Douluo: Sword Immortal from Another World

It is recommended not to read the comment section when reading the book. A bunch of people who have never read the original work are here to talk about the character design and what is wrong with it. It is just a bunch of clouds. I have only read the deleted version of the book. It was not deleted before when I wrote Douluo Dalu in Sugar Add Three Spoons. But if you read it carefully, you will feel that the fan writing is good and the original work is even more outrageous.

Dear author, I haven't eaten the fire vegetables and ice horn grass from Binghuo Liangyiyan. When do you plan to go back to eat them? Don't you want the Ice and Fire Alchemy Body and the sword with ice and fire attributes? If you don't want to write about the ice and fire sword, you can also say that the metal property of the sword itself is used as the "forging hammer/whetstone" with the ice and fire properties to become the "ultimate gold plus", because this can also be regarded as the "alchemy body of ice and fire". Although eating metal strengthens it, the properties of different metals should be different. Chrysanthemums should not be fully integrated into martial arts. Eating ice and gunpowder can also be used to smelt and neutralize the properties of metals. It can even be made with the sword itself as the main one, with chrysanthemums as the secondary, and ice and fire as the auxiliary. It can also be used to upgrade the field, and even use this as a guideline. Increase the upper limit of the first ring to 100,000 years/million years (it's the upper limit, the original book said that ice and gunpowder can only be fully digested at level 70) and then let the protagonist eat metal, and the remaining herbal energy can also be used to smelt and purify the metal essence This plot should allow the protagonist to eat metal until he can go no further, and then knead medicine to make the "ultimate gold plus version"🤤. We think we can do this when we finish the preliminaries and prepare to go to the individual competition (knockout). It just happened that when the protagonist reaches level 50, he feels that the upper limit of the first level has been reached, and the metal properties are mixed. Then he eats grass and soaks in hot springs to refine the ultimate gold, and then eats metal to improve the first level (you don't have to go to 100,000 years all at once, there are still 90,000 years between 10,000 years and 100,000 years) and the attributes of ultimate gold, and finally become "extreme gold p" lus" (I have trouble coming up with the name for Ultimate Gold Plus. Of course, talented book friends are welcome to name it) 😊 Can the author take a look? This kind of small plot should not affect the outline, and it can also cheat the protagonist. After all, the original Ultimate Gold is still a bit crotch-stretching, and if it doesn't work in the individual competition, it can be changed to the time just after finishing the game and preparing to go to the Killing City. Also, even if you can't kill Tang San when you go to the killing capital, you can still disable his hands and feet, etc. This book is good because it has a blast against San Cute and Yuxiao🐶 in the early stages. Good ideas must be followed through to the end. I hope the author can adopt it, and we are looking forward to the follow-up🤤.

The author's mentality needs to change slowly. The protagonist's mentality changes from a modern social animal to one who awakens his soul and wants to be a gangster. Later, he discovers that the master does not actually care whether he is alive or not to fight for opportunities for himself. The mentality will change later. Please read on. The main reason is that the author's writing is not clear enough in character portrayal. Let's make progress together.

Damn, I was so disgusted today. There is a new book about Douluo fanfiction. What do you call the one who resurrected Qian Renxue and Dou Er? In this day and age, there are still cuckold stories. The heroine Qian Renxue was fucked by three or four men, and then she gave birth to a son. The protagonist resurrects Qian Renxue and slowly begins to fall in love. Really disgusting

It seems that they have forgotten that Xiao Wu is the biggest opportunity. As a hundred thousand year old spirit beast, its combat power cannot match that of a hundred thousand year old spirit beast, but it can explode a hundred thousand year old spirit bone, the spirit ring is wasted, and it is still full of rabbit meat. It just wants to take advantage of Tang San to get the spirit ring. When Tang Hao is not around, kill him and run away immediately.

Yes, as the sixth child, there was a split. Four of Shrek's most disgusting ones left. Oscar, Ning Rongrong, and Zhu Zhuqing stayed. Meng Yiran, who absorbed the external soul bone, and Meng Yiran, who absorbed the Eight Spider Spears, was no less talented than the Shrek Seven Monsters. I feel like no one in Shrek Academy would care about Yu Xiaogang if it weren't for Flanders' sake.

The writing is okay for newcomers, not too brainless, and can be watched. Then I ran away from the multi-heroine harem.

Seriously, the best choice for the protagonist with such a martial spirit and this kind of soul power is to hang out with Tang San. It doesn't matter if he kneels down and kowtows to Yu Xiaogang. To be honest, if the protagonist does this, not only will I not look down on him, but I will also admire him. Don't care about other people's eyes and opinions. Author, you just care too much about the readers' opinions. Just write your own story! The poor take care of themselves, while the prosperous help the world. You yourself are in danger, what else do you want to consider? Don't worry about how to mix, first mix everything you can, and then talk about your position? What position? The position of labor and management has always been that I have to worry about others dying, right? Do you care about others but who care about yourself? Don't take yourself too seriously

Author, don't worry about other people's thoughts. What are you telling me about the fantasy world? Hypocritical justice is not ridiculous. In the fantasy world, strength is respected and force is king. You can only think about these things if you have strength. You have no strength, and all you think about is that you can only live and become stronger, so don't tell me about hypocrisy and justice. The fantasy world only pays attention to strength. Secondly, after strength is the so-called other things.

Using my imagination, I made a gun at the beginning. When Tang San went to get the first soul ring, he asked Xiao Wu to come out and kill the rabbit to get the bones. When he got to the back of the Holy Soul Village, he ate the Blue Silver Emperor and absorbed the Blue Silver Soul Bone so that even if he was born at the first level, it would not be a problem. If the spirit is directly evolved from Blue Silver Grass into the Blue Silver Emperor, which eliminates the possibility of Tang San's spirit evolution, the first spirit ring can still be obtained from the Blue Silver Forest, and you can also see the endurance of your spirit ring. How to start with two hundred thousand year spirit bones, directly push to level 20.

Please forgive me, I have never written a book, so what I wrote and signed was just an accident. If there are any mistakes, everyone will actively point out and patch them. If there are bugs somewhere, please forgive me. Thank you for your comments, recommendations, and monthly votes.

By Chapter 35, the biggest poisonous point of this book is that Ma Hongjun followed the master and left Shrek. In Ma Hongjun's eyes, the master was nothing. It can also be seen from the original work that Ma Hongjun respects Fred very much, okay?

Ji Juechen: Are you... Following me? The martial soul sword has innate soul power level three, and is titled Sword Crazy 😰

There's something really wrong with this protagonist's outlook on life.

After watching several Douluo fanfics, I feel like a loser

A garbage novel, purely dark for the sake of being dark, with too much psychological drama for the protagonist.

It's really rubbish. It's too poisonous. My innate soul power was level 3. After practicing for half a year, it became level 8. I'm trying to persuade you to quit.

Douluo Continent is simply a paradise for immortal cultivators. It is full of centuries-old and thousand-year-old elixirs (plant-based soul beasts), various mineral veins (such as heavy silver), and the system is too tight. There are no strong enemies (unless the gods lower the world, but there is nothing to be afraid of)

I won't be able to hold on until chapter 10. I'll just say one thing. The protagonist is born with level 3, and he improves to level 7 in a year.

As expected, the characters of Douluo's protagonists are not all that good, including those of fellow fans.

Extremely poisonous, the main character is ten times more disgusting than Tang San. He is both fake and stupid at the same time. He is just black for the sake of being black.

After only reading three chapters, I knew there was a reason for my poor grades, and that this author would never be able to write a good book in his life.

To be honest, it's a bit illogical. After reading more than 20 chapters, I can't stand it anymore. Although Tang San has double standards, he is not that unbearable. The protagonist has problems with his outlook on life. The writing is too vicious

I really want to keep watching, but I really can't

Uh... I can only say... The language is fluent! It's better than those people who can't figure out the person "self" in one sentence... There's nothing wrong with being a black Douluo now... I'm also a black person! But while the protagonist is taking the written test of Master Tang San, he is even more disgusting than himself... Ingratitude is so easy to come by... He is simply not a human being...

Who are the heroines? If there is no cat and Rong, I will watch it.

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

This book feels a bit like the book that didn't have the soul ring to cut down Douluo in the early stage. In the middle stage, it was a failure to read the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect, and it felt seriously fragmented. Since the protagonist has chosen to join Shrek, he can simply lick it three times to get it, but the design in the early stage was contradictory and inconsistent with the master, which overall led to a chaotic camp. The Qibao Glazed Sect is on the same line as Tang San. The protagonist licking Qibao is equivalent to licking Tang San. The plot is inconsistent.

A good waste material counterattack flow, and finally turned into a harem flow, and quit

This book is pretty good, sixty points. There is no disgusting system, and every opportunity is used to arrange the plot. If the author of a book is willing to use his brain instead of the system, it is highly worthy of recognition. Think of those top online books where they will reasonably arrange the protagonist's abilities instead of arranging the system. The bad thing is that there are too many female protagonists. It's okay to have more female protagonists but not too many. What's cool about the story is that the plot is about the growth of the protagonist and showing off, rather than constantly recruiting girls.