.

This is like the writing style of the Nine Transformations of True Spirit series

Come on author, I think the writing is pretty good. I give you my daily recommendation votes, so keep up the good work!

It's okay. It would be better to write better about the trial\

As soon as I see a system panel in a novel about cultivating immortals, I don't want to read it.

Keep up the good work, author!

Why does this style always feel a little bit more suitable for writing about things before the founding of the People's Republic of China?

I'm just waiting for you to break through 100. Breaking through 100 will become a new starting point.

The skills passed down from ancient times can be mastered in just a few months?

The content is okay, but why do you need to create a system panel? It's a failure.

How should I put it? I read one and listened to the leader's speech when I was studying.