I Was in the Hokage, and I Accidentally Became an Immortal.

It can only be said that it follows the style of most Naruto fans. The protagonist, the time traveler, was brainwashed by the indigenous people of Naruto. His thoughts are not outstanding, but he has thinking beyond the local. The shortcomings don't have a big picture. For example, in the Escape from Konoha book, the protagonist also has a relatively distinct personality, and he wants to oppose Konoha at the beginning. The protagonist of this book is too close to Konoha. Stylistically, I don't think it suits me.

It's too late, there are still 5 years left, you can't practice anything at all, even if you absorb the natural energy, you are still a scumbag who is only one or two levels in the Qi training period. Before ninjas, there were onmyoji, which absorbed natural energy. There are also Buddhist temples.

In the world of Naruto, there are underworld, gods of death and evil spirits, shrine maidens and dragon veins, which are obviously not suitable for the style of ninjas. Hagoromo's own title is also the Sage of Six Paths. From the name, the magic weapons of Sage of Six Paths look like monks' things, and from the effect, they don't look like things that chakra can produce. The Sage of Six Paths will stand on the side of humans, and why he is so awesome. I think it should be that he has received part of the inheritance of cultivating immortals. The celestial arts in the three major psychic holy places should themselves be demonic arts practiced by monsters, so people will take on their own animal characteristics after practicing them. A bold guess is that the world of Naruto used to be a world of immortals, with immortals, monsters, gods, monsters and other forces. After a great war, all the masters died, and Otsutsuki took advantage of the opportunity to come in and cleanse again. Only some of the spiritual beasts raised by the sects in the three small worlds survived. These were the later three holy places. Due to the sacred tree, all the original cultivation methods in the entire Naruto world were abolished. (The body cell density of people in the Naruto world is three times that of people on earth. It is reasonable to suspect that they are affected by the sacred tree. Even after the sacred tree is destroyed, they are still transforming towards White Zetsu). The Six Paths Sage distributed chakra to everyone perhaps in order to use the power of Otsutsuki to curb this influence. It would be great if Boruto was drawn in this direction, but it is still the things about the Otsutsuki family

，，，， The three settings are used as the original design. To be honest, I am tired of conspiracy theories. Other authors say that the third generation is a good person, that is, a good person. Don't worry about the bugs that arise because of this. This is also an iron law in the world of Naruto. It is always said that a leader in the third generation cannot do anything. Don't say that this is a setting that can be added to the characters in comics. There are so many more outrageous things in reality! Without further ado, let's talk about the reasons why I stopped reading. The most direct one is that there are too many details about cultivation, and there are too few plots and character interactions, making it very boring to read. Fan fiction without plots and character interactions is difficult to read, unless you can write a plot comparable to the original work. , The arrangement and design of the cave in the latest plot is a failure in my opinion. First of all, it is too long. There are so many chapters from discovery to preparation to entry, and there are so many things added that are not in the original work. I personally think that the second set of things must be included, but too many will dilute the flavor of the original work! There is also the problem of psychic beasts. There are too many psychic beasts for the protagonist. Everyone else is of the same type, or even just the same ethnic group. The protagonist feels like accepting one after another! Finally, I wish the author better and better as he writes!

Not into conspiracy theories? When the third generation was in power, talents were dying and leaving. After the third generation died, a large number of geniuses emerged.

Chakra is higher than natural energy, okay? Natural energy is only the energy from the birth of the planet. It is fine within the planet, but it is not useful when it goes up to the universe. It's different when you are chakra, you can control time, space, life and death, and resurrection. It is best to let chakra have the nature of natural energy. And if natural energy is higher than chakra, they can just plant some kind of sacred tree and just devour the natural energy. There is no natural energy in the universe

The writing is average, my evaluation.

Just my humble opinion, the author can just write according to his own setting. In my opinion, chakra is also a lower level of natural energy. Its function is to rely on the human body to filter and then discharge it. Natural energy can be better absorbed by the sacred tree. The fruit of the sacred tree is mainly a large amount of natural energy that is gentle and easier to be absorbed by living things. It also has a certain tendency to biologically modify or interfere with evolution. The biological products of the Otsutsuki family. I feel that the human body cannot store natural energy or the upper limit of storage by the human body alone is not high. The Otsutsuki clan has obviously modified themselves to be able to store a large amount of natural energy, and with high power output, there will be lines to cash out. In the later stage, organs that store a large amount of spiritual power, such as the Dantian system, should be transformed. The body will evolve very quickly in the early stage, and humans can be considered longevity in the animal kingdom, at least longer than ordinary snakes and toads. As long as you constantly adjust the level of weakening by absorbing natural energy, you can evolve quickly until a point becomes slow or even stagnant. At this time, you can develop higher-level natural energy, whether it is compression or qualitative change, which is like the golden elixir system. The Yuanying Yuanshen is a more powerful and embodied soul, just like the soul of the Six Paths Immortal, you can write it whether you want to or not. In my opinion, the state of Ninja World Sage's human body is more like imitating the organs of Orochi Sage to absorb natural energy and then restricting them and then relying on chakra dilution to form senjutsu chakra. The toad needs toad oil to imitate the skin, and the orochi is more like a whole body transformation. The safety of the toad family is higher. Relying on sealing techniques to adjust, absorb natural energy and dilute it with chakra in proportion is the normal sage mode in the ninja world. It can be used to develop subordinates. It is not so troublesome for the protagonist. The protagonist can directly blend it with spiritual power in the early stage or directly add the original natural energy by calculating the proportion. It does not need to appear in any form.

In fact, the Otsutsuki clan was originally a clan that captured the energy of the planet to make elixirs. The fruit of the sacred tree was actually the elixir of the planet, which was closer to cultivating immortals. Why did the ninja world turn into chakra? Six Paths Immortal can perfectly master natural energy, but ordinary people cannot. So the Six Paths Sage created the Ninja Sect, extracting physical energy and spiritual energy and merging them with natural energy. This new energy can meet the goal of "connecting others" because other people can learn it. But then, despite the deterioration of the bloodline, it is still difficult to generate such energy. Instead, the natural energy is completely abandoned and becomes a fusion of physical energy and spiritual energy. So cultivating immortality became something strange. (Bushi)

Regardless of the knowledge of the original setting, this book is still worth reading. The writing and story are good. If you study comics and setting books more in the future, you can write better.

Doesn't anyone look down on the fireball? It's still entry-level, C-level ninjutsu, jounin is generally only C-level, and the trump card is B-level.

The protagonist's growth research is too slow, why don't you click on a plug-in to speed it up? It's easy to get tired of writing such detailed research all the time. Will the protagonist go to other worlds in the future? Or do you mean to stay in Hokage until you become a sage? And now I feel that the protagonist is not as good as a person on the third level of Qi training in the world of cultivating immortals. The vortex conversion is not optimized to improve the conversion efficiency, and the acupuncture points are expanded too slowly. It feels like anyone who is more powerful can beat the protagonist, which is a bit frustrating.

It took an ordinary chuunin chakra a year and a half to completely master senjutsu, and he persuaded people to quit at the beginning. You might as well just install a genius character with unique qualifications. Why do you have to follow the mortal stream? If you really set up a normal talent, don't write it so outrageously.

After reading Chapter 8, I feel that there are two places where the drama comes out. 1 Japanese comic characters speak idioms, which does not mean that they cannot be used. They can be used to describe scenery, make statements, or narrate. When I see Japanese comic characters speaking idioms, what comes to my mind is the story of Little Days. There is an old saying in China: Those who know the current affairs are heroes. . . 2 Danzo's subordinates compliment Danzo and please him. The root members are all tool men without emotions. They just complete tasks normally, report tasks, and obey orders. If there are emotions at the root, I don't know how to write the word "death" Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it. If you don't agree, treat it like I didn't say it.

The shadow clone in the author's latest chapter can't get rid of the memory numbness, so why bother talking about it?

The wording is inappropriate, such as the structure of the vortex sealing technique. What does it mean to be relatively independent and relatively connected? They should be related to each other, right? In addition, the human body meridian diagram shown in the anime is the three meridians and seven chakras, not the eight extraordinary meridians. The human body is so complicated, so you just specify 361 acupuncture points? Yang Shen said that he had something to say, and it was a one-yuan number.

Isn't it the first priority to refer to the Three Dantians of Jingqi Shen when creating Dharma? No matter how bad it is, the acupuncture points on the Ren and Du meridian are better, right? No reference to Taiyi Jinhua? Even the three chakras and seven chakras are all on the midline of the trunk, so there is no reason to go to the limbs.

To cultivate immortality is to destroy the ecological balance. Sooner or later, the natural energy will be sucked up by pig's feet. How can things that cannot be used repeatedly survive forever?

Author, the human body defense of immortals is no different from that of ordinary people? , If the nuclear bomb-level output is hard-wired and the immortal body is not dead, then the human body of the immortal is really no different from that of ordinary people? Most novels don't have this kind of defense, except for fantasy and super martial arts levels, okay?

The best Naruto Cultivation fanfic I have seen recently, because it is really about self-exploring a path to Cultivation in the ninja world, and it is not comparable to those genres such as System Rebirth. In addition, I am also looking forward to seeing if there are any tricks in the process of perfecting the wealthy couple's method. I am also a bit curious about how the protagonist became a disciple of Jiraiya in the early stage and how to successfully practice immortal arts.

Actually eating salted tofu brain! ! ! ! ! !

Immortal blessings will live forever and be equal to heaven 🙂

The author should leave the comment section alone and write at his own pace.

So many 1s🙂

Pursuing reading is related to the recommendation of new books, which is very important. Please don't keep books, please.

My only pleasure during the Chinese New Year is to follow this novel (the only thing is to receive red envelopes). You can't live up to my expectations. Having said that, I won't update it soon!!!!!!!

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