Strategic Level Evolution

After reading the introduction, I came here to make a few comments. This idea of ​​raising people like pigs is very taken for granted. Many sects don't just lack ordinary handyman outer disciples, what they need is a personal core. A genius who can take the sect to a new level. Moreover, resources are limited unless wars are launched to attack other sects and attack other realms. This introduction simply describes how the only son of the former world's richest man, who was reclusive, started his own business after his family went bankrupt and went into debt. These two words are so true.

The three golden chapters are not very good. Except for the first chapter, the following ten chapters should be written in memories, otherwise it will be Nero. Mainly, your introduction is good, but the protagonist's level system you actually wrote is still an evolver, which has little to do with spells.

Regarding weight, 280 million tons, author, can you invent a weight unit? For example, one thousand tons = one oxen ton, one thousand oxen tons equals one tiger ton, and one thousand tiger tons equals one dragon ton. I'm making this as an analogy. You can come up with a new weight unit yourself. Because, looking at 280 million tons, this number is really too big. Sometimes, I see you writing data and earning trillions of assets. Think about it, a meal usually only costs a few dozen yuan. Thinking of trillions.

I can understand that the author wants to express the crushing power of productivity on the world of immortality. This big man must be an immortal. But is the productivity of the world of cultivating immortals really so backward? Known: In the Nine Heavens Palace, the cultivators fight against the people on earth. Proof: Immortal cultivators can break the void and travel to other worlds. Question: Can mortals in a world of combat power that can shatter the void really only use firewood to cook? For example, is it possible that the dynasty inside could make a prop like a divine fire stick that would ignite at a moment's notice? So I think the big man shouldn't be so surprised.

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The last few chapters have been a bit abstract. I have matched several couplets for one couplet. After waiting for several days, I ended up finishing the couplets and not progressing the plot at all.

If pure and pure magic thinking can all imitate the same, then the world will no longer be full of magic cultivators. When it develops, it will become a mortal breeding farm. Spells will stimulate the population to be harvested regularly. Only a few cubic meters of space are enough for a person to survive the harvest period. With the space of the cave magic weapon in the world of immortality, I dare not imagine what kind of tricks mortals can do.

The beginning is a bit complicated. Let's keep it simple. It's for ordinary people.

It's better to die twice. If you don't know how to write it, don't write it. If you think it's not poisonous enough, you have to describe the debuff specifically. There's also a refreshing half-inch stop to turn it around, right? Then what else do you want to see? If you don't feel happy, you still have to look at the negative impact your family of origin has on your toy children?

In fact, sometimes I feel like complaining about some immortality books. If you are short of geniuses, why don't you just do the same as China's compulsory education, allowing civilians to have more children without taking up many resources.

Dreaming back to ten years ago and writing ten chapters to the couplet

Are you really not the author of 40,000 Years of Cultivation, Wolong Zhenren?

There is no sense of immersion, and for some reason, fighting is never the most important thing in the novel. It would be unwise to write about fighting at the beginning.

You said it very well, so sects, including modern times, have always done this, haha. As for joining a sect, are you sure you are joining a sect and not cannon fodder? Cultivation sects do charity.

The author's effort is really not as good as writing about the death of both the protagonist's parents and forcing him to hold him back and poison him.

It's not impressive, the introduction doesn't highlight it at all. I just want to see the modern magical thinking, the crushing productivity of classical cultivators and immortals, and the contrast between the world. And I feel like your subject matter is very familiar.

The introduction starts to become abstract. The incense of cultivating the world view of immortality is indispensable. With more people and mixed thoughts, they create a Cthulhu cult. A bunch of people use the incense and belief to build a pirated version of Cthulhu and directly destroy the world. There are still a large number of disciples to be recruited, how to solve the problem of resources? Without elite education, how to cultivate successors who are loyal to the sect?