
A Generation of Great Masters Starting from Ip Man
从叶问开始的一代宗师
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 83k Words
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Myriad Worlds
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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37Chapters
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After reading the first few chapters, I felt like I wanted to write about the awakening of a hot-blooded protagonist, but I couldn't see the slightest hint of a time traveler. I had to go through some things before I chose to practice martial arts. It equated learning martial arts with right and wrong. How can I put it, it's a bit awkward. It would be more reasonable if a native had a plug-in.
I don't even have a chapter name, can I still sign a contract?
Update soon, we are here to watch the protagonist practice martial arts, punch to the flesh, and kill until there is a river of blood 🪖🪖🪖
The songs of The Condor Trilogy were written between 1959 and 1961, but The Swordsman was ten years later. Where did you watch The Swordsman in the 1950s?
You are an introvert, unlike me who just rushes in and publishes a book, life or death is uncertain😀Reveal your true colors! 🔍! It's joker🤡! I have collected it. Your works inspire me to code every day and keep updating! Issuing a book recklessly! Look down on life and death!
The protagonist doesn't have past life memories, so he might as well write something original🔨🔨🔨
About this book
In fact, you can guess it just by looking at the label. It is a story about traveling through time and space and becoming a master and martial arts master. It will be similar in nature to a road novel. A universe has its own story, and the protagonist is both their witness and influencer. There are some characters that connect some universes together, but overall the barriers between the universes are quite strong, and I won't say it out loud. Of course, if you have better opinions, you can also mention them below this post.
Ok delete my post. Just don't like 21{"NickName":"Pikachu1573","UserId":332408981}. I've been reading your first book and not saying anything about deleting it I thought you would take the essence and discard the dross.
Write less fighting and set people up
There is no sense of immersion, the overall situation is too flat and too slow.
Didn't the author feel that the protagonist's character was completely inconsistent with that of a great master? The copywriting introduction is also a mess. What kind of style is this? In fact, the biggest problem is that there is no sense of immersion, and the plot does not bring a filter bonus to the novel at all. And I feel like the author doesn't have much confidence to continue writing, so he might as well just give it up.