Starting by Picking Up Cultivation, I Build a Supreme Clan

Would it kill you to properly allocate your cultivation points to Heavenly Thunder Guidance? Why add points to every worthless cultivation technique you get, every new technique you acquire? What's the point? Randomly adding points is a waste. Why not just break through to the Innate Realm sooner?

There's too much smut; they start by screening readers. The opening scene features two women flirting and making all sorts of dirty jokes, without even explaining the story properly before launching into crude banter.

Before the protagonist learned martial arts, a water demon appeared several years later; after he learned martial arts, he was surrounded by demons.

The male lead has three wives, and after several years of marriage, they still haven't had any children! Turns out, the male lead is also a eunuch.

There's no need to just pick up any cultivation technique you find and add it to your skill list, right? That's a bit of a lapse in judgment.

The novel's cheat codes were already bad enough to last for days. His novel is called "The Noble Family," and damn it, it's almost finished but I haven't seen it produce a single result.

This is unbelievable! Even a primary school student like you would be embarrassed reading this, author.

The later parts get increasingly idiotic, completely illogical. The villains are just as stupid, all they ever ask is, "Who are you?"

He immediately maxed out his swordsmanship upon acquiring cultivation points, but the question is, can the protagonist even wield a sword? From the author's perspective, the protagonist could acquire countless cultivation points later on, but the problem is that the protagonist in the book doesn't know this and just randomly allocates points like an idiot.

The writing is disjointed and rambling, yet the emotions are bland and indifferent, as if no matter how many people die, it doesn't evoke any feeling.