Dawn Paradise: I Rely on the Abyss to Become the Highest

Personally, I feel that the writing is good, a bit toxic but acceptable. One chapter a day is not enough to read the update. Two chapters a day may make the book better.

I suggest the author not to target it like this. The impression is really bad. After all, Mosquito didn't write like that, and the Arcane Evermark Star is really not that strong. Mosquito said later, because the void is just some shrimps, and the Supreme People don't care about arcana at all. He only needs the cause and effect of people as powerful as him. On the contrary, he also hopes that more people with the potential to impact the Supreme will appear, and there are important I hope the paradise will not be written too weakly. The Lost Paradise is the boss of the tree in the void. After all, it is the basic rules. I really hope the author will study the combat power carefully. I feel inexplicable about the inexplicable hostility of arcane magic. Also, if I remember correctly, the female spellcaster is at the ninth level. She is really not an expert. Also, he doesn't pay attention to Brother Xiao, the real destroyer, and chases the protagonist every day? I remember that World of Trees was aimed at Brother Xiao. This time, the protagonist won't be chased and beaten all over the world. Is Brother Xiao just invisible?

To be honest, I feel that all the resources the protagonist has used so far are more than all the fan protagonists plus Byakuya, before reaching the seventh level, all the resources combined.

I read the introduction. Is the protagonist of this book going to step on the original protagonist? 🤤, tsk tsk, Bai Ye is the strongest man and is invincible. This is the first time I see that the protagonist of the spin-off novel of Samsara Paradise wants to be the enemy of Su Xiao. The author is so brave.

I feel like the protagonist is obviously very strong based on the statistics but it just doesn't show. A random person can pop up and fight with the protagonist for a long time. Every time I kill someone, I have to write several chapters. I look at the details but I just feel uncomfortable while reading. I feel like the protagonist has never won overwhelmingly.

There's a problem. The protagonist is so badly targeted by arcane magic. Brother Xiao doesn't have this kind of face. And Crow Girl wants five original sin objects to defect. It's very unreasonable. How can you think that the whole world wants the protagonist to die?

The author was stabbed in the back again. The original sin object is the ancient original sin that was killed by the supreme person. Due to its immortality, it gathered in the artifact to form a terrifying object. After a certain period of recuperation, the ancient original sin inside will revive.

After reading more than 400 chapters, I discovered a problem. It is very easy for the author to temporarily increase the combat power of the enemy and increase the difficulty for the protagonist. This is a bit outrageous. For example, the latest world protagonist has a sixth-level protagonist who directly increases his combat power from the beginning of the seventh level to the peak of the seventh level.

The protagonist had to work hard for a long time on an enemy that he could kill in one go. He even talked about practicing techniques. In the end, he was rescued and got angry again.

Can't you understand the economy before writing? Collapsed

Too drunk? First-order water gate? Minato's average attribute is only more than ten points?

This protagonist knows nothing about the original work, nor any plot, not even the pirates and Naruto.

I saw that many book friends felt that Naruto World was toxic, and the writing was somewhat unclear, which made people confused. In this regard, Biscuit accepted the criticisms from the majority of book friends, so last night, I made changes to some of the areas where some book friends had questions, trying to make the book more reasonable and logical. As a newbie author, all Biscuit can do is polish the article carefully, grow slowly, and hone his writing skills! If you still feel there is something wrong after reading the first volume, you are welcome to leave a comment here!

The protagonist of Abyss Properties? I hope the author will keep writing, and I also hope that the protagonist's abilities will be a bit weirder. I really like the weird abilities of characters like Gray Gentleman, Priest, Candle Girl, and Maosheng's Madness.

The protagonist has become a violator. Have you ever thought about how to deal with it in Dawn Paradise? Should he help Shuguang Nuoyan withstand the pressure on Su Xiaoxiao and successfully recover, or should he let it go? In fact, I think it's a bit bad to leave it alone. After all, if Shuguang Paradise can survive, it should be able to provide a lot of resources, and the protagonist is still fair to Shuguang Paradise. Can you tell me your thoughts in advance?

The economic system is outrageous

As a native of the park, Su Xiao knew the plots of the anime, but the protagonist didn't know anything about it and was speechless.

Why does it feel like the protagonist consumes so many resources and fights back and forth with people in the same realm? I don't understand.

I feel that the levels of many people in the original work are a bit low. How can Morey upgrade as fast as the Gray Gentleman, let alone Su Xiao? There is a paragraph at the end of the original work that says Su Xiao levels up quickly. If Morey is happy, he will not be able to meet him right away.

I feel that the writing is very good, but it is not on the list. The value of the books on the Qidian list is getting lower and lower. Either it is illogical, or it is forcibly reducing the intelligence. Even if it is to reduce the intelligence, it is still the protagonist's intelligence that is reduced. There are a lot of poisonous points that cannot be read. What can be read is all mined out slowly 😭

Points of interest: 1. Three points in the eyes. . . Three points. . . Four points. . . Distribution map 2. As long as it is a female, basically describe it in detail Then, in fact, the above is innocuous, it is okay to ignore them But I feel that it is better to keep as few as possible 🙂, it is still a bit tiring to do this all the time In general, as a Samsara Paradise fan, it is a good book

Extensive collection of various contractor codes and abilities, including contractors, hunters, and violators, no restrictions! 🙂

Such a good novel was discontinued because of account hacking. This is the most outrageous reason for discontinuation that I have ever seen in my life 😅😅😅

A good book is nothing. Don't use the purchased account to do important things, like it's time to stop now

Shangxiang, this is the most outrageous reason for discontinuing updates I have ever seen.

The accounts have all been canceled and this book can be moved out of the bookshelf

Alas, it seems that this book will never be updated again in this life 😭😭😭

The author is very good, why hasn't it been updated?

There has been no update for a week. Is it a eunuch?

Can I still contact the author? Wouldn't it be possible if the author could just start a new book and continue writing?