Simulated Immortal Cultivation: She Wants to Make Progress so Much!

From the introduction, I can't tell what the role of the protagonist Gold Finger is, nor can I tell the protagonist's personality characteristics. At the same time, there is no general description of the background of the world. It makes people confused, and there is not much desire to go in. I suggest the author revise the introduction.

I think it might be better to just remove the male protagonist

Is Dong Xuelian rare in your supporting role?

Since novices can choose anyone to simulate after simulation, why not recruit top talents in various fields? If that doesn't work, you can just meet that medical guru in the hospital. Every time I use a young and beautiful woman as my host, it's too deliberate.

Just stay in a safe place and imitate the pig's feet. If you don't understand someone else's words, then you will follow them without seeing any meaning. If you leave a familiar place, you are really not afraid of danger.

First of all: the system is confusing and there are lots of typos, you must correct them! Immediately! Second: The settings are confusing. One moment he has her or not, the other moment they have both, the next moment it is a choice, the next moment it is all taking. Have you read what you wrote yourself? Third: The plot is confusing and there are no causes or consequences. How did the protagonist get in touch with the heroine? How could he appear at a critical moment? The heroine can't even move her fingers until she reaches the tenth level of Qi training. How does she get in touch with the protagonist? How do you want readers to continue reading these three layers of confusion? It feels like I have read hundreds of words less in each chapter.

Rule 1: The author will not appear in places other than what is said in this chapter Rule 2: It is forbidden to like Dong Xuelian Rule 3: The protagonist will not make jokes, if you see it, please leave a message with me in time Rule 4: The author will reply to all comments, see rule 8 Rule 5: The inexplicable words in this chapter actually have certain rules Rule 6: Character cards will not appear and there are no characters in the book Rule 7: The protagonist is actually very smart Rule 9: This book is a popular work, you will see it everywhere Rule 10: You will not see horror content at night Rule 11: Readers are people with taste and will become more and more lucky

This..., The golden finger ability at the beginning, is bound to a woman who has nothing to do with him. Even though it's a setting, it still feels weird.

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I've read a few chapters and it's quite cute.

A certain character has more likes than some popular book protagonists, seriously?

Why is physical and qi training so messed up?

It's okay as a newcomer, but only for newcomers

Not bad, come on! Keep it up!

Is the plot too little and too weak?

What happened to the author? Why doesn't anyone read this book? Is it because the writing is too exciting? I hope the author can write seriously. I understand the author's difficulties. If it really doesn't work, eunuchs can do it. Come on!

I think I posted a comment once, why is it gone?

Can the author persist? Most of the novels I have added before are about eunuchs. I hope the author can stick to it. As long as it is updated, I will order all of them. This book is still very good. Come on! 😊

He always writes some mentally abnormal things. If you want to become an immortal, you will become an immortal.

It's a pity. I wanted to wait until the book was fatter before reading it, but it ended up being gone The style and writing style of this book are still to my liking, but it's a pity.