Naruto, I, Makima, Am Really Not a Bad Woman.

If you replace all the names of Machima in the article with other names, you won't be able to tell that it is Machima that is written here. Has the author never thought about how Makima would speak? She always speaks firmly and is flirtatious even when she is frivolous. She only seduces Denji because the chainsaw demon is special. She is gentle and convincing to her subordinates and others, and she does not seduce anyone else at all. In addition, even when he was using a black chainsaw, he did not show any uneasiness and maintained a strong character at all times. If you are not good enough when writing this kind of fan fiction, why not study other people's descriptions? I don't know how people who specialize in writing Machima fanfics write, but at least she doesn't end more than 5 out of 10 sentences with "ba" and a question mark, and she doesn't need to "promise" anything to others.

Two suggestions that have nothing to do with subjective taste.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           off all out out of my mind. Always mentioning the protagonist's past life and even writing down the name, experiences and emotions, this is a writing method that is no less than self-explosion. As far as this book is concerned, there are no more than two main audiences. One is a person who wants to see how bad women "play" in the ninja world. The second type is to "experience personally" how bad women play in the ninja world. So you are emphasizing the identity of the previous life and even writing the name directly, which will create a certain degree of separation between the protagonist and the bad woman. Reduce the experience of Type 1 fun-lovers. As for the second category, unless his name happens to be Liu Le, otherwise~ Then there is writing novels, and the most taboo thing is to directly describe the character's psychological activities in a positive way. Even if you are not good at describing psychological activities from the side, do not directly write the so-called inner voice, especially the author's narration. There are 1,000 kinds of Hamlet in the eyes of 1,000 people. There is enough blank space for the character's psychological activities, allowing readers to make up their own minds, which can avoid the embarrassment and poisonous points that most readers feel. In the description of this book, there are too many positive descriptions of the psychological activities of the characters, especially too much of what is in the heart. You must know that for a character like a bad woman, if you only describe the external actions, you may feel that there are problems and imperfections, but it is acceptable, but if you write too much about the inner words, the style will be lost.

Is this a story about a man dressing up as a woman and then acting like a green tea bitch to hook up with a plot character?

The popularity of Chainsaw Man is over, why are you writing about it now?

Very nice, she has the feeling of a bad woman in my mind, but the author's last book only had 1.5 Million words, which is a bit scary. Do you mind if I wait and see the book?

How to teach people to be villains, answer: Bobo thought, it is best to educate people from an early age. It is better to cultivate a paranoid character. It is best to tell bedtime stories (all bedtime stories modified towards paranoia). Instead of cultivating an evil character, it is better to cultivate paranoia. In this way, no matter what things and consequences they do, they will feel that they are right. What is wrong with his original intention? He just wants to ask everyone to go to the box before completing the grand goal 1. The more the enemy opposes me, the more it means I am doing the right thing. 2. If even my enemies have to support me, it means I am doing the right thing. 3. The more my friends support me, the more it means I am doing the right thing. 4. If a friend opposes me, it means that he is also my enemy. 5. A passerby supports me, which means he is my friend. 6. If a passerby opposes me, it means that he is my enemy. 7. Enemies, friends, and passers-by all don't speak, which means there is no doubt that I am right.

Forcibly adapting to the character of a bad woman can indeed bring a certain sense of pleasure, but now the main character takes over the main role, and the protagonist does it for the sake of 🐴, which makes it a bit boring.

The protagonist's starting point is very high, but the author's writing is not interesting and seems uninteresting.

It's boring. Various late-stage patches will be applied to weaken the combat power.

If you dare to let Machima change her gender to a boy, this book will explode immediately. How did you come up with such a vicious plot?

The second article about the hunter was a failure. The hunter's style of painting is completely inconsistent with Magima.

I don't know much about the bond between the protagonist and Izumi Uchiha, it's a little bit poisonous

Makima is a bad woman, not a coquettish one...

That's outrageous. With such combat power, can't we just push it evenly?

In the hunter chapter, Makima's control ability was directly cut off... It's completely gone. What you are looking at is Makima. Without control, what is Makima?

Uchiha too titty? Or Aunt Uchiha?

I feel that Magima is not too strong in Naruto, not as oppressive as Mitaka. Naruto's fighting and killing style is most suitable for war demons. As long as there is a fight, people will be afraid. The greater the fear, the stronger the strength. Another illusion, control is the Tanaka Spinal Sword

By the way, which one is worse and more cruel compared to Makima or Enoshima Shields

Alive~

I saw the author, coding in an Internet cafe 🙂

Makima's ability to subjectively control regardless of the power gap is very good. She uses Xiao Hei as a consumable in the meat processing factory, raises parasitic beast ghouls, develops Fujiang for various purposes, and uses the bone-eating well to control five hundred years ago. After a period of interruption, it seems that the whole world united against the protagonist.

🌿 Looking at the title of the book, I think Shaqima is not a bad woman 😁

There is a theory. When I read your book, I was inspired by "2077 Cyberpunk". What kind of story would happen if the High Table in the movie John Wick appeared in Night City? The High Table has single-handedly established the dark side of Night City and even the entire world. The beggars on the roadside, the wanderers in the wasteland, the NCPD in the city, and even some employees in various giant companies may all be members of the High Table. When all the giant companies and even Saburo Arasaka thought they owned the world, they discovered that the world has a dark side and huge forces that make their scalp numb. By the way, John Wick, Johnny Silverhand's twin brothers, it feels like it is an interesting subject to start with.

A story about two male protagonists, "The Last One" The first male protagonist is ugly and lecherous. He was supposed to be the devil in the world of demons. But by some mistake, he was recognized as the holy son of the fairy world. From then on, he embarked on the path of the prodigal son's return... The second male protagonist, his personality, is upright and handsome. He was supposed to be the holy son of the fairy world. But by mistake, he was destined to be the holy son of the fairy world. Next, he was identified as the Demon Son of the Demon Realm, and has since embarked on the path of becoming a villain... The story unfolds between these two half-brothers... This is the theme of this novel, if you are interested in reading it, read it, at least the logic is online, the plot is reasonable, and there are laughs and tears. Welcome to complain