This Wizard Can See Billions of Hints

The protagonist awakens an elemental body, is tortured by things that come from unknown sources for more than ten days, and is then forcibly impregnated. Author, are you awake?

The protagonist is thrown into a world created by a wizard at the beginning, and the wizard is still conducting some kind of experiment in it. After reading more than ten chapters, I don't understand what kind of experiment I want to do. I feel that it just gives the protagonist a place of birth, which is boring. Moreover, the protagonist's golden finger must have extraordinary power before he will give a hint. Change the billion to one. It is really not too much at all. Can you believe that there is a hint. The result is that he is becoming the Riddler.

My evaluation is as follows: First, I completed the dungeon in the first thirty chapters and got on the right track, and then until the latest chapter, there was no plot advancement at all. It can really be said that there was no progress at all. You didn't write about what to learn, how to become stronger through what means, how to use cheats to become stronger, you didn't write about it, and then you didn't write about how to choose multiple courses to learn, so you just went to take the task. . . Secondly, it doesn't matter if you don't advance the main plot. The protagonist's strength in question has not improved, and it has not been written to be interesting at all. You have to write to be interesting to attract readers. The cool thing is either developing golden fingers, secretly accumulating strength, or studying the secret coolness of slowly getting stronger, and then accumulating strength to pretend to be Poppy, etc. You have no problem An Shuang, Ming Shuang has not directly accepted the task, how to attract readers. In addition, the elemental ontology you wrote may have been intended to be fun and reflect the protagonist's talent, but during the subsequent conspiracy and threats, this fun point was wiped out, and he was no longer cool. Finally, realistically speaking, if you don't advance the plot or write exciting points, not many people will subscribe to it after it is put on the shelves, and it will be difficult to support it.

For the first dungeon, I can only say that it's a bit foggy and the story is sparse.

That's bullshit, the early werewolves were invincible. The protagonist drowns when the house collapses on him and smashes it into the sea. We don't know why the collapse of the house can knock the werewolf into the sea and almost kill him. The house is not built on the sea. Then after a few chapters, the protagonist didn't get any improvement. Just kill a dozen werewolves back to back with the heroine. Ah? Author, are you sober? Are you kidding me? If you want to have high combat power, then have high combat power; if you want to have low combat power, then have low combat power. No need for any reason, right?

My writing skills are okay, but the opening copy was written inexplicably, and I thought it was some way to break the game. In the end, I got a bunch of numbers and just put it aside to buy the Mark Six lottery, right? It just seems to be very logical

Anna is new😁😁

At the beginning, there is no difference between whether you are hanging up and not. All you can get is common sense that others know. Logically speaking, shouldn't you be able to see all his information when hanging up?

Female video author? The style feels so strange!

It's quite interesting, but the description could be simplified The main plot is too slow It might have been readable ten years ago But I don't have so much patience these days The descriptions in many places are too detailed The details are too immersive But there are too many and the plot moves very slowly Forget about magic-related ones At least it's quite novel But a mission in the Wizard Tower is only two chapters The process of returning home is another chapter And these are two in one If you only write 10,000 or 20,000 words a day, forget it If this continues, the content of other novels will be 10,000 words It may take 40,000 to 50,000 words to finish here I think your book will be eaten to death

Xiaomo

It's a drama that specializes in looking at crooked people. How could there be so many crooked people? It's because I'm a lunatic and I'm specializing in the lunatic circle, right?

What is Chapter 17 about? Suddenly a bunch of people wrote

It's so poisonous that Chengdu is here, and King of Glory will be here soon 🙂

There is too much content, too complicated, and too many things are crammed into the first 100 chapters. When I read 50 chapters, I can no longer remember the contents of the first ten chapters.

It's 300,000 words, why hasn't it been released yet? Is this a eunuch's pace? It looks like the results should be pretty good.

I don't really agree that there is no use for human beings. Meeting a witch only reminded me that I can fall in love, but I didn't open my mind to it.

300 Billion degrees Celsius, the maximum temperature of the corona is only a few million degrees Celsius. Supernovae are not as hot as you.