Cultivation of Immortals: I Have a Magic Weapon to Command Demons

Why does the setting feel a bit familiar?

When I saw the latest chapter, I wrote about why I suddenly became an undercover agent😢

1. Why not contract Zhu Yi? The main reason is that the contract has "supernatural power", and it must be a powerful magical power. It is not good to just use the excuse that you have already recognized the Lord. Is there any reason to bring it up early? It's uncomfortable to delay. 2. On the Monster Mountain, it was said that we wanted to catch a few monsters with special and strange abilities, but I didn't mention it later. In the article, it is best to show that the protagonist does it, rather than wanting to do it. Otherwise, the sudden appearance later will be very abrupt. It would be better if you write a few as examples and hide them (you can edit them at any time if you think of your abilities later). 3 And the protagonist's golden finger requires more contracts and real-time combat power. Instead of training old players. I see that the fish demon has a lot of ink and is sworn to the little dragon. Do I have to keep using it? It's best to get a few that are about the same strength as the protagonist (such as the fish demon when killing the dragon, and the tortoise now). Even if you are not very obedient, you can still be used as cannon fodder. Or you can hide your methods (such as learning a demon-training spell or buying a magic weapon), then control two or three demon beasts, and make a promise to release them after a few years. Otherwise, the monster's strength will increase too slowly. And if you spend a lot of resources to upgrade them, they will become nannies.

Pursuing reading is really important. It is related to whether a new book can be written. I hope book friends who like this book can follow it every day. In fact, just read it to the last chapter every day! Please, following up is so important for new books!

The book is okay, but I'm afraid the author can't keep writing. Come on, if there are more than 300 chapters, I'll give you some monthly tickets.

There are only eighteen demon kings to build the foundation, and the layout is too small.

If you have any good suggestions or areas you want the author to improve, you can leave a message below. As long as it is interesting and reasonable, the author will adopt it!

What is this egg? Update soon. Don't be the heir lost by a big boss again. It's better to raise it as a slave than to raise a father. Some pet stories raise pets like their father. Go to the danger yourself and eat the treasured pet.

The author's writing style is a bit crafty and stiff, not natural and smooth enough. I feel that words like "its people" and "its people" are used too often and are very redundant.

This is my first investment, author, come on!

It's a little bit southern clam. Is it useless to set flesh and blood in this book?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Three book friends, author, how did you get your monthly pass?