Douluo: This Soul Master Is Very Good at Eating.

I've only read a few chapters and this protagonist is so disgusting to me.

As soon as I joined Shrek, I got used to Ning Rongrong's eldest temper, Dai Mubai's provocation, Ma Hongjun's bad mouth, etc. The protagonist has a good temper and doesn't say any harsh words. He competes with Dai Mubai and gently advises Ning Rongrong, but Ma Hongjun doesn't pay attention to it. I want to see a river of blood! Rather than a gentle and polite protagonist

I don't understand why I went to Shrek, it was useless, and I was stared at by Tang Hao. Wouldn't it be better to go directly to Tiandou City? If you cut off Dugu Yan, there will be immortal grass.

Don't you cry to death after not hearing anything from Jack for five years? After leaving the Star Forest, there should be an over-the-top plot to flesh out the character. Directly arranging Shrek is very stiff and gives people the impression that you are rushing to the schedule. Don't be so anxious and write it in detail according to the outline. The advantage of fan fiction is that you don't need to portray the personality of the supporting characters, you should portray your own protagonist.

If you are a civilian genius, your best choice is to join the Spirit Hall. Or hook up with Ning Rongrong. Without any background, you defy the rules of an empire. Even if Dai Mubai is given up, he must be monitored by people from the Star Luo Empire before the victory is over with Davis. When you want to destroy the relationship between the two of you, you will only die. So how is it possible that this protagonist is still alive?

The poison is amplified at the beginning, the twin spirits and the main body are not even at level one even if they are eliminated.

How can twin martial souls have level one soul power? How can you try to awaken twin martial souls at level one? It is impossible for a powerful martial soul to have a soul power that is too low, otherwise it will degrade.

The potential of the twin martial arts has been known to Tang Hao. In addition, you have conflicts with Tang Sanyu and Xiaogang. It is already a big threat. Don't think that Tang Hao will keep you, and Qibao will not destroy you. The normal and real world is 100% dead, unless it is written without brains.

The subject matter is very good, but it's a pity. The main body martial spirit plus weapon martial spirit is a very good subject matter, but it is very confusing. Since you want to rebel against the Tang Dynasty, you should stick to this position. But, I don't understand what you wrote. In fact, it started when you took Tang Hao to the Ice and Fire Lianyi Eye Opener. From the beginning, I knew you were bad at writing. Tang Hao is not a fool. He can definitely tell the difference between a good thing and a bad thing. You dig up the fairy grass, and after finishing the fairy grass catalog, it is still Tang San's. It's so confusing Judging from your attitude towards Yu and Tang San, you undoubtedly want to leave Tang San. Opposite, but looking at your plot, I am very confused, not to mention it is for the fairy grass, everyone knows that the fairy grass can just go to Dugubo and tell Dugubo the password The author had better explain this split plot as soon as possible, otherwise it will affect the score 😟 As an old bookworm, I rarely post long comments, but I am really optimistic about the theme of the body and the stick I hope this book will get better and better.

Don't avoid the little Yakuza when it's weak in the early stage. Anyone who jumped in front of him would either be killed by a hidden weapon or crushed to death by a mouse. In the early stage, the protagonist, a grassroots character, would be smarter to avoid the little brat. Mindless jumping is simply putting life and death in a mouse's thoughts.

It is natural for the time traveler to be hostile to Tang San. Unless they never interact with them, they are bound to be hostile. Once they interact, who knows when they offend Tang San, they will be killed. If you accidentally hurt Xiao Wu who likes to rush in the front during a spirit fight or competition, you will definitely be retaliated by Tang San. If you inadvertently reveal your evaluation of Yu Xiaogang's theory, Tang San will definitely turn against you and make you apologize. Unless like the other six monsters, they have lost their personality and become Tang San's pendant. He is the leader.

I just told someone that I was a good friend with my daughter, and then I confirmed my relationship with Ning Nongnong, but it was ruined by my father's showdown. And you really think that Tang Hao is a good guy and won't kill you. It's very brainless.

Twin martial souls, innate soul power level 1? ? ?

Damn Tang San, Yu Xiaogang and Tang Hao, there is no need to create a conflict and then go against them. As a time traveler, Tang San, Tang Hao, Yu Xiaogang and others are the sure killers to bring peace to the mainland.

Such a talented grassroots soul master. Either find a supporter or find a lover or two. Like a thousand Renxue Duguyan. Or hide away after planning some opportunities. Use prophetic plots to avoid dangerous people or things before you lack the ability to protect yourself. Remote places in coastal areas like Hanhai City are the best places for development. Far from the center of the continent. There are also cultivation resources such as whale glue and various sea soul beasts. Douyi Dahai has not yet been developed. The products are much richer than those on the mainland. Those with small families can also seek refuge and development on offshore islands. Otherwise, a person with extraordinary beauty will have no choice but to be beheaded and treated as dogs by his subordinates. Now the mainland is turbulent. There is no way to reduce the dimension of Titled Douluo🤒

I really don't understand why the twin martial souls, the iron rod and the body, need to cultivate the body first. Obviously, you can cultivate the iron rod first. If you have the original martial soul, you can also have three thousand-year soul rings. Isn't it bad that all the soul rings of the original martial soul are more than 100,000 years old?

In the original Shrek, 14 of the more than 60 students graduated. They were either dead or did not meet the graduation requirements. I feel that the soul rings of the previous students were probably randomly selected by the teacher. It would be fine if they had them. Otherwise, it cannot be explained that they could not even reach level 18 in 8 years. The last seven monsters did not dare to fool around. Every one of them was either a prince, noble, or the third sect, or the adopted son of the dean. There was no one without background.

In a situation like yours, you should immediately show off with Qian Renxue and join the Wuhun Palace. Otherwise, you will die without knowing how. If you write without thinking, you will not die. You will die normally.

The protagonist's description of the soul ring is too little! I can't stand the protagonist licking Tang San!

I hate Xiao Yan more than Tang San. Most people hate Tang San for the following reasons: 1. Tang San secretly learned the Tang Sect's Xuantian Kung Fu (Justification: Tang San was an outer sect disciple. If he didn't secretly learn the Tang Sect's secret skills, he would have no chance to get ahead in his life. He might be working for the inner sect disciples until his death. Tang San secretly learned the secrets, but I think it was a sign of bravery.) 2. Tang San was called Big Brother when he was not strong, and Mu Bai when he was strong. Tang San did not take his master Yu Xiaogang to the divine world. (Justification: When you are weak, you call me Big Brother, and when you are strong, you call me Mubai. It is normal. At least we are relatively close to each other. We are not called Dai Mubai. This is human nature. Different statuses have different names. As for not letting Yu Xiaogang go to the divine world, I just want to say that there are a few who have succeeded now. I went home and saw the primary school teacher who taught me how to study. Tang San had done very well. Yu Xiaogang broke through level 30, won the honor of being the best teacher in the mainland, fell in love with Liu Erlong, and became the master of the Blue Lightning Tyrannosaurus. These things didn't happen. Tang San, which one did he accomplish? ? ) 3. After Tang San obtained the Killing God Domain, he destroyed the Killing City (Justification: People are selfish. Since they have gained benefits, of course they cannot let another person gain the same benefits through this place. If you have it, that's it, and if others get it, then your sins over the years will be in vain. If you don't understand, you can think of it like this, do you want to be the only number one in the entire school, or do you want to be number one with a dozen people? Secondly, being in the Killing City is equivalent to Tang San suffering in a German concentration camp during World War II. Everyone will go crazy. Of course he wants to destroy that place after coming out) 4. Split his own daughter's soul into two halves and then combine them into one person, Tang Wutong (defense: it is divided into two people, that's right. In order to fulfill her ten thousand year plan, didn't they get them together again in the end? And wasn't this also for Tang Wutong to obtain the fortune of the auspicious beast? There must be some people here who are more competitive, but this is a fantasy novel. Some protagonists must practice some avatars, such as transforming into three pure beings in one breath. Aren't these secret techniques also divided? Split your own soul? In short, this is indeed a problem, but please remember that this is a fantasy novel, not the real world) 5. Treat your son-in-law like a trained dog (Defense: Ancient emperors probably treated their consorts no better than this. Before Huo Yuhao became a god, he believed As a commoner, Tang Wutong's status as a god king or the daughter of a dual-level god is comparable to that. How do you feel when your father's little cotton-padded jacket was stolen by another man? Moreover, Tang San's treatment of Huo Yuhao was far from being a good one. At most, he was just trying to protect his daughter so that Huo Yuhao wouldn't be killed in the future.)

Just think of a way to bring Ning Nongnong and Zhu Zhuqing to your own team to compete. I don't want to watch Qu Wen. I already have Qibao and Qian Renxue, and I'm still scared of them. Star Empire

There are too many relationships, and this is an author who lacks love.

Bibi Dong was written so well. Bibi Dong has been crazy since she swallowed Qian Xunji. She wants to completely destroy Wuhun Palace.

Author, I feel that it would be better for the heroine to not want Ning Rongrong. Her father is an old fox who does everything for the benefit of the sect. It is very annoying to deal with such a person. Besides, what kind of support does a real man need?

Personally, I think it's okay. I'm relatively neutral. The only drawback is that I'm too poor and I can only give an initial order to encourage me.

I can't see the hair I'm looking at.

I saw Chapter 11, it was pretty good, I recommend it.

The battle in the Soul Master Competition was so poorly written that it ended anticlimactically.