My Journey to Become a Holy Sword Begins in The Outcast

Let's talk about a fun idea: First use Ruyi to maximize your understanding, integrate the Five Thunder Zhengfa and the Reversal Eight Directions, and then maximize the thunder attribute affinity to create a one-person version of the magnetic field rotation.

The writing is of a genius who is indifferent to emotions, but what is popular nowadays are generally articles that make readers laugh, or in other words, such articles have always been popular. Your book makes people feel uninterested when reading it, just like eating tasteless dry food. Although it is not delicious, it can also be used to satisfy hunger. However, after reading it, it will feel like a waste of time, because you can neither get happiness nor fulfillment in it. It's just that when I read it, it felt like I was eating a balloon to satisfy my hunger. It's empty after deflating. It's not your problem, it's a common problem with this kind of article.

I don't understand. What does it have to do with the Holy Sword?

Come on, it's the eunuch again, alas! Money wasted

Don't write emotional dramas, don't have female protagonists, and the author shouldn't be influenced by some people in the comment section.

I think there are two points in this book that need to be polished. The first point is very important, that is the direction and motivation of the protagonist. This thing is the introduction. Didn't the protagonist see the brave man pulling out the holy sword and that inspired the protagonist's heart? And it also refers to the title of the book. This thing is a bit vague. I don't know what the protagonist's thoughts are. Is practicing for inner peace, and what is the purpose of fighting Odin and so on. This thing needs the author to give a rough and clear direction in the front. After all, practice is not for fighting and immortality. Cultivation is the realization of self-will. The second point is that the talent of Ruyi should be explained to the readers. Ruyi is to make the protagonist happy. It will not affect the protagonist's status without changing the protagonist's free will. For example, 99% of human behavior is dominated by hormones. If you want to change the protagonist's body, it should be without changing the protagonist's psychology. Of course, you can also change it subjectively and forcefully. I feel that if no explanation is given, the protagonist's state of cultivating Qi will make him feel like he has turned into a stone man who can breathe in the energy of heaven and earth. In this case, he will have other emotions. I am afraid that he will be like a machine. He will probably not go home to contact his parents, and he should not have any other desires. At this time, the protagonist is actually dead, so a small explanation is needed for the readers. There are more than 30 chapters left. Why the protagonist's experience and mentality are affected by the appearance of lovers has nothing to do with him, and he doesn't understand it. There is also Blood Sorrow.

I feel that the Xingyue chapter is not good to read. This book is positioned as an invincible text, but it is not flat. As a result, when you see Jin Shining in Xingyue, you will be suppressed. Even if you say that the protagonist suppressed his aura, he was indeed suppressed. To use an analogy, you hide your cultivation with the power of an immortal and go out to play, but a foundation builder comes to you and says, "Let me try whether you are qualified to work for him. Do you think that powerful person will forgive him because he suppressed his aura?" Then you ran to help him inexplicably... After that, it just didn't look good. To be honest, your state at this time was not as good as that of the Dragon Clan. At least at that time, you would really get angry because of other people's offense Personally, I didn't want to read it after seeing this. After a few chapters, I quit after I couldn't stand it.

Byd I thought it turned into a sword at first, but I realized something was wrong when I saw it later

The protagonist's personality has changed too much between the first volume and the second volume. They are basically two people. They are too separated and have no motivation to continue reading.

If the protagonist's life experience and personality have been determined, then the author can no longer change the protagonist. He can only use emergencies to affect the direction of the plot. Of course, he can also use memories to affect the protagonist's style, style and personality. I hope the author won't write his resentment on the protagonist. This is very unprofessional. The personality changes from the first volume to the second volume are too big. They are two people, very separated. I know that the dragon blood has a minimal effect.