Kamen Rider: Evolution

I feel that the BOOS scenes are not exciting enough, and the daily writing has no emotional fluctuations. It's like I played the game and turned on the cheats and watched the guide and speedthrough all the way. The cutscenes are all about a jumping mentality.

Let's get rid of the so-called weirdo form. The main thing is that the pig's foot itself is not a weirdo, but steals the weirdo's power, and finally fuses the power, and finally transforms into a Kamen Rider. Since it only requires power, the so-called monster form is not needed at all. Besides, although Kamen Rider's power is the same as that of the enemy and ourselves, it does not mean that the Kamen Rider must have the monster form to be considered the same as the enemy.

I don't really want to have multiple transformers. The protagonist evolves rather than cross-dresses. There are so many bells and whistles. I hope the author doesn't put the cart before the horse.

This protagonist doesn't have any of the spirit of Kamen Rider. He is just an ordinary person who happened to be reborn and got access to the system and gained power through improper means. Taking advantage of Yuri Fukao and being proud of it, sitting back and watching the death of ordinary people, is similar to the values ​​​​of the Reiwa Knights. Whether it is Showa using a mask to cover up the pain, or Heisei saving the world and protecting everyone, the protagonist has nothing. It gives me the feeling that he is just a boring pretender, and the other characters are only created to highlight the difference of the protagonist. In short, Kamen Rider? He doesn't deserve it. He's just a weirdo. As long as his interests are consistent, he can sit back and watch others die or even actively promote them.

It feels good too

Well, you wrote earlier that the general trend of history cannot be changed, but in the latest chapters, the vampires have been massacred in the past, and the whole family is about to be exterminated. Doesn't this count as changing the general trend of history? I forgot about the setting I wrote a few chapters after it was put on the shelf. Can your book really last a long time?

This goes to the W world again! No, I still like Heisei Knights, kiva, 555, AGITO, Kabuto, Kuuga, Ryuki, Sword, and so on! New Knights all sell toys, and it's uncomfortable to watch. The various leather cases feel like they're dangling through a plastic shell! The various weapons are also weird. During the fight, the weapons shake when touched. The fighting skills are also touching. You punch and kick me. Heisei Knight is different. The fighting is skillful, the battle scenes are interesting, and the weapons are more realistic! Moreover, the story has continuous development, concepts, and vivid characters. What a bunch of new knights are they? It's painful to watch! The plot is lame, there is no point in fighting just for the sake of fighting, the story concept is also weird, the story has no linkage, just wandering around the map! Pure cows and horses!

Does the protagonist of this book have the spirit of chivalry, or is he just putting on a mask to show off, or is he a stallion?

Who told you that there are 9 complete eggs in the three eggs? One of the 10 eggs was destroyed. No wonder I look so strange.

I watched seven or eight of them, but they were not interesting. I felt like I was watching Kamen Rider, giving a daughter away and being a nanny.

It really doesn't work. Author, please go get a better voice input. Your writing is too bad, it's not fluent at all, let alone poisonous, it looks uncomfortable. I really recommend you to get a voice input. It's easier to type quickly, and it's a savior for writers like you who have bad writing and fluent writing, unless you have an accent or stutter, and you can't even speak clearly. Otherwise, voice input should be able to save you (ps: If even voice input can't save you, then I can only advise you to give up writing novels)

The protagonist now feels like a contemporary keyboard warrior.

I saw a new one... I feel like the main character is not quite right. Please read it again, otherwise I will abandon the book.

The main reason is that the protagonist is too disconnected. I couldn't bear to give up after reading Chapter 155, and the timeline is so confusing that I don't know how long the protagonist has been in the same world. I tolerated the chaos in the writing in the early stage, but it was really too messy later 1. In Chapter 3, it was said that the protagonist has an ordinary young face, but it turns out that when getting along with Yuri, he can pretend to be young and show off his face (who would guard against a child) (this sentence is really written in the novel). Then in the W world, others said how could there be such a handsome person, so who is the protagonist? Face, there is no explanation that evolution will affect appearance 2. In the first world kiva, the protagonist got Yuri pregnant and traveled across the world in order to solve the problems in the body. It is understandable, but didn't it say that when the child was born, he had to go back to see it? I didn't see the protagonist going back, but went to the next world to save the world. He only said that he stayed in the w world for a long time, but he didn't say how long. 3. The most poisonous thing is Chapter 155. You want to say that the protagonist is selfish. He used many people for power in the early stage of W. Later, it was said that it was to distinguish the zerg invasion of the world of W. He did not hesitate to use his life and his own power to print notes to give power to all ordinary people in the city. If you are really selfish, don't write like this. Just write and change the map with your own people after you get the power. , And also added a character to the protagonist (it is always said that when encountering any danger, the protagonist must put his own life safety first), knowing that the enemy is coming, but ended up crippling himself in order to print the notes before the battle 4. There is still such a bad routine in 2025 (the protagonist travels through the world due to various serious disabilities and energy chaos in the body)

Megumi is older than Benito, and Megumi is Yuri's daughter. Maya was pregnant with Benito at the end of TV before Benito died, and Yuri was not pregnant. Where did this Megumi come from?

In fact, it doesn't make much sense. The definition of weirdo is too vague. Like the early Kuuga of Yajito, they said they were knights, but they can also be said to be weirdos. Their powers are all the same. Yajitu's power comes from the White God, the angel's power comes from the Black God, and the power of the Black God and the White God are from the same source. Not to mention Kuroga's power and Gurungi, both come from meteorites, and they all evolved from humans with belts. And compared to humans in the world of knights, there is not much difference between knights and weirdos! As for the new knights that appear later, such as Zero and One Extreme Fox, in the end the villains all become the same knights, and it doesn't make much sense to define them as weirdos.

It looks a bit uncoordinated to me. Some things become other things as I write them. It feels like they have been deleted.

Listening to books 141 and 142 service abnormality, others can listen to books normally

Still a seedling If you like Kamen Rider stories, you can support me I wish you, seniors, better and better, and more and more starting point tokusatsu stories

Yeah! The protagonist finally comes to the world of armor

Can you answer the previous question?

I have read more than 150 chapters, and I feel like this kind of tokusatsu fanfic, especially if it involves multiple worlds and multiple universes, children will find it very boring. The writing is not bad.

By the way, the author is really perseverant. I feel that no one is reading it, but he still insists on writing. You really like knights. Best wishes.