Starting from Life Skills, Liver Becomes a Concept God

The writing is okay, I just need to wait and see the later stages. Don't lay too much foreshadowing that you won't be able to pull back from.

When others awaken, they have Daxia Golden Scales, SSS-level talents, and the protagonist is a soul-devouring waste body. Any cultivator, the first time he sees the protagonist - wow, isn't this a soul-devouring waste body? Passers-by laughed mindlessly. In the ancient plot, the heroine Shizun saw the protagonist for the first time The protagonist is either exhausted or on the way to becoming exhausted. I couldn't stand it after reading twenty or thirty chapters. I read the book after reading the reviews. Although some people said it was poisonous, I still clicked in and read it. Because the author said that he buried a lot of foreshadowing and the "collision between cultivating immortals and conceptual gods", I wanted to take a look, but I didn't see much foreshadowing, but a lot of poison. As for the "collision between cultivating immortals and conceptual gods", I thought it was about cultivating immortals while improving skills, and using the abilities derived from the liver to complement the cultivators. Who knew that it was impossible to cultivate immortals, and the collision was with the cultivators of immortals. If the collision between your "immortal cultivator and conceptual god" is that the protagonist uses the conceptual god's power to crush the immortal cultivator, that would be a bit satisfying and would keep people reading, but in the book, he is completely crushed by the immortal cultivator. It's not just the waste flow, there are other problems. For example, the plot is more impetuous than me, coming up like crazy. Before one plot ends, the next one pops up. The protagonist's ability is the liver skill, but there is basically no plot about the liver skill. You know, the reason I clicked here after reading the title of your book was "life skills", "liver", and "conceptual god". These three are basically not reflected.

The heroine at the beginning is not pleasing to the eye, and then it is still a completely different starting point for a loser, and the old man thinks you are a loser. It might still look good in 15 years

I read the author's replies in other posts again. Your settings are not reflected in the text. Why do you want readers to guess for themselves? This is the result of the plot unfolding too quickly at the beginning. Nothing is introduced, leaving you confused and confused.

I was so confused that I didn't even know what they were talking about. Moreover, the main character was obviously dishonest and was still going around to join in the fun. It made me feel uncomfortable.

The author wants to write about the collision between cultivating immortals and conceptual abilities, but the collision does not mean that they are hostile. The first impression of almost all the official cultivators I meet is that they are hostile to the protagonist. They either start to show off, or look down on them with cold eyes. There are also exaggerated cases where they feel that just because the protagonist reveals his abilities in front of the public, he feels that he is provoking the official forces and showing murderous intent.

He died of a poisonous attack. He dreamed of going back to the year 2000. When he meets an old man, he wants to become his disciple?

The book I read today, how should I put it, feels that the pace is too fast. As soon as I come in, there are a lot of things, and the liver function is of no use. I feel confused when I read it. Anyway, it's not a particularly attractive way of writing. At least it gives the protagonist a growth process. He is just an ordinary person. After gaining abilities, he can deal with all kinds of events so well? The events have to come bit by bit, it has to be a bit daily. Anyway, after reading dozens of chapters, the author's rhythm and plot are quite radical.

I can understand why you and Zhao Lingyue were hiding at home after the explosion, but you met so many enemies when you went out, and then you returned to your home after the incident was over? We all know that the government has come after you, and you also know that there is a traitor in the government. In addition, you have been harmed by others. It's too cruel for you to force yourself to go home. I don't understand. Finding a place outside is better than your home at the bus station.

I buried a ghost-devouring body foreshadowing, writing it for the future high martial arts dungeon, but I was scolded as a loser, and suppressed the protagonist. The protagonist was so fierce 😭. This is an upgrade article, not an invincible article. What I want to write is [the collision of conceptual abilities and the immortal cultivation system]. I want everyone to see something different. The protagonist cultivates immortality and has conceptual skills that are very messy. If I really write this, it will break down the brothers, and the combat power will be completely destroyed. I want to write for a longer time, so I will solve the first dungeon of Spirit Devourer. I have made a lot of preparations for this dungeon, mainly the story of Liu Ruyan. I will see if I can express what I am thinking. This requires writing power, and I am also practicing. I hope everyone will spray lightly 😭

Unlock - open the door - open the vault - open the maze - open the defense - brain mystery lock - open the molecular force - unlock the body shackles, sanctify the body, and transform into Pangu. - Release the shackles of the spirit, the pollution of the spiritual body, and achieve indescribable achievements. -Unlock the shackles of space, travel through diversity, and control the main god space. - Unlock the shackles of time and realize the original path. I am the cause of all effects. 11111111111111111111 Is all ok

I looked at the character sheet. A green tea female partner has many likes. . There are so many masochists in reality

Isn't it good to be on the streets for ten thousand years? I need to write something different

No, I have to learn AI painting at the same time as I am writing the game. I want to draw Zhao Lingyue and Xia Zixuan 😡

The plot has unfolded. Everyone, help me move your little hands. Even if you are a book lover, help me move your little hands to pull out the latest chapter. The new book issue is really important. Let me give a thumbs up to the big guys first 😭

I worked hard to code and organize the outline. If readers give me a chance, I will write the plot seriously and accept all suggestions.

In the game of chicken, hide and choose your nest. Like a puzzle question. Write the answer on the table. Just look at it

Eating and breathing don't count, studying counts and reading counts. Isn't there any conflict? The writing of these is basically divided along a line.

Thank you very much to all the readers who gave me suggestions. I would like to express my sincere gratitude in advance. Let me talk about the feedback I have received so far. The official sword-wielding problem mainly focuses on the three people who show murderous intentions towards the protagonist. I hinted at this in the article. Those three people are actually spies of other sects. In the early stages of changing the world, the official is planning, and the hidden sect is also planning. They also want to balance the official to gain status for themselves, so there must be someone sneaking into the sword-wielding people. This makes sense logically. Their purpose is to drive a wedge between the sword-wielding people and the wild awakened ones. As the top person in charge of Yuehai City, Wang Mingzhu has a deep scheming and can see it directly. However, he is currently short of manpower, so he sent them to the Salt Lake Desert. (Later, the three of them were destroyed by the Sword King of Daxia Jinlin. Let's not go into details about this follow-up plot.) I need to admit that the second Feng Liang character is handled. I didn't write out his character arc. Only by facing your own problems can you make better progress. I didn't write well at this point. I sincerely hope that everyone will give me a chance. I will be more serious about subsequent characters. In fact, what I wanted to write was that he was a person who had a high self-esteem, but was not a bad person. He also died to help the protagonist, but I didn't write it well. The third Master Zhao Lingyue, just think of her as short-sighted for the time being. Except for ancient monks like Liu Ruyan, modern monks really don't know Bai Li's physique, especially since the Xuanyuan family has caused a historical vacuum period of more than 2,000 years. Master Zhao Lingyue hopes that Zhao Lingyue will find a good home, so he keeps the protagonist away from him. (Ps: The heroine has not been decided yet. I will write some other outstanding characters later depending on the situation, both male and female. I think many people seem to have a good impression of Zhang Quanying, and he also has a big line.) At present, the feedback I have received is mainly concentrated on these three points, and there are not many others. I admit that there are many shortcomings, but the logic of story arrangement can actually form a closed loop. If you see it, I hope it can give me a chance to improve...