Man Loads up Simulated Magic at Hogwarts

I feel that this book is suitable for beginners or younger readers. The plot is relatively flat, and it feels like it was written by a very young author, because the characters in it interact like children. Hp is also too difficult to write, with a complicated background and history, and a complete magic system. The most difficult thing is that it is a book written by a professional writer with experience and mature writing experience. Write about the life of "children" from the perspective of "adults". The basics of writing this fanfic are a bit poor, but I still need to practice.

I just read the first three chapters. In the Harry Potter world, do you use blue bars to cast spells?

There is a potion of immortality in The Sims

Brother, divide it into sections. No wonder this big page makes people look like Al!

Philosopher's stone, magic lamp to summon elves, sunshine spell, resurrection spell are all very useful.

A few days ago, I saw that the mortal magic of the Elden Circle, the waste stone magic that rejects all, and the Topps stance can be applied to Harry Potter. Those who are rejected by magic also reject magic.

The Sims 4 Magician can summon the souls of the dead, and there is also a way to resurrect the souls

Isn't it Ollivander? Why is it called Overland? Not used to it.

Did the author weaken the content in the simulation? It feels different from when I played

The paragraphing is so bad, the densely packed characters look very uncomfortable.

There are too many emotional dramas, and the writing is redundant. For the magical world view, emotion should not be the core. If the writing is good, you can embellish it in a big plot. If the writing is not good, you can just turn the heroine into a piece of paper, but this will always feel like you are not above or below. I split Lily and James, which is...,,. In fact, exploring the magical world is the core of the Harry Potter series of books, and for a teenage girl, why bother?

Is it Snape's generation? Just when no nose comes out?

After reading five or six chapters, well, I really can't stand this segment. I am used to the concise paragraphs in other novels. Suddenly, it's really uncomfortable to watch your long and long paragraphs.

You always forget to delete the outline at the beginning of the chapter

You can even see The Sims➕Harry Potter

Updates are pretty fast. I've read dozens of chapters and I think it's pretty good.

The author shows the character pictures