Hogwarts and the Secret Master

When I read Chapter 5, how should I put it, the author gave me the impression that only the protagonist had traveled through time, and then suddenly, I felt nothing at all. I knew that the author just wanted to play an Easter egg to pay tribute to the mystery. If it had been said at the beginning, my reaction would not have been so big. In the end, I thought it was a solo. You suddenly said that there are higher-level viewers... I can't accept it. Another point is, does this protagonist come from Mystery One? I personally like second wear, so bye.

This book is incomprehensible. The details are described briefly, and some things are exaggerated. Do you think everyone is interested in mystery? Or do you think you can write the connection between the two books well? All I see is failure! In a word, literary love is too bad! There is only imagination, but no strength!

Hogwarts does not prohibit the use of Apparition, but because of the existence of special magic, wizards cannot use it in Hogwarts and its surrounding areas. The ability of house elves to apparate is a special case.

After reading more than ten chapters, my words and actions are like the reincarnation of Slytherin, and my experience is more Gryffindor than Gryffindor. Sorry, I really don't see any wisdom of Ravenclaw.

Is there anyone who hates twins? They enjoy making fun of and fooling others. They keep talking about this "double talk" which is noisy and annoying.

It was originally good, but it's a pity that I tried to force a twist and turned myself to death in the fifth chapter. It's a pity. All I can say is don't think too much if you don't have the ability.

In general, the original jelly grass cannot be downgraded after Chapter 5.

I hope there won't be a secret invasion. . If the protagonist could become a god, it would be great to be the only god.

It's not like I'm being bullied. Please read the magic text first before writing about HP professors. Innovative transformation is better than messing up...

The most powerful spell to deal with ordinary people is Muggle Dispelling. It is like the Thought Seal (the Thought Seal is a kind of advanced brainwashing. Even the brainwasher himself will not think it is wrong, even if it is wrong.). If developed around this, wizards will be invincible to ordinary people.

The author wrote about the ability of the Secret Master of Sequence 5 of the White Tower Path of the Lord of Mysteries so outrageously. I already discovered the protagonist's ability to learn just by reading Chapter 5: 1) The wrong path is at least Sequence 2 theft (at least Sequence 2 can be used to avoid returning it); 2) The Sun Path is at least Sequence 4 Yang Yan; 3) The Door Path is at least Sequence 5 travel (Sequence 5 is required to achieve accurate positioning). Secret skills teachers can only learn secret skills by in-depth understanding of part of the essence of the ability, so the power of the ability will decrease, and you are not a demigod. The abilities of Sequence 4 and above have been absorbed into divinity and personality, and you can't learn it. Not to mention that the extraordinary people above the demigod in the wrong way have basically been eaten by Amon. Amon will not be kind enough to teach you the ability, unless you go to the old man, but the old man has not shown up since the war of the Four Emperors in the Third Age, and even Amon can't be found.

It's a very novel angle. The protagonist is not a book traveler, so he doesn't know the plot. Many operations can actually be understood from this angle! But the author always spends a lot of ink on other supporting characters. If you don't write about the growth of the three little ones or the growth of the protagonist, you will write about the seventh grade class plot in more than ten chapters. It is really difficult to get involved. If you have a good hand, you will play it to pieces.

I can only say that it is a book that only reached the new book list after writing more than 70 chapters. The writing up to the fifth chapter was very good and interesting. God suddenly appeared in the fifth chapter. I don't know why, but it is screening readers, but overall it is still interesting. If God is changed to have no self-awareness, more people may accept it.

Personally, I think the writing is okay, but there are a few places where it depends on the reader's acceptance. 1. In Chapter 5, a person appears who should know the situation of the protagonist. However, I have seen that this person has not appeared again in Chapter 38. I don't know what foreshadowing the author has laid, but the author himself said that the two generations will not be merged. It depends on whether you can accept it; 2. The protagonist should be a A purely mysterious native came to Harry Potter through time travel, and I don't know the plot; 3. The appearance of the seven rays of light in the spiritual world and Chernobyl in the dream, I personally feel that it is suspicious of the seven gods and mysterious phenomena, as if the author is paving the way for the subsequent development of the protagonist, but I don't know what the author will write later.

Although Rowling's writing about magic is relatively simple, with almost only spells, gestures and emotions, and all the theories and magic applications that need to be known are mentioned in one stroke... But the author can't do this when writing fan fiction, and you still "develop" the high-level abilities in Mystery into magic spells...

How high is the Hermit's upper limit for magic?