My Steve Is Treated Like a Demon

The last sentence of the introduction, "I don't eat beef," expresses the central idea of ​​the book.

It's okay. I just want to end this subspace explosion plot as soon as possible, sort out the social background and so on, and don't go straight to the big plot from the beginning.

The perspective is too confusing. The protagonist is not very big in this novel, and the perspective is messy. There are five or six main perspectives in this novel. It's really confusing.

The writing is very messy, and the writing doesn't seem to be about any of the protagonists, but is trying to describe a fantasy world. Does the author want to write about the protagonist's experience, or does he want to write a collection of fantasy world stories? But like I said, it doesn't look like a novel, but a collection of scattered stories.

It is written like a group portrait, each picture is not good, only two or three pictures are written for big things, and there is no connection between each event. What is the protagonist doing in the last second, and the next second switches to the perspective of the supporting character to describe the world view. It reads like opening a dozen novels, and then stitching the first three chapters of each novel together. It is very fragmented.

It's so confusing that it feels like jumping through the pages.

I insisted on reading Chapter 33. I felt dizzy while reading. I didn't understand the main idea or where the protagonist was. My perspective kept changing. @_@

The writing is too messy, with a hammer here and a stick here and there. Can you read it yourself?

The transition between perspectives is not done well, and the overall look is very messy.

Don't be too fragmented when writing a novel. It's so laborious and hypnotic to watch.

Is this a group portrait? Why does the protagonist have no sense of existence?

The idea is good, but it feels a bit confusing, and the perspective switching is a bit stiff. After more than a dozen chapters, I can't understand it.

The fragmentation caused by poor writing skills looks very baffling.

I've read Chapter 20. To be honest, it's very confusing. If it weren't for Stephen, I wouldn't know who the protagonist is? One thing is that the protagonist's sense of presence is too low. There are many supporting characters. The role of the protagonist is to start the plot, so it's fine! Two points: The world setting is too confusing, with alien worlds, magic, technology, cities, religions, various demons, various gods, look at the God of Light, oh you know this universe is a Marvel-type multiverse! Are these just a few pictures taken out and stuffed into your head? Very confused

The writing is very messy. Although I can reason it out, it is even more uncomfortable to reason it out, especially if I made the mistake of the Holy Mother.

The writing is too messy... The main character has too few roles... It looks like a group portrait, but the other characters are not portrayed deeply enough... It's really uncomfortable

Damn it, if the author didn't tag it, I would have thought it was a group portrait article 😐

It's so confusing that I can't understand it at all

I read some comments saying that the invincible flow needs to be further developed. . . So is this book an invincible style, a farming style, or an upgrade style?

I can't even understand it, the scene changes quickly, the psychological activities are sandwiched in the fragments of scene changes, and the context is not coherent. I feel like three or four books are broken and blended together.

What you wrote is so messy. There is no general background at all, and you just start the narrative. Are you expecting readers to sort it out on their own?

I don't know how the author plans to deal with the recent boycott of red stone. I think that for unlimited energy like red stone, you only need to cooperate with alchemists or companies, or directly cooperate with the kingdom. Ordinary people are not the audience. Besides, this matter should be left to the kingdom or company to resolve. Pig's feet are gods and monopolies. There is no need to settle public opinion.

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I've read Chapter 4 and I can't remember the main character's name.

I have developed a habit of reading online articles at a glance. If the writing is not smooth, it will make me dizzy, let alone retain readers.

It's too messy, and it's not serious literature. Sometimes the perspective is switched, and I can't remember what the background of the character I switched was doing before. If you look at the multi-perspective and multi-line development, it can be handled well by traveling through 99 worlds at the same time.

It's so confusing. I skipped through the three golden chapters.

The main part of this book is a group drama about evil gods, with the protagonist Taneda being semi-invincible. The semi-invincible is mainly about growing up. Half of the text is from the perspective of other believers (or before they become believers) (similar to regular evil gods). It is very interesting to read, and the author I have quite a lot of experience writing about the spirit world or dreams. They are so bizarre. Some people start to feel a headache when they see three villains entering the same dungeon. I wonder if your head has reached the upper limit of computing power 🤔. It's confusing with only 3 perspectives?

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Actually, it's okay. It's not as messy as those people said. It's quite interesting and it's easy to figure out the background after reading dozens of chapters.