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Posting this, I don't want to offend the author. This book gave me the feeling of being a historical fact, bland and aggrieved. The indigenous protagonist has no ability to change. Until chapter 100, it is a historical record. The protagonist is unable to change anything, including the murder of his father. I can't watch it anymore, because Chen Xiang can be emperor without the protagonist. The protagonist is useless at all. I know that the author wants the protagonist to grow up, but the growth of the indigenous protagonist does not resonate with us readers who read the book. It can only make readers feel frustrated. People who read history want the protagonist to change history, rather than what history is and what the protagonist is.

As a historical novel, this book is obviously pretty good in terms of depiction of the historical background and plot design. It is unavoidable to use a large amount of historical materials, but the flaws do not hide the flaws. As a web article, it is very thoughtful. But there are still some rough parts, and the author still needs to polish some details. For example, it is incredible that the protagonist takes the initiative to let his concubine's younger brother become the heir to inherit his father's title. In the article, the protagonist believes that the eggs of building a family cannot be put in one basket. Although this is not unreasonable, as the eldest son, it is a bit suffocating to take the initiative to help Xiaozong to the position of the great clan. The protagonist will not simply I don't know what the position of this heir means. It's not that the title cannot be passed on to the younger brother in the future, but at this critical moment, if you give up the status of the clan, you may not be able to establish a family temple without usurping the throne. The author's indifference to the patriarchal system makes the protagonist simply like a male college student. When facing the top people in the world, he can talk about etiquette as innocently as a college student who is not deeply involved in the world. And the creation of this protagonist does little to promote the plot. The protagonist does pretty well in things that can really promote the plot. Once the personal relationship between the protagonist's children is involved, he does not consider the consequences at all. There is also the son who was born during the mourning period. In the future, the protagonist's political opponents will not have to find any other reasons to criticize him. One act of unfilial piety can kill him. And judging from the subsequent plot, the protagonist's contraceptive measures are very good. After returning to Jiangnan for several years, he has not been able to give birth to a child, so he has to give birth to a son during the mourning period, right? It's simply toxic.

Stop writing, you are not suitable for eating this bowl of rice

The protagonist's eldest son Hou Chang'an has to change his name, the author. His name violates the taboo of his grandfather Hou Andu. This was a very serious matter in the context of that era. It was a matter of forgetting one's ancestors and would be scolded to death.

Read some content and express your own opinions. Historical literature (except for historical fiction), if you want to change, you cannot be aboriginal. There are many heroic figures in history. No matter how powerful a native you are, you can only play a supporting role among the protagonists of history. If you have no thoughts or changes in concepts, how can you win over those historical protagonists? If it is written successfully, it will be a historical fiction and still controversial. It might as well be time travel or awakening memories.

Is it my imagination? Or is it the power of big data? I feel like there are more and more people writing about the Northern and Southern Dynasties now.

I have just started reading it. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I feel that the writing is very good and the historical knowledge is profound. It seems that I have made full preparations before starting the book. But I came to read the novel and find a sense of substitution from the characters and enter the story as quickly as possible. But the long historical events Case... I might as well watch "Zi Zhi Tong Jian" by myself. It's too dramatic. I just got some feeling from the protagonist, and it's just a large general event. I might as well change my personal perspective, such as Hou Andu or Chen Baxian to write a hearty siege or encounter! Then, historical events are interspersed through dialogues or carefully crafted reports. The psychological descriptions or subtle movements of people make people feel more immersed in it. It can also make people immersed in that period of history through the brutality of the scenes. Novels... We still need to look at the story through people. How can we be immersed in the scene? Maybe it will be better later...

How can you make an initial order of more than 10,000 yuan without having any high-quality products? Don't you even need to restrain yourself from brushing?

I read the title of the book Xiangguo, and the protagonist is a native, basically for Chen Baxian to conquer the world. The author has perfectly screened out 90% of the readers of historical literature 🤭🤭

Is it so expensive to write a book now?

After reading the author's name, I just want to say that no matter how you disparage the benevolent, the king must be the benevolent. This is an eternal truth that applies to everyone.

What's so cool about this? I look so angry at the little family. It seems like they are not as good-looking as those descendants of Mengde in the late Wei and Jin Dynasties.

Is the author here to enjoy life? The data in this book always has a sense of immediateness like Jack Ma's Kung Fu Tao.

The power of money, you guys. .

Why are there so many monthly tickets all of a sudden? When I was called Nan Chao Bu Cang Lu, my performance was mediocre. Suddenly I was in the top three in the monthly voting list, and there were so few posts in the comment area. I have reasonable doubts.

Those who are capable, the book friend values ​​of the four Silver Leagues are all integers. It seems that after reading the free chapters, they immediately decided to reward the silver. For the selection of these four silvers, let's not talk about this book. The author is powerful.

A running account is just like this 😴 Good subject matter but writing style. . Hard to describe in one word

This retro book title, this niche Southern and Northern Dynasties theme, and its indigenous protagonist, with so many negative halos, can achieve such results. The author is quite impressive. There are very few historical articles about the Northern and Southern Dynasties that I can read. I finally found a good one It turns out that the protagonist is an indigenous character, which really makes me scratch my head.

I have only read a few chapters, and it seems that the indigenous protagonist does not have any modern elements (similar to the overthrow of the Han Dynasty, the history modified by the time traveler), and it seems that it is not a fiction. So when you write about a historical figure, isn't it just to add some personal things of your own to what he has recorded? What should I read? Why not read the original text?

This is my first time writing a book review, so the book is very good, but the results are not obvious As an old bookworm who has studied history, I can feel that the author has made great efforts to study the historical materials of the Southern and Northern Dynasties and local county annals It is rare to have such a heart in today's historical area. It's expensive And I chose the Southern and Northern Dynasties, a year that is not well understood by the public. In my opinion, this book is really eye-catching. It is even better than several hydrology books on historical areas that are recognized as the top ones. The author has platinum potential! But there are reasons for such hard work but poor results. A few suggestions 1. Characterization issues It coincides with troubled times and heroes emerge in large numbers. It can be seen that the author wants to include all the heroes in the world in the book, but he is unable to do so. Except for the successful portrayal of the protagonists Xiao Moke, Hou Andu and several emperors of the Southern Dynasties in this book, it can be said that the rest of the book really shows that the writing is not strong enough. Particularly the King of Lanling, a tragic figure who is remembered for his tragedy. He was forced to continue his life as a dog and a mink. He became a public face and lost his heroic spirit. The friendly image of the brother will form a gap with the image of his history itself. The more you write about it, the bigger the problem will be. Forced contrast There are many famous generals in the Three Northern Dynasties. They basically copy the historical encyclopedia and there is basically no description 2. The problem with the title of this book Why is it named Xiangguo? After reading the whole book and adding comments and summaries, is the protagonist's time when he was in power against the Northern Dynasty the center of this book? Are all these in the early stages to pave the way for the protagonist's mental maturity? Will the protagonist not usurp the throne in the end? Once the throne is usurped, the title of the book will collapse! Not usurping the throne is simply forcing loyalty and filial piety. In the era of the Southern and Northern Dynasties, the protagonist came from a family of powerful officials, and he was influenced by it all the way. It's impossible not to usurp the throne! Be careful because the book's title is too much to echo! 3. The context of the book It can be seen that the author is a teenager, a young man, a man in power, and various descriptions of a generation's outstanding growth and road to hegemony. I think it is good, but compared to the public taste, who would want to read a personal biography? I have always felt that the best history book written is about Shao and Song dynasties. Not to mention the actual historical level of grenades, and the extent of private goods. But Grenade obviously followed the historical context and wrote a good book that caters to the public's taste. It is a refreshing article. This is also the key to the success of historical novels. I hope the author will think carefully about it. Now that I see half of this work, I feel like it's just a translation of a historical book, which people don't like to read. Although I like it haha Finally, I hope the author will continue to grow, and I hope that the author, like the protagonist, will finally be as fragrant as the plum blossoms!

When the protagonist can take charge of the military and political affairs, it is basically a replica of Soochow Wu's attack on the Western Jin Dynasty. The southern country is not strong enough and can only wait for civil strife in the north. The only comeback point is when Yuchi Jung and Yang Jian start a war. If the south (Southern Chen) and the north (Turkic) attack at this time, it is still very possible.

I think this book is very well written, with a strong sense of history and logic. But the overall feeling is that the picture is too single, at least what I read is that the picture is too single. The perspective is always with the protagonist as the first perspective. Recommend the author's next book. You can consider writing from different perspectives to enrich the characteristics of the characters.

I saw mixed reviews in the comments section, so I'll give it a try. How is it? Haokan will come back and leave a message.

Speechless... This indigenous protagonist? Are you sure it's going to happen?

Having read the latest chapter, from an outsider's perspective, it can indeed promote the development of the plot and make the characters' arcs fuller. It is indeed a masterstroke. But who can read the novel and be an outsider? Whether from a historical perspective or from the current plot and information revealed in the book, Xiao Miaochun is a completely tragic character, and he is too much toying with others and Xiao Miaochun. And for the development of the plot, the author will never let the protagonist succeed in his struggle with his father. Then what will happen if he fails? Xiao Mohe and Xiao Miaochun came from the Xiao family in Nanlanling together. It is too ridiculous to be concubines. Is this to imitate Liu Cong or Hou Andu's angry words? I hope the author can take care of himself while being gentler on the tragic figures in history. Remember Chapter 38

Suggestion: It is inconvenient that the protagonist is still young, but as the plot unfolds, the face of the entire era must also be revealed. It cannot be limited to military affairs and events recorded in history books. All aspects such as economy, politics, and culture must be reflected. It is best to dig deeper. After all, this book is not a traditional cool article, and if it is not deep enough, it will be even less competitive.

It is boring and boring. When writing a historical article, be sure not to write it like a running account, straight forward and without suspense. There are three golden chapters. After reading the first chapter, you feel that the characters have no characteristics and personalities. It is like reading a narrative composition. There is a lot of room for improvement. I can only say

Do you insist on writing books now to please yourself? Or to achieve the goal?

I've read more than 400,000 words of Xiangguo's novel, and I think it's okay, with a strong visual sense. Speaking of which, is it possible for this novel Xiangguo to be remade into a hit TV series in the future, like the novel "Celebrating More Than Years", which will become a complete hit across the country? I'm really looking forward to this novel being adapted into a TV series

Since I have no intention of writing a cool novel, why not write it as a double male protagonist, with Hou Andu as the protagonist in the early stage, and write about his battle process, and wait until after his death and Hou Shengbei comes out. Otherwise, it would feel too boring to have only historical materials for the juvenile and youth chapters. Hou Andu, who wins more and loses less, is also a good descriptive material, and the death of father and son can also be connected.