Douluo: Phoenix Fire Burns the Sky!

Who is better to write about the aborigines, or Ma Hongjun, that fat pig who plays the piano?

You must have read the author of Douluo's Inheritance of God 🤓

Brother, if nothing else, you just let me squirt in the introduction 😰

Dude, have you secretly looked at the fantasy and martial arts section of some website to get a taste of it?

I have to say, it was this incredible introduction that attracted me

The writing is good, but after reading a lot of Douluo fanfics, I don't like Ma Hongjun because it doesn't make sense, so I might as well write it as a time traveler.

Who can't do it if you are reborn? You are reborn as a fat boy 😥

Although Xiao Wu is Tang San's pendant, can Ma Hongjun, a loser, beat her? The martial soul evolved several times and was recommended to the trash who could not pass the first-level divine test. How dare he touch his third brother's wife, who is still a native and has not been time-traveled. It's too fake.

After reading the introduction, I think the author should go to the moderator

It doesn't matter if the protagonist is Ma Hongjun, he is still a native Ma Hongjun. If it is changed to Ma Hongjun, a time traveler, more people will watch it. When I think of Ma Hongjun who used to hang out in a hut and was not taboo on meat and vegetables, I am not interested.

To be honest, the beginning was pretty good. After the protagonist pushed Xiao Wu away, he was killed by Tang San, and then Xiao Wu gave him a complicated look. The subject matter was new enough, but after that, it felt like an ordinary fan fiction routine. Only the first few pictures matched the title, which felt a bit wrong.

When you click on your name, think about it. This is the starting point, not the moderator.

It's really boring to watch a fan with a native as the protagonist😅😅

I don't want to say more, it's been over 80 chapters, I don't even have a third soul ring, and I've eaten so many treasures from heaven and earth.

It started well, but Liu Erlong started to feel vulgar.

The most annoying of the seven monsters is Ma Hongjun. In the original work, it was blurred by love, but I also know that Shrek Village is indispensable for the QJ case.

To be honest, this subject is quite suitable for writing a Seqin novel, but this is not suitable for you.