Zhutian: from Hometown Love to Becoming the Master of Emotions

Don't you want to do a more popular drama? Like Tianlong's Qingluo, Madam Ma, Hongmian, Baobao, Daobai, they are enough for you to finish the book without worrying about others watching it🌚

Recently, it's not good to accept Xie Xiaomei. In the author's eyes, Xie Xiaomei is the Xie Xiaomei from Township 1 and Township 2. In the eyes of readers, Xie Xiaomei is Country 56... Xie Xiaomei's character after modern times In order to continue the plot, there is no normal person in Ivory Mountain. For the sake of the plot, the shortcomings of the character are extremely magnified, and they are divorced, married, and divorced. If you are watching After Country 5, then readers will see Xie Xiaomei as a middle-aged woman with heavy makeup. In order to continue the plot and her character is not lovable, she was very strong and kept quarreling with Liu Yishui. In the end, she got divorced and took away all Liu's property. Then it kept pulling At this time, it was written about young Xie Xiaomei, which made the readers think of Liu Yishui's tragic end after marriage, and there was no sense of satisfaction at all. And I think the young Xie Xiaomei's character is just as scheming as the old one And it's different from Siheyuan, where everyone in Siheyuan is a slave to others. Even if the protagonist does something stupid, no one will care if he yells loudly. In Ivory Mountain, little things about relatives and friends are flying all over the place. If something goes wrong, you won't be held responsible? Because of the sense of immersion in the novel, I felt very uncomfortable when I thought about being responsible for the drama of the strong, heavily-made-up middle-aged woman after Township 5 and living the miserable life of Liu Yishui. The Siheyuan next door was very enjoyable to write about Qin Huairu and the sisters. The protagonist and Xiangxiu Xiaomei actually reminded me of the death of a certain Messi Menqing. The eldest wife and Xiao Pan were left alone, and they went outside to mess around with some supporting wives, and finally fell into the hands of Xiao Pan. The protagonist feels like he is recreating the death method of a certain Messi Menqing.

The first part was okay, but when I saw the episode "Severe Winter in Pi Chang Mountain", it suddenly became quite boring and I didn't want to watch it anymore.

This protagonist is too talkative and talks dirty all the time. It can be changed appropriately, otherwise it will look a bit annoying.

Don't overdo some jokes, and if you want to play them, don't play half of them. The first dozen or so pictures always use some unintelligible nicknames for no reason, such as the word "chicken-eating madman". Why don't you bring the chicken-eating madman Qi Santai in the back? I know it is Qi Santai? And it's easy to replace him with some crazy guy? And it's easy to be suspicious of the word count. In short, either don't play it, or add the name, otherwise the author can see for yourself whether the reading is fluent. 😡😡

I don't know why, but I always feel that the character of the protagonist is quite annoying, a bit of a gangster and a scumbag. And it's okay to make jokes, but it's boring to watch them all the time. The opening sentence of country love originally had a small audience, but the author even liked to go crazy when writing it. Friendly advice, get it cut off.

Support the author, as long as he can finish writing, I will subscribe

I really can't afford this money. It's been more than a hundred chapters and I haven't even seen a shadow of Wang Xiaomeng yet. I'm still writing about the heavens. Even if you write well, you can't change the author's constant circling. I really can't afford it. Let's get together and go. Goodbye.

Isn't this a god yet? There is no justice for not becoming a god!

300,000 Words Chapter 137 The first world is not finished yet 😰 I don't dare to read it 🙂

Chapter 150, the first world is not over yet, it is expected to be cool

Come on, author. There are too few articles about hometown love. I think the author writes well.

It's only 360,000 words. Forget it, let's keep it up until it reaches 600,000 words. Then I'll give you a monthly pass.

It was so miserable. I kept trying to order it every day, but the book was gone. . .

Thank God Nong

When will the next book start?🙂

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁

When will the author's next book start?

This is the first time I see such a nb protagonist. Not only does he talk like a two-armed man, he is also a QJ criminal.

Too late

If this book can be more popular in Tomato, at least it will be more satisfying than in Qidian, and it doesn't have to be because the name is Ranren, Qidian Hometown Love, there are too few fan readers like Marshal Ma, it's a pity for your book, if you change it and continue writing it, you can earn more in Tomato!

Eunuch, there are actually people who write about rural love 😊

Do you know why? If you are directly writing a rural love story or a rebirth into the world of rural love, you can write it any way you like, 1 million or 2 million words, after all, there are more than ten of them. But if the title of your book is "All Heavens", then you can't write too much about one world, which will make readers have expectations for the next world. A copy of a world can have up to 100 chapters of functions. 300,000 Words is top-notch. Any more will become boring.

I hope I can test the waters and recommend it.