I Asked You to Write a Book, but I Didn't Ask You to Reveal Your Criminal Record!

2.5/5 Hay, the rhythm of the writing is not controlled, and some plots are conjectural and intellectual. It is a typical novel organized only by a certain idea. In addition, in terms of writing style and plot setting, it has the characteristics of the nonsense and running accounts of the wild period of Internet literature.

There is too much flow, and although the subject matter is good, there is too little content to write about. If you give up your brain and read a book, that's fine. New authors can't be too demanding, as long as they don't cut it, they will be successful.

Seeing now, I can summarize the general route of this book. It is to develop the plot based on the route of crime as a career, so as to achieve anti-crime propaganda. So let's make a bold guess about some of the routes the protagonist can take. The first point is that it must be a specific professional crime, because the protagonist needs to experience life, so he must have extraordinary professional skills in that profession. Throughout the previous article, there is theft (the starting point is low, but also attractive, and does not affect the subsequent improvement.) Then there are crooks, killers, hackers, and fraud. The levels are advanced step by step, with each cool point being higher than the last. Secondly, the influence of professional audiences is growing. So how the author can continue this route is a big problem, mainly because the pace is too fast. If the occupations involved in the subsequent route plots are not as good as before, the gap will be huge. Secondly, the audience will become wider and wider. The antique technology I have written so far feels very good. The plots are interspersed, and the guidance of small plots is inserted into the big fraud plot. It can not only lengthen the length but also slow down the pace, and it can also connect the front-end plot to make it feel more exciting. It has a sense of climax and ups and downs. So let's take a guess as to how the subsequent plot will turn out: The career I can think of right now is drug trafficking, or drug making. This profession requires in-depth chemical and biological knowledge, is suitable for the protagonist's life experience, has a wide range of influence, is suitable for anti-drug propaganda, and has a huge plot line. Do you have any other ideas for a new career, please leave a comment

If you write a novel about cheating, you will be interrogated by the police uncle in three rounds? Will all magicians around the world be sentenced to death? Do all the pig-killing butchers around the world have to exterminate nine tribes? After all, you are good at killing pigs with your sword, but are you good at killing people? To put it bluntly, Qian Shu is just a kind of magic. The protagonist didn't go to gather people to gamble, so why should he be detained? It's not a crime to learn a thousand skills or teach a thousand skills, right? It's not illegal, right?

Just like a journal, you enter the system to experience a new life, finish one chapter, and then the system automatically writes a book, and then the stupid protagonist directly publishes the whole book, and then coincidentally, a case is related to him, he is arrested, and he is released. After a few days, he completes the system's equal order task, starts a new life, automatically generates the novel, publishes the whole book, and is arrested again, and the cycle continues.

Deleted the post, right? Quan Ding is not even allowed to say a word? I don't even look at what I've written in the past few days, and give the author a warning before deleting it. I suggest that just a few operations officers take care of the author, and don't let us order books.

Yes, telling the truth does not reduce your intelligence. In the article, I only went to the bureau twice to be summoned for questioning and not to extract a confession. The third time was to assist in the investigation and serve as a consultant as a detective.

I ordered it, but I no longer have the desire to read it... There's nothing there except romance. A bit boring

After 144, it was all about tomb robbing. I was wondering, how much does the author like tomb robbing? Or is it that the author has run out of steam?

It takes me so long to write a book. If I count it out, it seems that I haven't written it for more than two months, and I have written five books. People think you are stupid and have fun, but you are not happy enough. The book is still a mess.

It is obvious that the author has not made sufficient preparations, whether it is the summons to the police station for interrogation at the beginning, or the description of various professions, there are errors and omissions. This idea is really good, but those mistakes and omissions really make the reading experience like eating and being stuffed with shit. In addition, some readers pointed out in the comments that some mistakes and omissions that were not seen are also known... If you want to read it, just throw it away, ignore the details, and don't click on the comments.

The author's protagonists all know that when writing novels, they need to check information and improve their professionalism. But as an author, you don't have to follow these rules, right? I don't understand network attack and defense, and I don't understand organic chemistry. Although I don't know much about the national defense and military industry, I still have a superficial understanding of a small part of the industrial manufacturing process of the national defense and military industry branch.

It's refreshing, but be realistic. You can't be invited by the police to drink tea and investigate every time you experience life and publish a novel. After all, you have been there several times and all the details are clear.

In the weapons competition, ordinary policemen designed modular gun poison spots and publicly broadcast the poison.

Have you read more than 150 chapters? As for the fake part, it looks like it was a tomb robbing later? I stopped following it, and I can understand the routine, but in the city where the protagonist started, ah, he cooperated with the police many times, and made many technical filings, which can be regarded as cooperation with the police, which is very good. As for the fake part, the female police officer at the back told the police in another city that his information was confidential. All I can say is that you can completely trust him. Later, he still appeared as a suspect and was arrested as usual. I felt that these words were all nonsense. Alas, a person's heart is strong and he does not need to prove anything to others. The protagonist has been proving this proof along the way, and that proves this and that.

Has the author never seen a woman?

I can understand why you don't change your career after getting a career. Firstly, it's the theme of this book, and secondly, those careers can only fulfill your ego. But the military industry will not transform? I can not understand. You are full of advanced weapons but do not contribute to the country?

Writing about poison has crossed a red line. The author is so disgraced.

Just a fantasy before death.

Personal opinions, rational discussion, and I'll give it a try 1. The style of writing is still a bit novice 2. The connection between each paragraph is too fast, the rhythm is a bit anxious, and too many places are mentioned in one stroke (but this is an advantage from the perspective of plot advancement) 3. When it is better, there is too little description of the protagonist, and there are too many female supporting roles 4. There is too little description of virtual life, Goldfinger seems to have no sense of existence 5. The numerical design is too confusing. Many times, it relies on official propaganda to achieve the standard 6. The base is too fast, resulting in no "party struggle" to speculate on, yw is just yw, and he is not the only yw. If you put one on base, it is equal to the others, so there can be no emotional description. Modern writing must be 1v1. Of course, it should be the comment area that influenced the author's thoughts Opinions on the female supporting characters Little Charter Woman: I fell in love with it out of nowhere, because how many URLs did you share? Show off your hacking skills? The initial design is quite likable. After all, it's hard not to like a girl who is seductive, shy, and has a good figure. She has appeared a lot, but... It's a bit unfair, the characters are too thin Shen: Are you attracted by the male protagonist's temperament? Although he is the first one to appear, there is not much description of the relationship development with the male protagonist. He got jealous for no reason and started to compete with Xia for sovereignty. The character is also not three-dimensional. I'm convinced, but it's progressing too fast... I originally thought I was going to be an apprentice, but later I turned against my master and turned against my apprentice Yuyou: This is even more inexplicable, I haven't even met him in person, just because the author listened to the advice of his colleagues and made the beauty trap "treasure~" every day? ? ? Really posted. Although she is the first female character to come into contact with the male protagonist. . . To be honest, I think it would be better to set this character as an uncle who lives in the same city as the male protagonist from the beginning. He can take the male protagonist to wash his feet, eat at a food stall, and create a sense of brotherhood.

Writing about drugs makes me not want to read anymore. Goodbye

After reading Chapter 40, I have a feeling that there are too many female characters. You described earlier that the busting author couldn't get in touch with any women. Now that there are so many, it's okay if they are passersby or something. You also described it in more detail, and there are too many pages. More is not too much, the main reason is that it is too long, and if you are really in love with this policewoman, you might as well play another role. Second, there is a very serious problem. You are progressing too fast. You posted the full text at once, and then came up with a similar case and the protagonist was arrested as a suspect. You did this several times in a row. It is boring to write like this. It is too deliberate. I would like to give you some advice: You can't publish all the articles at once, and publish a million-word work at once. This is too outrageous. How can anyone write a book like this? Are you not directly poisoning it? Aren't chapters released regularly now? You can set it to post tens of thousands of words every day. Tens of thousands of words is not much? It's too funny to see you entering the bureau right after posting your work. If you change it to a scheduled release, and then pave the way for the B later, you will have a sense of anticipation, and then when the novel becomes popular, cooperate with the unexpected case, and finally pretend to be a big B. Isn't this great? How can you attract people if your writing is not interesting? You have to keep a good rhythm

I apologize to my grandpa for the bankruptcy of Wan Geng Plan in June. Pull in the cabbage, kick and bend your knees. Bang bang bang! Baicai: I was wrong, I overestimated myself. Actually, 6000~8000 is more suitable for cabbage. By the way, last month I added 2,000 monthly votes, in the form of 10,000 words, for the grandpas, mainly because they are difficult to split. Grandpa, come on, try to earn 4,000 monthly votes this month.

There are more and more bugs in reality

I read some contents of the novel written by the protagonist in this book. The contents are true crimes. How can I put it? . . For example, it is okay to write a thousand skills to reveal the secrets. This is to teach how to see through other people's mistakes. It is a counter-bet and positive energy. . . But how to listen to the dice and how to cut the cards? How to write very specifically?        ，，，，，

The ideas are good, and the writing is okay. At least there are not too many poisonous points. It can be read. If you write more, it may become popular, at least for me, who has been reading books for 7 years. If you can read it, it means it's really good. I don't want other novels to be so addictive that I can't even read them. I hope I will continue to order them all. Come on

I specially rewarded the disciples just for voting. Isn't it too much to reward them? I stayed up until three o'clock last night and finished reading it all at once, but I felt that the updates were not enough. If I didn't update more, I would have to keep it, otherwise it would not be enough

How can I put it this way? There are no major poisonous points, but there are a lot of small ones. The more you watch it, the more uncomfortable it becomes. Not to mention that all of them are female characters. The writing is also very disgusting. My suggestion is that those who have no brains can watch it. Anyone who has any brains will be very uncomfortable.

The biggest advantage of this book so far is that the writing is not wordy, the rhythm is very harmonious, and it is quite refreshing. There is also a humorous plot brewing in the text, which makes the audience of this novel more relevant to the plot. To me, this is indeed a very excellent novel. In addition, after reading the author's acceptance speech, I was quite emotional myself. I still hope that the author can achieve good results. If the first order ratio of 30,000 collections is not too bad, maybe there will be a first order of 5,000 or 6,000, right? As long as you write well, Wan Jun can still touch it. If you can write two million words in the end, the author will basically not worry about making money. After all, most people's monthly income is really around 3k. Of course, I don't know how the author has done with the outline of the subsequent plot. I hope you can go to the next level. Come on ❤️❤️

Can you learn how to make money by reading a novel? Too outrageous.