The Fight Begins in Konoha

It is very similar to the book "Escape from Konoha", civilians + Uchiha + Hinata, even the plot is exactly the same, especially the dialogue about the Will of Fire course, which is almost word for word

This is the imitation of Chiba Shiraishi, even the name only changed one character 🙂

I don't know when the word "slow heat" came into being. When a woman says the story is slow to warm up, it means that she doesn't dislike you, but she probably has no heart for you; when the author says it is slow to warm up, it probably means that the pace of the plot is not attractive, which means the author is not confident. The combination of these two words "slow heat" (including originality) makes people even more confused.

Hyuga Katsura (Word Leaf), Uchiha World, Senju Setsuna... I understand, it's the Sun in Konoha (Dense Fog)

What the hell, this sense of déjà vu is like copying someone's book

Another book that clowns attract clowns to read

…It feels a bit messy, just my personal opinion, please don't spray.

There is no problem if the conspiracy theory is reasonable, but where did the protagonist draw a lot of conclusions in the first few chapters when he was still studying in Ninja School? It is not an exaggeration to say that the students who graduated from the Ninja School are in the top 1% of the world. How could they be sent out to be cannon fodder? They learn mathematical physics, history and politics, intelligence espionage, trap codes, protection and survival. In terms of combat, they learn basic medical knowledge such as poisons, taijutsu, kunai fighting, shuriken throwing and other ninja tools, and ninjutsu such as the three body skills. The courses also include team writing, wilderness survival, etc. Now they are multi-functional special forces. Is it reasonable to let them be cannon fodder? Konoha has never let them be cannon fodder. If they fail the graduation exam or the genin exam, they have to go back and study again. After graduating and becoming a genin, you must complete C and D level missions under the guidance of a jounin. You must know that only B level missions will definitely encounter ninjas. Unless you are unlucky, there are basically no safety issues. Genin are only sent out during wars to protect the village. This is better than having the villagers massacred. If you don't want to fight, you can be an ordinary person. The Uchiha clan has people who open shops, and the Hyuga clan has people who work as servants. Their safety is basically no problem. There are sacrifices of ninjas. The flames of war rarely burn on ordinary people. Choosing to become a ninja means that you have the obligation to protect the village, just like soldiers in reality. The Third Hokage has always regarded protecting the village as his own duty. Even if Danzo didn't even get married and have children, it can be said that he devoted himself wholeheartedly to it. Three generations of masters, brothers, apprentices, disciples, grandchildren, wives, children, and themselves all sacrificed for the village. The three generations dedicated their youth and their lives, and their lives to their descendants. Who has given more than the third generation of Hokage? He said he was doing it for his own selfish gain. Where is the selfishness? In the comics of the Fourth War, the Sarutobi clan only had a few dozen people breathing fire. I don't know where the three thousand ninja army came from. The Hyuga clan was no less than Sarutobi's. The Will of Fire is also very simple. It is to protect the villagers and give most villagers the right to choose whether to be ninjas or not to go to the battlefield. Those who do not go to the battlefield will do logistics, those who have the force to go to the battlefield will fight hard, and those who are resourceful will command from behind. Except for the root, which will train orphans and force you to become a ninja, most others can choose freely. There will be no situation like the Warring States Period when ninja children had no choice but to go to the battlefield. To put it bluntly, Konoha ninjas protect, fight and sacrifice in order to protect Konoha, the safest place with the best material conditions in the world.

In the world of Naruto World and Bloodline, this kind of thinking is completely useless in reality.

Author, take a look at what you wrote in Chapters 8 and 11. In Chapter 8, you describe how Umino comforted the protagonist after he lost, and talked about the gap between geniuses. In Chapter 11, you wrote that the protagonist seems to be a proud, arrogant and ignorant person in Umino's heart. You wrote such a self-contradictory drama in less than five chapters. You are really amazing at handling the characters and plot of your work like this!

The author doesn't seem to be good at writing war stories. Since the protagonist went to the front line, the subsequent plot feels messy and the focus can't be found.

Regarding the blood stain limit, why do you directly dig out your eyes? Isn't it good to directly seize reproductive organs? For example, if Byakugan directly seizes the Hyuga family's eggs and then freezes them for preservation, he should be able to cultivate tens of thousands of offspring by himself, right? ! And if you don't gouge out your eyes or kill people directly, you won't touch the caged bird. In this way, it won't be a problem to separate the clans.

Wow, that's so weird. It feels like a stitch monster.

Konoha really belongs to the ninja clan.

One chapter. The same name Chiba appears. 20 Times. Writing failed. Can it be natural?

After one chapter, 90% of the text is about psychological description and narrative narration... This is a novel, not a narrative, nor does it look like a narrative.

， The identities of the characters (the girl from the Hyuga family, the wealthy Uchiha, the research-oriented civilian orphan), the behavior of the characters and the plot are also very familiar (almost the same). If it weren't for Hosuna, the character's self-perception and behavior were different, and if the follow-up was not a defection but an internal struggle in Konoha, the plagiarism would have been blurted out.         ，，，，，，

If the route is wrong, you shouldn't follow Orochimaru! It's useless, and the plot is a complete mess. The plot is not driven enough, and it's not like there are no other ways to use ninjutsu. It's so embarrassing to have to use this reason to rely on the Hokage system.

I personally look at it in four periods. The first part is to move to Konoha to meet the first and second generation and become the second generation's apprentice. During this period of time, he studied actively and became a complete successor of the Will of Fire. Following the second generation in the First World War, he was the first to shout that he wanted to take the rear. Knowing that he would die, he acted bravely. Even Danzo hesitated. I borrow the character of Chairman Chiang here. In the later period, he was an enemy of the people and deserved to die. But in the early stage of the Northern Expedition, did you know that he was among the first to join the death squads? He risked his life to collect the corpse of Cheng Pomei in Shanghai. At this time, he was completely an advanced young man. The second paragraph is about the time of World War I and World War II. During this period of time, he can be described as wise and powerful. At that time, Konoha was very large, but internal thoughts were mixed, and each family had its own small calculations. Sarutobi Hiruzen began his reforms, accepted Tsunade and civilians as apprentices, and suppressed the ninja clan. He began to serve as the principal of the ninja school. The name of Shinobi was written in the setting book, so when I finished the plot on time, Sarutobi completely regarded himself as Hokage and burned himself. I will live up to Konoha without myself. The third section is the period from the Third War to the Nine-Tails Rebellion. He is old, he was born eight years before Konoha, Konoha forty-two years before the Third War, and he was already fifty years old at this time. According to the setting book Senju Hashirama, the average lifespan of a Warring States ninja is no more than twenty years old, and only a few ninjas can live past thirty. At the age of five or six, he picked up a kunai and went to war. He got married at the age of twelve and was raised by the family group. Neither of his own brothers lived past the age of seven. His biggest problem is the succession of the Hokage. Hatake's contribution is too great, but the succession of the Hokage is ostensibly a jounin selection, but in fact it is the succession of masters and apprentices of the Senju line from father to son. What do you want him to do? At this age, Hatake has a righteous character and is neither deaf nor dumb nor a wealthy man. What if Konoha leaves it to him to fight the civil war? He was old, Hatake was only thirty years old at this time and in his prime. There is also the death of Senju. Part of the inheritance must have been eaten by Sarutobi. At this time, he seemed old to Orochimaru. Just think of Emperor Tang Ming of Kaiyuan and Tianbao as being selfish. His ideal successor is Jiraiya. The person who truly inherits the will of the third generation is Jiraiya. He is decisive when hesitating to be kind and decisive. He couldn't disperse the Sarutobi family like the Senju, so it didn't sit well with Orochimaru, and he sent Orochimaru to spy on his old comrades, but Orochimaru ended up colluding with Danzo for research. Tsunade was like this again, and Jiraiya went to find his destiny child again, so he turned his attention to Namikaze Minato. He knew the level of his two sons. He did not want to create a father-son empire. His most selfish motive was to let his children serve as Konoha consultants. The next generation of Hokage would accept his grandson as his apprentice and pass on the Sarutobi family. His selfishness is not as serious as Ohnoki's. In the end, Orochimaru got hairy. I worked hard to finish World War II and Three. But the old man played this trick. In his opinion, it was betrayal. It was okay to lose to his teammates, but he lost to Namikaze Minato. Although Orochimaru doesn't like Hokage, he just wants to make research more convenient. It doesn't matter if he is Hokage or not. I can don't want it, but you can't give it. Whenever you say that he will be the fourth generation and Minato will be the fifth generation, Orochimaru may not have any objection. The fourth paragraph is after the Nine-Tails Rebellion and the collapse of Konoha The biggest conspiracy theory at this time is why didn't Sarutobi Hiruzen seal the Nine-Tails himself? It's very simple, he is not good at sealing, his nickname is Doctor Ninjutsu. Kyuubi has not had any problems for fifty years since he was sealed by Senju Hashirama. He has trouble learning a one-for-one ninjutsu. Do you have time to look at beautiful women? It can be seen from the battle with Orochimaru from behind that when Orochimaru defected, he did not know this ninjutsu. He learned it later after Minato died. On the whole, the three generations should be looked at separately. Be worthy of Konoha in the front, and be worthy of the family in the back. Indeed, Konoha fell at his hands. A research-savvy Orochimaru plus a Sarutobi Hiruzen plus a Shimura Danzo is a complete Senju Tobirama. He was very thoughtful for Konoha. He lost his son in middle age, his wife in his later years, and finally died on the way to protect the village. Can you say that he does not have the will of fire? The Sarutobi in my article is a normal person. He took advantage of the opportunity of suppressing Hatake to push his son to be the ANBU minister. He never thought about letting his son be the Hokage's assistant, nor did he think about forcing Hatake to death, including Danzo. After Chiba Junshi joined the Hokage faction later, Sarutobi Hiruzen's attitude naturally changed. Suppressing Uchiha was a second-generation policy, and his own teammates were also Uchiha. Suppressing clan power and increasing village power is what he has done his whole life, but why do you think your Sarutobi's strength is like this? From Sarutobi Hiruzen's point of view, the Sarutobi family, the Shimura family, and Inokacho are all supplements to the Hokage's power. How can the Hokage suppress other families if he has no strength? The Hokage has three thousand ninja troops in his hands to frighten other families. After all, the Uchiha are too powerful. You don't think that Sarutobi has three thousand chuunin, do you? This is the three thousand ninja army that Sarutobi and his relatives and families put together. Read the comics and setting books yourself. After Minato became Hokage, Sarutobi Hiruzen quickly delegated power. The purpose of Anbu letting Kakashi enter was that he would be the minister and his son would be the deputy when he returned from the Land of Fire. Also, you said that Sarutobi works in the Hokage Building. At this time, his identity changed. He was a Konoha consultant assisting the Hokage. You can see how many trivial matters Minato's son Naruto had to deal with when he became the Hokage. But when he was Hokage, his inability was his biggest mistake. He did not stop Danzo, but he also wanted to gain something, both wanting and wanting, but often he couldn't get it.

Author, you'd better watch the animation and comic scenes of the Fourth War again. There are less than 20 people with fire escape, but you have increased it hundreds of times.

It's getting more and more watery, you can jump and watch it