
Naruto from the Start: The Celestial Master’s Abandoned Disciple Ascends to God King
开局火影,天师弃徒登临神王
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- Completed
- Length
- 714k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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336Chapters
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This thing about Minazuki, it all comes from the dregs of previous fandoms. After all, no one was very strict in the past. There was only the Snow clan in Kirigakure Village, and there was no Minazuki at all.
The writing is okay, but the plot is very messy, a little hard to understand, and the logic is inconsistent. I am 5 years old, I have killed jounin, and I don't train hard, so I just carry out this kind of death mission. I don't quite understand it. Also, aren't they acting as bait when performing the mission? Why did they go to Hinata's side? There is also the point of conflict. Doesn't Hinata have a white eye and won't be exposed? Even if he is not exposed, won't the genjutsu be exposed? Then he kills people directly, so what's the use of pretending?
The writing is quite good, but the title and the content seem to be two different things. Let me go.
Don't dare to kill Tobirama, just lower your head when you see someone else, be cowardly, let Izuna take the lead, and you, Fenghou Qimen Bailian, know that you are going to die, but you still go, the key is to let people set up the formation.
The male protagonist has a very high starting point, but ends up feeling very depressed and without any sense of enjoyment. As a result, the male protagonist is also a headless fly with no charisma.
The writing in the previous life was too awesome, and it seems that the protagonist is a bit tired now.
Even though he is not strong enough, he still spreads the golden light curse to poison people. I am curious how many people withdrew after seeing this.
I didn't read the main text, but it was strange to read the introduction. It's Taoist, it's Hades, it's ninja. Is this kind of fusion really worth watching?
Author, there is no Sui Wuyue in the Snow Clan. Is this surname good? Shui Wu Yue Bai, does that mean he takes his father's surname?
Too useless
Chapter 50 of the main article is not fun at all. Keep pressing.