
NBA: Dude Just Comes Here to Work
NBA:哥们只是来这儿上班的
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 139k Words
- Genre
- Sports
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Basketball
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Don't mention men's basketball and the Basketball Association, and the Olympics
If you have any unacceptable poisonous points in basketball writing, please mention them. If I can avoid them, I will try to avoid them. If I accidentally write them and can change them, I will change them immediately.
From now on, two chapters will be updated at the same time at 8 o'clock every morning, so everyone knows.
224 Male protagonists/182 female protagonists, 40 centimeters difference, this woman is suffering from old age.
Opinion post
Everyone is welcome to point out unreasonable things in the book. As long as what you say makes sense and you can correct it, I will definitely correct it.
Daily Detox is well-deserved, and the TJ book also recommends it
Is the author serious about this heroine? Choosing one from a pile of small cards, the author crows a chicken to express his feelings.
As long as the protagonist's strength and speed are charged, the impact is stronger than that of James and Wade combined, and it is unstoppable.
Okay, why should you go to the Los Angeles Lakers? You think if you don't go to the Lakers, no one will watch it, right? What do you think? If you want to have hot spots to attract book friends and make up for your regrets, then you might as well go to the Magic in the 95/96 season, the SuperSonics (Thunder) in the 96/97 season, Utah in the 97/98 season, the Knicks in the 98/99 season, the Kings in the 99/00 season, the digital man in the 00/01 season, the Pacers in the 01/02 season, and the Nets in the 02/03 season! The regrets of many celebrities are included in it. If necessary, I can help you add more later.
When writing about basketball and football these days, the most basic thing is not to write about men's basketball and football, as well as associations and the Olympics, because a large number of people are disgusted with this. Of course, it is not ruled out that a small number of people like it, but that is only a small part.
The protagonist is too tall, just like the center does not sell shoes, there is no market.
Personally, I think the main character is too tall. 2.08 To 2.13 Meters is just right.
Ask everyone something
There is a very real problem now, and that is about the proportion of basketball content and non-basketball content. I asked some authors who wrote basketball novels, and the feedback I received was that just writing about basketball content would make readers feel that it is watery, especially since the year I wrote about has been badly written. They suggested that I should write about off-court content appropriately. My current idea here is to write some daily life of the male and female protagonists and add music combined with the stadium to adjust the ratio, so that the basketball and non-basketball content can be maintained between 3:1 and 5:1. What do you think of this ratio? I will listen to your opinions and control the ratio.
Others are okay, but the personal attributes of the protagonist feel too exaggerated 😰 It's okay to set the protagonist to fish, after all, you'll get tired of being the same.
It looks okay, nothing poisonous, at least so far. The plot is a bit draggy, and the protagonist's cheating is too strong. I don't know if it can be rounded out in the follow-up. If this book can maintain its current level, I will continue to read it.
Men's basketball and international competitions are allowed, but don't be too detailed. Otherwise it will be very discouraging.