I Can Become a God by Sunbathing

I thought it was someone imitating you, but I didn't expect it to be me. Sure enough 6. It's not bad at first, but it's a pity that the exit from the Earth is too fast, and it feels like it doesn't look good after exiting the Earth. I hope this one has a good grasp of the rhythm.

It turns out to be an old setting, no wonder I feel like I saw this introduction a long time ago.

I was submissive before awakening, but after awakening I still have to use my brain to make calculations? Then I didn't wake up in vain?

Skills that are too complex are a taboo, they are easy to write, and the skill is too big, so the author cannot control it. I suggest just writing superhuman skills, which will basically make you invincible. Simple and clear, everyone understands.

In fact, after watching so much, the only feeling I have is that it looks a bit like Murong Fu. . . You know a little bit of everything but are not good at anything. In exchange for so many messy abilities, it is really better to go all the way to the dark side and walk out on the great road to the sky, knowing that you have the ability to upgrade all the abilities. However, in the early stage, it seems that there is really no way to go all the way to the dark side. Moreover, it keeps describing how strong and powerful the family is, but does not increase the upper limit for the protagonist. What is the use of just increasing the width? If you are against a high-level person, you will not be smashed with one punch. . . Anyway, I feel suffocated when I look at it. There is a sword of Damos hanging above my head, and it keeps reminding the reader. . . I'm afraid that readers don't know that the sword is about to fall. It seems okay at first, but it's really not interesting after the novelty is gone.

Yu Yao

Your protagonist has too many superpowers that are so complicated that it feels like it will collapse.

Many readers didn't like the plot of the dungeon map that started in Chapter 55, and they lost a lot of it after reading it (but the collection didn't drop much, which shows that readers still have expectations for this book, but they just don't like the plot of this dungeon, thank you very much). I conducted a deep reflection. The first one should be to destroy the protagonist's calm personality and show off in front of others. The second is to break the potential requirement of "Gou", allowing the protagonist to show many extraordinary powers to others, and the way of showing off is very low-level, making readers lose their sense of security. The third is that the emergence of the Lin family villains was not handled well, so this villain plot line may be cut off. The book I upgraded alone before seemed to start to collapse after the villains were added, so I learned my lesson and tried not to write about villains in the future (it is not that there are no conflicts and villains, but I will not deliberately arrange them). Fortunately, it is only 20,000 words, and it takes place in a dungeon, so I decided to reset the plot, and now half of it has been changed. I won't post new chapters today. I will try to revise the plots of the first ten chapters today so that readers who follow them and collect them will be more satisfied. The collection/purchasing ratio of this book is very good to me. It was seven to one at the best, but now it has dropped to more than ten to one due to the plot of the copy. But the effect of smart push these days is good, I can get two to three hundred collections a day, which is why I chose to reset the dungeon plot instead of cutting the book directly. The recommendation effect has come up and it gives me hope, so I won't cut the book easily. I hope the reset plot will satisfy readers. (The reset has been completed in the early morning of April 15, 2024, and Chapters 54 to 63 have been rewritten)

Wouldn't it be enough to copy two warehouses of gold bars?

Author, are you serious? I didn't know the location of other casinos, so I asked someone I knew to investigate, and I was given 💰10,000