Rebirth 10: Starting from Scratch

When I read Chapter 7, I found that there are many problems, mainly in the blunt plot, the conflicts in the protagonist's personality and human experience, the unclear relationship between the characters' backgrounds (such as: Yin Yue), and don't use ancient-level writing. It looks very embarrassing (I am a white reader with more than ten years of experience). , For example, Chapter 4 and Chapter 7 are the most obvious (I have commented on these two), so author, you can revise and revise it before you write too many words (if you want to make money), otherwise your book will eventually be cut. If you just want to write it for fun, just treat it as I didn't say anything.

It's not easy to find a good book, especially if you haven't encountered a business Internet article that suits your taste in a long time. There are many books on Internet entrepreneurship for college students, but not many can write new ideas and are logical, and there are not too many brainless and refreshing feelings. Come on, keep up the standard, and will keep chasing 👍👍👍