Wearing the Same Clothes, We All Have Random Golden Fingers?

A reminder to those who travel through Hogwarts, if your parents live in the Muggle world, remind them not to undergo blood transfusion surgery, because you don't know whether the blood bag contains leucorrhizal or AIDS.

What's the use of being discovered by Dumbledore at the beginning?

Samsara invades, oh my god, what is the author doing? You are impure. . .

It is difficult to read and not smooth.

It's a good book, but it turns out that it's about rice, and it's still the most flattering one. Not interesting

It looks so uncomfortable. It's better to add a name to the world

Novices can first imitate successful writing and add some ideas, but don't stitch too many elements. If there are too many elements, the text will collapse if you can't grasp it.

The last chapter was still fought in the subspace, but this chapter has no news at all. It is all about the plot of Shui Luo Tian Dajiao and Xiao Zizai. Is this protagonist so hopeless?

The author had good ideas, but he threw them out too early. There are a lot of them in just a few dozen chapters. It's a bit like reading an outline.

More than 500,000 words were written in 25 book reviews. The reading is not fluent, and many dialogues are incomprehensible. Then there are the nicknames of each world that are difficult to understand, and then there are only a few points of interest in the same flow, the collision of power systems in different worlds (to put it bluntly, it is high-energy bullying of low-level pretentiousness), what new activities can the author of each world create, and after the climax is written, the next world will not have too many boring over-the-top plots. It is obvious that the author has not done these things. Just talking about the Harry Potter world, there is no need to write so much foreshadowing content, because the 11-year-old at the beginning needs to settle down and it will take a long time before the climax. From the perspective of the author, the arrangement should be a background board that provides strength. The pirates are still in the initial stage and there is no need to do anything. Generally speaking, not many people read this genre. If you don't complete the story and write the climax, what are you going to read? This type of novel is inherently prone to overwhelming combat power. Don't focus on how to plan your combat power, but focus on completing the story. If you don't complete the story, just clear the level and then write about the next world. As long as you can grasp this well, it is basically a good time-traveling book.

Aren't they the same person? Why do you still talk to yourself when you have memories? 🤔

It's too vulgar to call someone who is domineering in a one-man world called "Black Light Curse", but "Wu/Xuan Light Curse" is okay.

There is nothing wrong with the conversation at the beginning, but why is the subsequent conversation so inconsistent? Are there many places with missing words?

Suddenly I felt like this book collapsed inexplicably.

Your dialogue sentences give me a headache, I don't even know who said it... It's just a bunch of jibberish, I can't stand it anymore🤦🏻‍♂️

As mentioned, if it's appropriate, I'll add it. If not, it may be under one person. I am also reading your book reviews, and I have been revising the previous ones in the past few days. Thank you for your support and love.

It is not a book for readers. A good novel should not be "One Hundred Years of Solitude"

I originally planned to put the world name after the first nickname in each chapter, but there is no way to help prevent frequent modifications. I am afraid of being banned when I am making changes, so I can only change it once or twice a day. I hope everyone understands. 🔨

Did you rush out? 😐