The Evolution of Douluo from Scratch

After reading Chapter 5, I can't stand it, but I can't give a specific reason.

After reading the introduction, I retreated immediately! A time-traveling pig has no golden fingers, no understanding, and no qualifications. Can you survive in a time-disordered Douluo Continent? Moreover, the most poisonous thing is that a fierce fellow from the same country with a golden finger plug-in has already passed through in front... It's so disgusting. Persuade to quit

It's really weird! What age are you now, and you still write rubbish? Who is watching! The protagonist is bitter and resentful at the beginning? Who has a sense of involvement? Readers?

In your world line with time travellers, how can people like Dai Mubai become gods? The original work is not

The most common mistake that novice authors make is that the protagonist's character is too childish. To put it nicely, it sounds casual, but to put it badly, it sounds like a brat who hasn't grown up yet. It's too childish. One second I was disgusted, and the next second I started to engage in some sao operations. I can't believe how this kind of article was signed.

It's so rubbish without giving the protagonist Goldfinger a chance!

I don't care if the protagonist doesn't have a golden finger, but it's another thing to give someone else a golden finger and then compare it to the protagonist. As an old bookworm, I don't like it very much, because replacing the golden finger with talent, capital status, etc. Is all the same unpleasant old routines I've seen before. The unpleasant part about changing the name is the same, which directly makes me follow the trend and reminisce.

Is the protagonist a taker? If the Douluo World is compared to a woman and the time traveler is a man, then this Douluo World is already a second-hand commodity 😏

Can you do nothing but stare and shrink your pupils?

Cut it off. Although there is fan traffic, it can't support that many authors. Try another track, or maybe the whole spoof genre can still make money from people who have fun.

The more I look at it, the darker and more desperate I feel. This Douluo II is much darker than the original Douluo II. There is no hope at all. Will this trip to the Sun Moon Continent be more intense than the previous trip to Poseidon Island? Also, Ning Tian can see some scenes of the future. The power also needs to be a mystery. Could this evil god be Tang San who the senior time traveler failed to clean up ten thousand years ago? Also, the Shura God and Poseidon from the God Realm that Tang San defeated ten thousand years ago should still be in the God Realm. Could there be these two gods controlling all this behind the scenes?

I think Bai Lu x Dai Yuhao are a good match

No one commented on me doing the first one

The silver dragon and the golden dragon both took over and they were the heroines again.

This timeline seems to be ten thousand years after the previous one, "Awesome Support". Is it considered a sequel?

Inexplicably, the protagonist ordered the massacre of more than 100 million civilians, which made Tang San feel ashamed

Sb novel, no wonder there are so few people

I have never been able to find a fan of Peerless Tang Sect that I can read. It's either a mindless harem or a bunch of randomly added settings, and there's also the time-traveling into Huo Gua (I don't really like it personally). None of them are readable. There are one or two that can be read, but they are all new books with too few words 🤔🤔