Douluo: Choose the Holy Spirit Sect Saint at the Beginning

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The novel takes Huo Yuhao's time travel as a starting point, cleverly avoiding some plots in the original work, and embarks on a brand new adventure. In the article, Huo Yuhao's maturity and sobriety are impressive. He is no longer limited to the established route in the original work, but has chosen a more independent and independent path. This change not only makes the story more novel, but also greatly enhances the reader's sense of immersion and reading experience. In addition, the author is also very successful in shaping the protagonist's growth and personality, making the character Huo Yuhao more three-dimensional and full. Although there are many characters and complex relationships in the article, this is also a unique interpretation and expansion of the relationships between the characters in the original work. I hope the author can continue his efforts and create more good works for us!

After reading nearly two hundred chapters, there are some things I can't say but feel unhappy about. First of all, the advantages are that the author's writing style is pretty good, the plot is unconventional, and he is decisive in recruiting girls into the harem. These are all good. But the shortcomings really dissuade people. First of all, this article seems to be a cool article. The protagonist travels through Huo Gua, upgrades and recruits girls along the way, poaches Shrek, builds his own team, etc., But it is actually an abusive article! If you look carefully, you will find that the protagonist of this book has been suffering or on the road to failure. The protagonist himself or the people around him will either suffer losses or be seriously injured due to the protagonist's carelessness, arrogance and other factors, and then the protagonist looks very self-blame. Of course, the author also explained that the protagonist was an ordinary person in his previous life. Although the original plot was used as a reference, the protagonist was not born Zhuge Liang after all, so he could not cover everything and needed to grow up. Okay, I agree with this reason, but it's really hard for the protagonist to blame himself and not remember. He clearly knew that he had caused a big butterfly effect, but he turned a blind eye to it. It happened more than once in Shrek, and he didn't see much progress in the protagonist. For example, when Xuanzi led the team into trouble, it was because of Tang Ya's Gaomi Holy Spirit Cult, but the root cause was that the protagonist intervened and turned Tang Ya into a black man in advance. Another example is the Xingluo Auction. The protagonist was sure in advance that the Snow Emperor embryo would still appear, and it actually did appear. The reason was that "it appeared in the original work." Isn't this nonsense? The Silver Dragon King has summoned all the ferocious beasts for a meeting. When the protagonist goes to the far north, he should have realized that the plot is different from the original work. Why is the Snow Emperor bound to be caught? Although the author did arrange the plot in this way, allowing the protagonist to get the Snow Emperor (although the plot is illogical, the author arranged it this way, so I won't say anything more), the protagonist's thoughts undoubtedly exposed his lack of progress! For another example, the protagonist clearly knew that Wang Dong was in great trouble and could be possessed by the Third Beast at any time. However, in the finals of the Soul Master Competition, the members of the protagonist's group were still injured when Wang Dong asked his father to get on him. The reason why they were only injured was because the protagonist reminded him with his first soul skill. This is ridiculous. First of all, the protagonist has always been very opposed to cheating, and he is very disdainful of Shrek. This was also described when Lin Xi died in the battle, but when the protagonist group encounters a life-and-death crisis, the protagonist will do this? While you despise double-standard dogs, you end up looking like this yourself? And this can be reminded in advance. Tell your team members to be careful when meeting Wang Dong. Anyway, the protagonist has already told his people that he plans to turn around, and everyone knows that Wang Dong is Tang San's daughter. Just give it a heads up and you'll be fine. The result? The protagonist "almost" didn't notice Wang Dong's outburst and reminded his friend in time. He successfully saved his friend's life "only" to seriously injure him... So the deflation the author arranged for the protagonist is really just deflation. It has no other effect except disgusting the readers. Has the protagonist grown? Such as long! Then, what makes people even more unsettled are the other time travellers. All the time travelers are the enemies of the protagonist in the previous life, and there are all kinds of disgusting groups of protagonists, but they are fine, they are alive and kicking, even if the protagonist can kill them instantly. Not to mention anything else, the Time Douluo was almost killed by the protagonist. The protagonist was exiled back to the past, and the major souls in the mental space fell asleep one after another. Then the Time Douluo was killed, but the little brat who asked the Time Douluo to take action was still alive and kicking, a disgusting batch. It can be said that apart from the improvement of the strength of the protagonist group and the acquisition of women, this book is quite clean and tidy. In terms of plot, it is abusing the main text, and it is the author's intentional kind. The protagonist or the protagonist group does not suffer a little loss. Anyway, the protagonist group must suffer, otherwise how to reflect the protagonist's "growth"?

It has to be Shrek. Who would have thought that a small academy could produce two saints, one saint, and a supreme elder lurking in it?

The ending of the fight was unreasonable. Three first-level gods were born in Douluo Continent. Later, God Shura, one of the five god kings, passed down the divine throne. Douluo Continent should become the focus of the God Realm. How could the God Realm Committee allow a death fight between them? Someone should be sent to mediate. Even if the fight is allowed, it should not lead to death, even if it can lead to death (after all, it can Resurrection), nor should we destroy the throne. This is a permanent loss of two first-level gods, the top combat power in the divine world, and where are the original Rakshasa, the original angel, and the gods who were friends with them? Won't they come to help? And today the Rakshasa and the angel were robbed, who knows which god will be robbed next time. How many years have those gods lived? Don't you know this? Could it be that the original Poseidon and the original Shura blocked the connection between the God Realm and the mainland, which was suspected of murdering the gods, and also shattered the divine throne, which was equivalent to completely obliterating the Rakshasa and the angels. Later, according to the law, the original Poseidon, the original Shura and Tang San should all be punished by the gods, let alone hand over the center of the God Realm to Tang San.

The First Saint of the Holy Spirit

There are still people who like Bibi Dong, the white-eyed bitch, so much 😒😒

From the college competition, there are too many clues. The second design is also good. Just add some. The second design is the same as adding water. Add some to this cup and add some to that cup. . It looks uncomfortable

Originally, the protagonist's starting setting basically followed the invincible harem style, but later the author may also feel that there is no plot to write, so he strengthens the enemies, and directly adds time travelers later, and he can kill and run away. Author, you are like a minefield. You are obviously so decisive in the beginning, which is in contrast to the subsequent plot. You can kill the two Dai brothers a long time ago, but you deliberately delay and strengthen them. Anyway, I am speechless.

I can't stand it anymore, it's too poisonous... 🙄 I thought it was a cool article and after reading a few pictures, it was a relaxing article, but later I realized that it was a sad article. If you don't kill the enemy when you encounter him, 🙄 this is the one who killed people in the previous life? Have you never thought that if you had killed those people earlier in your previous life, your loved ones might not have to die? But when you encounter an enemy, you just don't do anything. Why can't a necromancer, a holy dharma god, or a Rakshasa god be able to get the soul or mental power of a Yin person? Do you have to raise a boss here?

It's quite interesting. One Douluo fan author said that without a system or other super powerful plug-ins, in the context of conspiracy theory, it is impossible to defeat Tang San. I wonder if the author can stitch up some cool logic. Let's wait and see.

The protagonist is like a turtle bastard, it's really frustrating to watch! ! !

Long-haired Ning Tian, ​​has the shadow of Ning Rongrong, and the mysterious modeling is ugly.

In the end, I still have to go to Shrek. What's the use of you?

The heroine of this work, after the battle between two gods thousands of years ago, the remaining soul and consciousness are waiting for the destined person to come and inherit the Rakshasa god.

Ma Xiaotao saw the protagonist absorbing resentful spirits because of her duty, and thought that the evil soul master wanted to eliminate the protagonist and make the protagonist "disappear" of her. Although the description is very awkward, it is normal to hate someone who wants to kill you. But Bibi Dong wanted to seize the protagonist, "the sea of ​​spirit almost shattered", "the sickle pierced the chest", but in the end the protagonist became empathetic?

My evaluation is that he is worthy of the name of the Holy Son of the Holy Spirit. He has strange values ​​and a lot of poison.

I thought it was a cool article, but it turned out to be frustrating. There were a lot of surprises when I traveled to the past.

It looks weird. When it's good, the writing is really good. When it's disgusting, it's really uncomfortable. Generally speaking, if you want to be a god, you can check it out.

After browsing around the comment area, they all said that there are many secondary characters, the villains in the supporting roles of the original work are unreasonably enhanced, and there is also this second heroine. I really have no desire to continue reading.

What can I say, the author sometimes writes very well. Just from time to time, he will suddenly give you a big one.

They say Tang San wants to take Huo Yuhao for granted. Have you really seen Dou Er? What to do? If Tang San hadn't had a premonition of the space storm, he was planning to pass the position of God King to Huo Yuhao, and then leave the God Realm with Xiao Wu to explore the universe. How could Huo Yuhao be chosen?

He often makes plays on the original text, and keeps all kinds of little poisons. In the book circle, Shen Nong has tasted even more unnatural poisons, such as repeated illnesses, double standards of intelligence reduction, villains following time travels and torturing the master, etc., It is simply hilarious.

The idea is good, the writing is acceptable, and the character descriptions are good, not like a novice

Going against Tiangang, Jiang Nannan pursues Xu Sanshi. Tang Ya and Beibei are also a couple. It can be seen that the author respects the original CP, so I don't want to read 🙂 and write many female protagonists. Why not accept them all? Bibi Dong can be stuffed in the file and washed away. Isn't Jiang Nannan cleaner than Bibi Dong?

Identified as a pile of pure abuse. I know you like to suppress your desire to rise first, but can you not stop your desire to rise and suppress your desire first? Then the protagonist will never stop feeling suppressed.

I can still read the plot, but the author at the end of each chapter said that it was very interesting. I finally got emotionally involved with the plot, but was suddenly pulled away. The plot was in full swing, and the author was laughing and joking. It felt like people were fighting and dying on the battlefield, and suddenly an anchor popped up to shout "Family members, please click a little red heart to support me". I don't know why my phone did not block the author's comments at the end of the chapter. It was uncomfortable

Why do those who write Douluo fan fiction make the protagonist more disgusting than Tang San? This whole thing is even worse than the original work.

After reading this book, I was curious whether the author really had any intention in writing it? Otherwise, would the plot be so outrageous? Originally, arranging time-travelers other than the protagonist was already a poisonous point, and those time-travelers brought a lot of trouble to the protagonist, and almost caused the protagonist to lose his life. After finally catching it, the protagonist returns home instead? I just want to ask the protagonist if he thinks he can catch them a second time and ensure that the people around him will not die in the meantime? If not, why did you let it go? Doing this is simply treating the safety of those around you as child's play! Secondly, every time the plot tortures the protagonist for the sake of abusing the protagonist, it feels like this is just to make money for the plot. First, Mu En and other extremes attack the protagonist, then the Golden Dragon King comes to the lower realm, and finally the God King of the Tang family arrives. Let's just talk about defeating the Golden Dragon King. It turned out to be Electrolux who summoned the dragon souls to kill the Golden Dragon King? Electrolux hasn't become a god yet. He is so powerful that he can control a bunch of divine beasts and souls? Not to mention that among those dragon souls, there are dragon souls at the level of God Kings. How could a demigod like Electrolux control so many dragon souls? I thought defeating the Golden Dragon King was enough nonsense, but I didn't expect that defeating the Tang Family Divine King would be even more ridiculous. The one who could defeat the Tang Family Divine King was actually the protagonist's one or two year old child? ? When I saw this, I immediately felt that the main character Tuan Bai had practiced so much that he was no better than a child. The plots are more ridiculous than the last, and the plots are more outrageous than the last. There is no bullshit, only more bullshit! I don't even know if the author of this book wrote what he thought about.

Abuse master, harsh words, don't enter if you are not a green-haired turtle