Reincarnation: Usurping Entries Starting from Doupo

The introduction is cool, but after reading a few chapters, I am constantly abusing the protagonist. It's very contradictory. If you want to write a cool story, then the introduction and content must be cool. If you want to write a sad story, then both the introduction and content must be sad. You've made yourself a human being inside and out.

After reading the latest two chapters, I can only say 6. This feeling of being surrounded by everyone in the early stage is enough to weaken the excitement of the novel. You still have to do this, the villain repeatedly jumps around, and the buffs are full. This is

In the opening setting, why was the protagonist's original body tried so hard to kill, and even poisoned in the sixth-grade elixir that even the Lord God couldn't detect? Why did he go to such great lengths? It's better to kill him directly. What's there to think about in the original body?

Why do you want to suppress it? Are you afraid that readers will enjoy it?

There are so many important figures appearing in the first place, and there is a conflict between the one who grabs entries and plots Yunyun's recruitment of disciples, the one who gives the elixir, and the one who gives the elixir. Will this make things smoother later?

Come on, you do have a lot of poisonous points

Reincarnators are like players, forces are like guilds, and various entries are like plug-ins. The protagonist's plug-in can also change entries and so on. There are a lot of reincarnation characters in the first few chapters, and later there are some emotional entanglements with the original characters. Personally, it feels like falling in love with a paper man or a programmer. Even if it is flesh and blood, it is also a forced setting. I personally don't like this setting, so I'd like to comment on it so that people who have similar preferences to me can try it out.

How to put it, I think the author has a good idea and has his own ideas, but there are still some problems, such as the card setting problem. It is best that only the reincarnation can see it, and it will disappear when the reincarnation dies, and will only occasionally be left in the ring and other important personal items. It is best if the character card cannot be replaced. If it can be replaced later, it is best for me to absorb all the talents of the character card before replacing it. Is there a limit? Furthermore, according to my understanding after reading the book, the entries refer to the protagonist's own special abilities. Others' deprivation of the protagonist's talent is based on performance, not on the entries, otherwise it would not be very meaningful. Finally, it is a system issue. The best world in which the main theme is located is the original world system ability. If there are too many other world system abilities, no one may care about it. Other world system abilities can only be used as trump cards and not as regular means. Of course, this is just my little idea. It would be nice if you write according to your own ideas.

It's not fun to watch! The Immortal Sword thing is too weird. Should I change the world and system and rebuild it? Don't follow one path to the end.

Don't be a eunuch, I finally found a fanfic that suits my taste. I also like the character of the protagonist, and my good friend Mengli 😰

Hey, the introduction to this book is so familiar. I seem to have read it somewhere.

One update a day, less than 3,000 words per update? Is this going to be written until the year of the monkey and the month of the horse? If the author is not good, you just cut it and re-open it. The current situation is probably because the performance is too poor and the updates are not effective. The pain you wrote is also painful for us to follow. I read about 10 chapters of Ten Geniuses and finished it in less than half an hour. I don't even know when it will be put on the shelves now. 😥

Have you summoned Long Live? I feel like I can link up with Chong Mei.

That's it, it's not that the author hasn't updated it, the above 😭😭

I have caught up with the latest chapter. The writing style and concept of the fanfic are pretty good, and the emotional scenes are also pretty good. It suits my taste. Come on, author 🤓