The Taoist Wields His Sword and Ascends to Immortality
道人仗剑登仙
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 341k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 2y ago
- English
- Request a translation
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Suddenly, an idea popped into my head: the protagonist's magic is the Three Mountains and Five Waters Method, which can be transformed into 365 acupoints. His cheat ability is cultivating with people through karmic connections. That means he can travel throughout the Three Mountains and Five Waters, collecting their essence and filling his acupoints, thus gaining the advantage of the terrain.
How is this any different from a game? You walk along, trigger quests, fight monsters, level up by completing quests, and then change maps after reaching a certain level.
Although some transitions were handled rather awkwardly, it's generally good and worth reading. The author needs to pay more attention to the overall world-building, which I find somewhat vague. Are mortals, warriors, demons, and cultivators clearly separated in this world, or are they a mixed mess? This needs to be clarified. While it's acceptable to imitate the style of "Rotten Chessboard," I also hope you can write something original.
In summary, they're just pretending to be something they're not!
The protagonist is always passively waiting for events to trigger, with almost no initiative. It's fine to watch occasionally while pretending to be a master, but it gets boring and too bland after a while. The daily update time is too late, close to midnight; it is recommended to update it a little earlier.
Golden Finger
This kind of "golden finger" (or "cheat code") is practically a spoiler, making readers lose the desire to continue reading.
Pretending to be profound, yet remaining superficial. Able to read but not deeply.
Keep it up! Traditional fantasy novels require patience, I'm rooting for you!
Your cheat system isn't working. To get big opportunities, you have to constantly court disaster. Besides, even with a purple-tier opportunity, you can only get the Three Mountains and Five Waters Qi Circulation Technique. Even if you got gold-tier opportunities every time, it wouldn't be very useful. This book probably won't be a hit.
A conman can summon the City God with just a few words, without even explaining it?