One Piece

The writing is good, but the current two books feel that the three views are inconsistent. It feels like Brother Ming. Because the Celestial Dragons were hurt, he indulged himself to kill people and became another kind of Celestial Dragons.

Past Twin Points is the Grand Line, not the Chambord Islands. The author won't have read One Piece, right? I believe you traveled from the windless zone to the Chambord Islands. How could you reach the Chambord Islands first by taking the Twin Capes?

Vampire fruit negative reviews. Fighting and sucking blood at the same time is like a psychopath with pica, worse than an ordinary animal species, just like Lu Qi, the leopard awakening, although he is a bit picky, he is handsome.

Cao, I was still thinking about who Doria is, and suddenly I realized that this is a king and a hero, which is incredible.

As long as you treat people as human beings, I will support it.

I've read Chapter 65 so far. Why do I feel like it's getting worse as I write more?

The "blackened" and "world-weary" streams of the post-00s generation

Author, is there anything wrong with the protagonist, or what fruit has been chosen for the protagonist?

It's surprisingly good. The settings, plot, and writing are all better than those of other authors. I hope to keep it up. Basically, it's very difficult to make fan fiction non-toxic. Come on, author.

Well written! Voted monthly!

Author, will you accept Gu Yina?

I was persuaded to quit by 26 Zhang and I was speechless. It was so good in front of me.

I read more than 60 chapters in one night and have caught up with the progress. I feel that it is more than food and less than fairy grass. I will vote for you in the latest recommendation vote. First of all, I personally suggest that when reading this book, you must put yourself into the role of the protagonist Kane, and not stand in the perspective of God's vision. This way the reading effect will be better, otherwise you will feel that some of the protagonist's operations are not in line with the settings of the time traveler (similar to refusing Rayleigh's apprenticeship, at the beginning Refusing to eat the Devil Fruit, he was chased by the navy and was unable to fight back, but was rescued by Rayleigh) In fact, many authors have written about the starting point of the enslavement of the Celestial Dragons, but they were all written for the Empress, too deliberate. At least this book did not have too much difficulty in walking because of the Empress.

Why not follow Rayleigh? I don't understand

Which fruit should I eat, or should I follow the domineering kendo style?

Author, in One Piece the surname comes first, so the protagonist's name is Erebus, not Kane.