Cultivation: Who Asked Him to Innovate the Technique?

It's so chaotic. Everyone wants the protagonist to die. The protagonist is already in his third life and still has no memory. He behaves like a fledgling and causes trouble everywhere.

To be honest, your idea is a good one. But maybe when you first start writing, there are a lot of poisonous points in the plot. I suggest you reopen it.

Although he has a golden finger that can quietly develop into invincibility, the protagonist goes out to cause trouble and is then chased crazily. The chase is not over yet, there is a destiny protagonist in the rebirth story, and if you try to steal his opportunity, you will be unlucky. It's really tiring to watch.

Very creative! But the logic of the story cannot be explained. Three lives are telling readers what failure is! With a plug-in, a plug-in that takes time to grow, and puts itself in all kinds of dangers, is so stupid that it is impossible to say that immortality is the biggest counter-logic!

What is that? It doesn't matter, it's not much anyway. Just update.

There are a lot of poisonous points. If it weren't for the creativity, I really wouldn't want to read it.

Hmm... After all, novices have been reborn three times. They have been punished at every turn, and they have suffered misfortune at every step. The rebirth is not written well. I look like an idiot. After reading 60 chapters, I can't stand it anymore. The theme and setting are very novel~

I feel that the plug-in for deducing exercises can be developed. The exercises to be deduced later will definitely be more advanced and cannot be increased by 5 points and 5 points. As the level increases, daily deduction points must be a routine operation. You can also add exercises and spells that have a certain reference effect on the exercises to be deduced. Creations or formations can increase the deduction progress of a certain exercise by a percentage Give this plug-in the function of the entire fusion exercise, In the later stage, it may be possible to deduce and refine a heavenly secret deduction-like magic weapon based on the principles of quantum computers, or the formation array can increase the deduction speed

"Who made him enter Taoism?" " "Waiting to die? What a country of death!" "Hmm." A male voice caused the cat-loving lady to squint. Discussing the matter, Banxia began to output: "From my subjective point of view, objectively speaking... It was not caused by you, why should you apply it?!" The crimson lady was speechless for a moment, and her brows tightened. "Even if you didn't create it, regardless of the facts..." Banxia is still exporting, he is still exporting! A sound of machinery being pulled apart sounded. The black muzzle occupies the blue team's output position's field of vision. The hem of his skirt moved slightly, and His Excellency the Supreme Judge took out a large-caliber Mauser gun from somewhere. For a while. Someone who stopped talking only knew one thing. Noisy, noisy, why does this still have a gun? …… [Short introduction] Integration of hundreds of schools of thought, twenty-four histories, English and Japanese history Fantasy, fantasy, history, light novels, toolless heroine (the first and only one to like my profile is a female username with a female avatar) Farming, cultivation, sword and magic, lord, interracial harem? Dare you ask your friends for review!

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The author is still persisting, come on. In your case, keep writing until you reach a million words, and the better you write. There is little hope in revising the front

I know myself as a new author. There are many shortcomings in various aspects such as writing skills, plot design, and character creation. So I hope readers can leave a message here to point out errors. Thank you very much! Thank you sponge!

A story about two male protagonists, "The Last One" The first male protagonist is ugly and lecherous. He was supposed to be the devil in the world of demons. But by some mistake, he was recognized as the holy son of the fairy world. From then on, he embarked on the path of the prodigal son's return... The second male protagonist, his personality, is upright and handsome. He was supposed to be the holy son of the fairy world. But by mistake, he was destined to be the holy son of the fairy world. Next, he was identified as the Demon Son of the Demon Realm, and has since embarked on the path of becoming a villain... The story unfolds between these two half-brothers... This is the theme of this novel, if you are interested in reading it, read it, at least the logic is online, the plot is reasonable, and there are laughs and tears. Welcome to complain

Shen Nong's Test of Poison is another one of my favorites, Shen Nong's Test of a Hundred Herbs, a classic lv1 author + a new book with less than 200,000 words. No matter how you write, I hope you can live to have more than a million words. 1. A common problem for new authors is that the book will not be written by coincidence. Whatever the protagonist lacks, someone will give it to him.

For me, this novel is not straightforward enough, and the setting is a bit confusing. I don't know what to say after reading it. Every function that appears to be a failure in other novels is clearly explained, and it is too dark and it is not the protagonist. Then I wrote a novel with a magical place and a novel setting. I can find the main line in it and continue reading. It is actually well written, but it is over for me, and I cannot accept the subsequent plot.

It shouldn't be called a black hole, it's more appropriate to call it a mixed hole The same goes for quantum, it would be more appropriate to use induction.

It's too chaotic and too fast-paced. Come on