I Want Hogwarts: Fantastic Beasts

About seventy chapters later, I suddenly returned to the orphanage, suddenly adopted a boy who looked like a girl, and asked Muggles to take care of magical animals. The book collapsed.

I can only say that it's no wonder that my grades are not good. I won't talk about the big pie in front of me. I can read it and forget about the seventy pictures. I went back to the orphanage for no reason. I met a very feminine-looking man for no reason. I wanted to take him in as an assistant for no reason. He also said that raising magical animals is raising animals, and raising an assistant is raising an assistant. It's all inexplicable in your book. You are sure that Hermione is the heroine. Why don't you stop training her?

The protagonist feels that his IQ is limited... It seems that the author tried very hard to create a smart and alert protagonist, but unfortunately his IQ is not enough.

I love watching it, Hermione + Fantastic Beasts are my favorites 😁

Do magical animals and humans live together as equals? The house elves were won by wizards with their blood and lives. If the wizard loses, then the slave becomes a wizard! ! ! Outrageous

I really can't help but want to complain, why do I have to spend a year with Harry Potter? I really can't figure it out. First of all, the plot of the first grade. Brother, apart from changing the name, are there any differences from the original plot? I don't read fandom to see plagiarism. Then, the Harry Potter fan fiction is either a teacher or a year with Harry. I really want to ask the author, does he not know how to write without leaving the original work? Take a look at Hogwarts Legacy and the movie Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them. One is a story from the late 19th century, and the other is a story from Grindelwald and Dumbledore during World War II. The templates are both here. Can you even copy them? I want to write about the same year. The big event in 1991 happened in the Soviet Union. It happened to take advantage of the chaotic situation of the disintegration of the Soviet Union. Starting from the Soviet magic schools to the Soviet magic world, there is a lot to write about. Or write about Brazil, adjust the year, South America in the 20th century is really interesting, and the official setting is that the magic schools in Central and South America are very good at teaching magical animals and herbalism, and it is not surprising that there are everything in the Amazon rainforest, magical animals and poachers, magical gangs, magical drug lords, righteous strikers, corrupted Ministry of Magic executives, magical version of Fast and Furious. If you don't like fighting and killing, then write about Japan, the Japanese Magical Institute, and write lightly on that day. Moreover, Japan's use of magic wands is very reasonable, and the American black ships are not in vain. It can be said that except for the fact that there are no magic schools in China, only 7 of the 11 magic schools have been announced. Such a large map has to be written focusing on the poor place of Britain.

The writing is very poor and feels like a chronicle. The most important thing is the trace. When I got the wand, I didn't have it. And with the trace, I won't be caught when casting spells in Diagon Alley. Also, the protagonist has not learned it, has never practiced before, and his talent is not that of a chosen one, so he can cast spells without a wand?

Your writing has a frame-jumping aesthetic, always jumping to another scene very abruptly.

HP fandoms have long been written badly. If you want to stand out, you have to take a different approach. I suggest that the heroine be changed to a troll.

Liushui Zhang just copied the plot of the original work and added a little more. The details are not perfect enough and there are too many unreasonable places.

I really like the idea of ​​this book, please update more!

Come on, Fantastic Beasts is good, you can also write more related sub-plots or characters outside of the plot.

How can I put it? The author's plot arrangement is okay, but the reading does not have a sense of substitution. It is like a running account. It is written dryly, with no twists and turns and no echoes. It just writes whatever comes to mind. It feels like dry bread that has been left out all night. Moreover, many sentence fragments are not very smooth to read. The description of people is also dry. Some dialogues are written dryly, and the description of the body without expressions gives people a feeling. The feeling is superficial, and the reaction of the protagonist is too bland, which makes the reader feel very dull, and makes people have no desire to continue reading. After all, everyone has some longing for Hogwarts, but this book gives people the feeling that it is just following the plot, and does not reflect that longing at all. The dull reaction of the protagonist also makes the plot that is actually okay also a bit stiff. It is obvious that it is written by a newcomer, I hope you can keep up the good work.