
I'm Almost Forty-Five, and the System Has Only Just Arrived
我都快四十五了,系统才来
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 332k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban Life
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
159Chapters
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As a 45-year-old middle-aged uncle, there is no corresponding life perception and mentality of the protagonist, and there is no corresponding social experience. It seems too awkward. The protagonist in his 40s has not yet seen through the society that you have what I need, and I have what you need, then you can exchange it. It is a very naked logic, everything is driven by needs and interests. So there is so much psychological unhappiness? Uncomfortable? Then there is a glass heart? Life, interests, family, legal means to obtain personal wealth and interests, power. The government and the country are not wolves, tigers or leopards, nor are they scourges. . . After reading it, I was speechless. It was a great idea, but the writing was terrible. . .
The protagonist cannot withstand the temptation and has a weak character. He is manipulated like a puppet by people like Uncle Zhou and Uncle Wang. He does not know what to write, has no plan and no goals. He is exposed wantonly after receiving the national title, like a puppet on strings.
If you are a novice, don't make too many calculations. Because there is too much that you don't understand, the writing, layout, and rhythm will appear to be too immature and dramatic.
What the hell is this? Isn't it a city? You are going to rush into the universe. You have to write a good article about the city god. It has reached a world level. In a few chapters, you will start to learn Chinese martial arts, as well as exercises and so on. Soon you will become an immortal, and you will no longer want your wife and children? What the hell did you write?
The author is right. As a low-level person, how big a situation can you have? How much awareness can there be? How broad can your experience be in a low-level dimension? If you can have a pattern, cognition, and experience that transcends class, you will not belong to this class. The greatest ignorance of Chinese people is that they are self-motivated and never admit that they are at the bottom. They always feel that they are middle class and not poor. Therefore, it is here that Chinese people live a very hard and tangled life. Because your expectations exceed your abilities, it is commonly said that you have high ambitions and low ambitions, which is painful. Everyone is responsible for the rise and fall of xx. It's just the brainwashing of cannon fodder by carnivores. The protagonist is 45 years old, but he still can't see through this? It shouldn't be. Going back to this book, you get a bottom-level bonus and a golden finger. The only thing that touches me is that you treat your bad wife kindly. When you are poor, you test your wife; when you are rich, you test your husband. You make your little family's life happy. It can be said that the author is making up for his inner shortcomings. Understandable. The fantasy started later. Maybe the author thinks that with great power comes great responsibility. Understandable. Once you get the golden finger, it's gone. There are so many readers that it's hard to agree with everyone. However, your title is 45 years old. Then the reader segment is middle-aged. Will I be included in this group of low-level veterans who only think about themselves? Will they agree with the author's plot? It really tests the author's writing skills.
At present, it seems that there is only the setting of the system, which is a little interesting. The other contents are all sentient and poisonous, even after the arrival of Shen Nong, and there is no way to write about the maturity and stability of a forty or fifty-year-old. It would be better to write about a pig's foot of seventeen or eighteen years old or in his 20s at the beginning. He is worried about this and that, and later joins the country and is timid.
Changes are too fast. When you are unable to do anything, nothing happens. Once you have ability, everyone knows that you are a treasure. You want to write about everything but can't write clearly. I really don't know what you want to do?
I am almost 70 years old and the system has not come to me. Sad!
I've been working on it for a long time. It's an extraordinary world. Why don't we classify it as a superpower? The system still has an intelligent system, so please write more dialogues with the system and persuade everyone to leave.
It is recommended that the system not be intelligent, and then monetary rewards are too easy