Dragon Ball: Escape from Planet Vegeta

Found it on my computer

It's okay to write, I'll give you a vote 🙂

Some people say that the Saiyan race should be retained, and it should indeed stay in the case of Pirates or Naruto, but this is Dragon Ball. On Namek, Super Saiyan Son Goku accused Frieza of killing innocent people indiscriminately. Frieza admitted that he killed innocent people indiscriminately, but at the same time he also ridiculed him. Then you Saiyans didn't kill innocent people indiscriminately? Son Goku's reply as a Saiyan is; so they became extinct

The 18th is coming

It's true that Ji Nei was written to be an eyesore. Originally, I felt good about this character, but the author made her very annoying. Flying around the earth, not asking for advice on qi cultivation, and scheming with the gods, they just don't describe the cultivation process properly, and always say in one sentence, "Over the past few months, the combat effectiveness has increased." The three most important points of Dragon Ball are: cultivation, fighting, and breaking through the limits. As a result, the practice was gone, and other miscellaneous things were piled up. It did not get to the main topic, and the main topic was omitted from the description. Wukong has a pure heart for martial arts and has no distractions. He always has special ideas for fighting and is good at breaking through limits. Vegeta, the arrogant Saiyan prince, was extremely competitive, practiced extremely hard, put a lot of pressure on himself, and had extremely high demands on himself. However, how can the protagonist, who keeps getting into trouble, compare with the two of them?

For me. . . Water! It's very dull. Maybe the author wanted to expand on the background and relationships, but it was very boring. It was so boring that I read the book at a glance. It took me 40,000 words to read without Planet Vegeta exploding. It looked like it would take a few more chapters to go to other planets. A perfect score of five. This book is currently worth 2.5 Points.

I found that many bosses still use Uncle Psy's setting of "the lowest level warrior" from the earliest comics. In fact, the earliest setting has been overturned by Psy himself. According to the character setting of "The Strongest Jump", Raditz was a superior warrior when he was a boy. Due to neglect of training, his combat effectiveness as an adult was low, so he was called the lowest level warrior.

Some of the actions of this protagonist are really confusing and unlikable. He obstructs him in every possible way to prevent Ji Nei from finding his own child. He has to wait until Kakarot turns into Sun Wukong. If you hadn't been raised by Ji Nei, I wouldn't have thought it would matter. But you Yes, he is still Kakarot's brother. I feel sick when I say this. I just found Son Gohan. Son Gohan asked you who Kakarot is. The protagonist's answer made me feel that this person is not good. What do you mean by "his brother"? Speechless

After reading Chapter 77, I felt that the male protagonist was not good at dealing with the world. An anime is an anime, but the characters in it don't owe you anything. The male protagonist blindly asks for others without providing anything in return. It's really funny. For example, you consult the God Turtle Immortal, live in a doctor's house and let others help you with your research, and have great elders help you develop your potential. If someone else helps you, the hero doesn't say anything in return and doesn't even promise. Everyone else owes you. What kind of person is he? He doesn't know a thing about worldly things. What kind of thing is he writing? Is this a novice?

There is also a Super Saiyan with 8000 combat power, which is really unbearable 😅

It's extremely poisonous. Run quickly. You won't be able to hold on until you reach the earth. There are more and more strange fan settings

I saw it was less than 30%, I really can't watch it anymore I know that Frieza will destroy the planet, but I still have to check a bunch of things, and I have to take two oil bottles with me when I leave. Well, I can say that it's emotional. I just say that I saw the future or something, and I keep rambling. I have to act with them Carefully maintain the "original" just to make Goku lose his memory. As a result, he lost his memory early, and he collected the dragon balls to make a lot of stuff. West, it feels like a battle of wits and courage with the air There is a lot of mental activity, the strength is slowly improving, and I keep emphasizing that the protagonist is actually very strong, and then he rushes to fight Gula with arrogance, and finally gets beaten and runs away To be honest, the psychology, temperament, and IQ of the protagonist are worrying. The heroine is actually Bulma, but in the end, I have to create an original heroine, which is purely a hindrance.

Female Master

It is extremely poisonous, and the protagonist does all kinds of incredible things, such as not letting Jinai go to find Kakarot, just to make Kakarot become Sun Wukong. For example, in front of Ji Nei, he pretended not to know about Dragon Balls or Fairy Beans. He kept pretending to be himself. It was so artificial and tiring to watch.

1. After waiting for nearly half a month, we still haven't searched for the Dragon Balls together 2. We met Gohan and Goku in a reasonable way, but we haven't told Ji Nei yet 3. Trying to find ways to prevent Ji Nei from intervening in Goku's life on earth to prevent Goku from growing up! ! Against the Heavens A mother who lost her husband, eldest son, and younger son knew about the younger son and still tried to stop her. What the hell kind of plot is this? Just so that the growth of Wukong in the so-called original plot is not affected? Then why do you write fan fiction? Wouldn't it be nice if everyone just watched the anime? I didn't want to send a message at first, but after looking for the various naughty actions before and after Dragon Ball and the comments from many readers, I thought that's it. Bless the author and hope for a good creation, I withdrew.

Knowing that Planet Vegeta is about to be destroyed, if you don't leave, you have to wait for Bardock to come back and confirm the time before leaving. What a talent.

Tallot

At the beginning, because in the setting of Dragon Ball Super, Raditz is an advanced warrior with only 1500 combat power, so most of the Saiyans' combat power is only a few hundred, which is considered to be the author's second setting. The next few million with a combat power of hundreds of thousands will be fine enough to become a Super Sailor. But your combat power of only a few hundred million in Super Saiyan 2 is too weak. Mechagrave has a combat power of 10 billion. After that, you even broke through to Super 4 with tens of millions of combat power, but you are already Super 4, why do you still need to beat Frieza to break through to Super 3? For the sake of water plot, Frieza and his family are not going to fight, which is called creating pressure for themselves. Frieza's family has been practicing one by one, and their combat power has increased dozens of times after practicing for several months. Frieza can directly transform from 100 million combat power to golden Frieza by practicing casually in his hometown? Dragon Ball Super's power is already broken, and you are even more broken than him. Every time he fights, Raditz has to go first, and a lot of people lament. If he can't beat the protagonist, then he goes up, and a lot of people sigh. The protagonist never uses all his strength from the beginning. He has to put some pressure on himself to break through even if he fights with tens of millions of combat power and one million combat power? Where does the pressure come from?

This protagonist makes me feel very hypocritical and disgusting.

After watching 52, my whole feeling changed after going to Earth. The author did not deal with the problem between Ji Nei and Goku well. He either didn't go so early or went to meet him early. He said at the beginning that it would be fine as long as he didn't interfere. Then he turned to Ji Nei and told him that he was going to Earth to find his son. He didn't let him see him when he arrived. He coaxed and deceived him and did other things. It seemed disgusting, hypocritical, and disobedient. He said that they were like his biological parents, but in the end, you treated his biological parents like this.

No wonder the grades are not good. You should either stop writing about the Kakarot family. If you want to write, you should respect the mother's wishes and not make your own decisions You might as well be like Broly and go to a planet with a harsh environment in the universe to train yourself and live alone. You have no brain at all and you are a thirty-year-old time traveler. You are really a chicken with no sense of proportion.

A good passionate fighting IP with so many people and sophistication. Do Saiyans want to take the public exam?

The combat power is too overwhelming. Do you dare to imagine breaking through more than 200,000 and less than 700 million combat power? It is as difficult as squeezing toothpaste to increase the combat power little by little. Sun Wukong can be seriously injured from 90,000 to 3 million. The protagonist is afraid of that. The combat power is suppressed to death. With an increase of hundreds of thousands or hundreds of thousands, it is extremely difficult to increase the combat power by one million. It is just like improving the combat power of an earthling. It is disgusting.

I'm such a coward. I have 1,200 combat power but I'm afraid of a monster with over 400 combat power. I can kill it with just my fingers. It's very dangerous. It's very dangerous indeed.

We brought back Bulma and No. 18 From other time and space. We are not writing a harem story. Two female protagonists are enough!

The protagonist can feel the breath of God at the beginning. Why should he abandon the near and seek the far away? Why not practice divine power?

I have read so many Dragon Ball fanfics, and the protagonist in this one is the most rubbish. The protagonists in other Dragon Ball have improved very quickly, and are calculated according to the normal growth rate of a Saiyan. But it is really rare for the protagonist to be rubbish like this. He has been promoted to Super Saiyan IV, and his combat power does not exceed 10 billion. He is still so proud, and he has become rubbish like this. Can you believe it?

There are traces of the protagonist's strength improvement, but the improvement is too slow. The protagonist has been practicing without taking a break. But after more than 100 chapters, the protagonist's basic combat power is only over 1.6 Million. In this case, the protagonist written in the novel can become a super Saiyan. Doubling it would only cost over 80 million. No, I haven't stopped practicing! That combat power increases so slowly. Even if you write about a protagonist who has practiced cultivation for 10 years and then rested for three years. I have no problem with the combat power increasing so little, but the protagonist never rests. The combat power has not increased so much. Moreover, Sun Wukong was injured in the original play, and his combat power soared to 3 million in a short period of time. However, the protagonist was injured, and after recovering, his combat power increased by 300,000. Okay, okay, the potential of higher-level warriors is not as high as that of lower-level warriors, right? 🙂 And this novel only has more than 400 chapters in total. The basic combat power of more than 100 chapters is only over 1.6 Million. An estimate of 200 would be more than 4 million. Then calculate your 400 basic combat power. It is estimated to be only over 10 million. This 100-fold increase in combat power is only 1 billion in combat power! Isn't it because every time you fight in the future, you will put on "Super Saiyan + 10-100 times Kaio Fist + Super Four" to increase the boost? Of course, you can also directly use the collapse force like Big Bird and add a few zeros at the end? Overall, I feel average. I have been practicing, and my basic combat power has never stopped growing so slowly. And the protagonist has the potential to be a superior warrior.

The author has great ideas, but it's a pity that you and I have no fate and can only escape 😜 You can control your own anger, but you were discovered by the God Piccolo before you even reached the Celestial Temple? On Namek, Vegeta was even stronger than Gohan and couldn't be found. In the early stages of the Cell arc, Piccolo was stronger than Cell and couldn't be tracked. As a result, the protagonist was discovered by the god Piccolo as soon as he arrived on Earth 🤔🤔🤔

The more I write about it, the more boring it becomes. The same battles. There are probably only a dozen chapters of daily life out of hundreds. The rest are all repetitive battle scenes.